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I absolutely LOVE the way you drew all of the characters (ahh Feliciano is SO CUTE and Matthew looks great! Well, all of them do, but those two are my favourites XD) The sound effects all fit perfectly, especially the beginning! And when Matthew lost his glasses and the BG went fuzzy, that was reall...

No problem at all! :) Hm, here's one I've used in the past. There are two parts to it I'm pretty sure (the 2nd can be found in the description of the first) and to see them you need to click the download option in case you didn't know. Hopefully it'll help a little :) http://crysa.deviantart.com/art...

The chibi Valoria looks sooooo cute and pretty!!! XD
I really like the way you coloured her.

Yay for the demo coming soon~ -celebrates-

Well, I'm not the best artist, and like you am much more comfortable with pencil and paper, but one thing I think you could improve on is making sure to have shadows on the clothing to make the character seem more real and not flat. Your colouring of the hair looks nice though! Overall, I think you ...

Hey there~! I'm Alice, and I'm new here to the forums and to Renpy itself, too. I'm mostly a writer, it's what I'm best at, but even if you're not looking for another writer I'd be happy to help you put together your ideas in order to actually make a VN. I'm good at keeping people motivated and movi...

Oo I'm going to download this now and try it later, then get back to you in this thread
Looks interesting~!

Your art is reallly pretty! And I wish I could read your comic, because it looks good~! :) In the first one up at the top you said you weren't sure of what was wrong with one of the pictures? I think it's because the face isn't tilted at the right angle to the rest of the face (eyes, nose, mouth and...

Hehe no problem, I'm happy to help~!
Yeah I forgot to write that maybe for your VN you might want an actual BG artist, since you would need pretty unique BGs ^^
But I'm glad you found that info useful!!

Yay~ I can't wait to try it XD
-waits patiently for demo-
Y'know, I bet after I finish the demo I'm going to be so sad, because I'll want the full game ASAP XD
That always happens LOL

Yay~ I really can't wait for the demo of this game
I'm definitely going to try it, and then of course, play the finished game when it's done! Haha
I really really admire you for doing most of this project by yourself!
It looks great so far, so I'm sure it'll be awesome!

@nero279 ; thank you for the support of the project~!
I hope I can do Yuuki's story justice, and make this game fun to play story/plot/script wise

Hey there~ So for backgrounds, you can either make them yourself, or use photos that you manipulate in some photo editing program (I'm not sure how, so I won't really be able to help you there XD -points at self- I'm mostly a writer, and not digital artist) Here's a resource for photos and bg art : ...

Haha well that's okay~! I'm sure you'll be able to figure it out
And that's what this sort of thread is good for; posting things up and seeing what others think about it so they can give advice, right~?
No problem at all! hehe

Oh wow, let me just start by saying this is a very unique game XD I've never played something like this, and so far I already find it very interesting. Just one question because this wasn't exactly clear to me; is the main character Terry? And I'm guessing the plot is him trying to get out of the ga...

Er well, = Joined the Strings of Fate project with Digirin and others (yay our colourist is back~) = became writer for said project and wrote around 3,000 words for it so far = We’ve also been able to figure out A LOT of the story, the endings, and what we’re looking for in the game = We’re hoping t...