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Personally, I have a few things stick out. Mainly, those noses. They don't look natural. I hope you don't take this as an insult, but the poses need some work. They're not bad, but they don't look natural either. I think its the thigh gap / angle of the legs. Rika's jeans. The flat line across the ...

- The clothes (and if they look correct.) I would need context to be able to critique if the clothes are "correct". What is the tone/setting/genre of your VN? - The colour of the clothes (if you think they don't clash.) I'm assuming your color palette is very muted, so I suggest Rika's li...

I was hooked from the premise, especially because of the presence of Bailey (YAY parents in stories! I hope he doesn't die or something), but then I also got interested in the part where you can decide Sage's personality. To clear things up, is this Sage's pov? :'o The game, I mean. Do we decide as...

Hah, you just posted the expressions of the character I wanted to see the most! =) I really like the art style that you guys use for your game. I'm really looking forward to it because I love mystery games, especially ones with good twists which this one surely will have. Can't wait for the demo! ^-^

Updates: 03.07.2017: http://i.imgur.com/XUdYr78.png Little WiP of Luc as a child. =) The game will show Luc and Sage as children as well as adults. I hope that even through this pretty barebones WiP you can see what kind of visual style the game will have. 04.07.2017 http://i.imgur.com/A6OP0do.png ...

http://i.imgur.com/qUexXLF.png Plot For what are feathers, if not tools that write history. Bailey, a mechanic in the countryside finds a young angel who has fallen from Heaven in his fields. His child, Sage, and the boy quickly become friends, though it is evident that Luc will never fly again. It...

Hey there! I am currently working on a visual novel where the main focus is motorbike racing. The characters all have pretty hard shadows since I can work better with hard shading in action scenes. I'm mostly looking for opinions regarding: - The clothes (and if they look correct.) - The colour of t...

@daikiraikimi: Thank you very much! I hope you will enjoy the route this game takes! @Godline: Thank you so much! I'm working hard on it~ Didn't manage to finish what I wanted, sadly, since work got in the way. I DID manage to draw Akira's Jacket though, so at least there's that. Next up will be Dai...

Ever since I broke my right wrist as a child I have had small problems using my hand for a long time without breaks in between. Six hour exams back in school were hell on earth for me and left me with a lasting pain in my wrist for the next two hours. So if I'm doing long work (be it writing, drawin...

Wow, amazing improvement! I love that your style, btw. It is very...glowy, for lack of a better word. Will you still use the former CG? It could easily be a for a scene that leads to the actual fistfight depicted in the new version. I really like the way you shade your characters. It's all so colour...

... I had to deal with incredibly exhausting sleep problems about half a year ago. Took me ages until I would fall asleep. (I'm talking four to five hours.) So I can somewhat understand your problematic and sad situation. What helped me was to do some calm Yoga exercises for around 30 minutes befor...

Aaand Akira is finished! =) Ezra's also beginning to look good, while Daisuke gives me a bit of a headache regarding his outfit. I should manage to finish the first pose with one outfit for every main character this week! =) It makes me really excited, since it means I will be able to move this topi...

Small update once more! Currently working on the first scene of the game and writing down ideas for how I want the GUI to look. I've also been working on colouring Akira and Daisuke some more - Akira is pretty much done, except for the jacket. Daisuke is still missing his legs, hah. I'm trying to fi...

Wonderful use of colours. It's stunningly colourful. Your characters look as colourful as jungle plants without them looking too vibrant, it's amazing! Your skin tones especially seem to glow, which is something that I really can't do myself. Overall great work, have to keep you in mind if I ever ne...

Thank you very much, FluffyCakeFactory! Since I've been sick on and off the last few days I've only been able to continue drawing today. Good news though, the first (of two) poses for Nothing is finished! She can show quite the arrangement of emotions due to different mouth, 'eyebrow' and tail shape...