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by Arelune
Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:54 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Trying to draw anime style, critiques please
Replies: 10
Views: 1484

Re: Trying to draw anime style, critiques please

The wrinkles on the blouse look a lot better now. :) But I would use a more visible purple to shade it, and maybe ditch the black line-art. It's rather harsh at the moment. Why not use a dark brown like Deji?
by Arelune
Sat Oct 20, 2012 5:47 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to handle a victim's reaction being betrayed?-Loved ones
Replies: 9
Views: 1388

Re: How to handle a victim's reaction being betrayed?-Loved

Different characters will react in different ways. ^ It'll depend on a lot of factors: how close they were, what's the personality of the victim, what are the circumstances, how much they trusted the other person, ... Seeing as nobody has given an example, Gungrave comes to mind. If you don't want ...
by Arelune
Fri Oct 05, 2012 12:40 pm
Forum: Group Plays
Topic: [Group Play 18] Winter Shard
Replies: 6
Views: 4472

Re: [Group Play 18] Winter Shard

Oh, actually one I already played, never commented on it though. I'm going by memory as it is a bit too long to replay atm. I liked the concept of it, the choices, some of the endings and the dark atmosphere, but it never managed to engage me. It all just feel so rushed and I couldn't connect with t...
by Arelune
Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:11 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: GLBT writing tips/resources
Replies: 15
Views: 2398

Re: GLBT writing tips/resources

I haven't ever encountered the term 'neutrois' before, so I looked it up... and consequently realized I'd already written a character who identified as genderqueer, who I probably should have made this instead. Yay, Mal gets to come out of the gender closet a second time! xD Congratulations, Mal! A...
by Arelune
Sun Sep 30, 2012 2:14 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: GLBT writing tips/resources
Replies: 15
Views: 2398

Re: GLBT writing tips/resources

Do you count asexuals, demisexuals, genderfluid, neutrois, ... also under this? If so, I could go dig around in my links.
Victoria Jennings wrote:People are people, in the end. It's not like having queer characters opens up a whole new range of specific personality types or anything.
^ :)
by Arelune
Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:42 am
Forum: Group Plays
Topic: [Group Play 17] Cheerful Polymorph
Replies: 9
Views: 4509

Re: [Group Play 17] Cheerful Polymorph

I would love to play another game with these characters, especially Derek, and the hints about the setting were interesting too. The most bothersome thing was the strange way the narration-thoughts-speaking was set-up, but this has already been discussed in the main thread. I found that when you put...
by Arelune
Thu Sep 27, 2012 8:49 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Help me choose a logo for my upcoming game please!
Replies: 12
Views: 1143

Re: Help me choose a logo for my upcoming game please!

The 3rd one. As for colour, A (dark) brown-orange to go with the basketball or a dark blue (complementair to orange). How about that?
by Arelune
Wed Sep 26, 2012 12:40 pm
Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
Topic: [Z♪assan Workshop] Composing music for your stories
Replies: 79
Views: 11108

Re: [Z♪assan Summer] Piano & Musicbox songs (free queue full

jeje > "dark piano track" https://dl.dropbox.com/u/2379296/Crimson%20Moonlight.ogg I had one person saying he hears a noise in the behind like a "rrr" (cricket ?), I and other persons don't hear it, if ever someone listens to this track, I'd like to have his opinion, thanks ! I ...
by Arelune
Sat Sep 22, 2012 11:25 am
Forum: Group Plays
Topic: [Group Play 16] Mobile Food Madness
Replies: 1
Views: 2670

Re: [Group Play 16] Mobile Food Madness

This one was quite short, but rather difficult. It took me quite a few tries to get the lunch. So for a 'trial and error' game that was a succes. It was evident that it is from the same makers as Super Otome Quest: same type of empty main screen and the catsprite had some white residu around him. Th...
by Arelune
Thu Sep 20, 2012 7:45 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Non-Japanese comics
Replies: 30
Views: 4004

Re: Non-Japanese comics

So do webcomics count? I've read a lot of those over the years. A couple I really like, all still updating or complete: Knights-errant Ten Winters in Lavelle Todd Allison and the Petunia Violet Strays Edepth Angel No Rest for the Wicked (updated irregularly) True Magic Mortifer (COMPLETE) Yu+Me Drea...
by Arelune
Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:01 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?)
Replies: 758
Views: 54445

Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

- I don't suppose you'd understand what I'm feeling ? I don't know anymore... E-eh? Huh? What you're feeling? Um, awkwardness by being verbally cornered by a student? What else? :? - Maybe I'll tell you about it someday, when I'm more comfortable around you. Is that okay ? I guess I'm not important...
by Arelune
Sun Sep 16, 2012 10:01 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?)
Replies: 758
Views: 54445

Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

- Sorry if... I'm being blunt but... would you include yourself in this group ? * looks embarrassed * Me? Oh no, I don't fangirl about persons. Why~? Do you want me to? ;) - I'm sorry, I really shouldn't talk about this. I hope you understand. Meh. :C As promised, a quick revision to my sprite : Be...
by Arelune
Sun Sep 16, 2012 7:12 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?)
Replies: 758
Views: 54445

Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

* blushes a little while looking at Arelune * Teehee~ :3 - Wait, what ? Fangirls ? Are... are you sure about this ? Come on, you've 'smashed a killerbot into oblivion'. Of course you have fangirls! Plus, I'm sure Hanamori and SilverxBlue still stalk you from time to time. - It's... Let's just say I...
by Arelune
Sun Sep 16, 2012 6:14 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Hierofanía
Replies: 111
Views: 54787

Re: Hierofanía

This is one of the games I've played times ago, but never reviewed. Seeing it at the front page reminded me of that. This is really one of my favourite VN from around here. I just loved everything. The characters -they were so quirky-, the style -though admittely it creeped me out first, especially ...
by Arelune
Sun Sep 16, 2012 6:05 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?)
Replies: 758
Views: 54445

Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

Newcomers, don't forget the mock-up. :) Looks like Im living up to my title as the creepy teacher :mrgreen: The question is not: are you creepy? The question is: who is the creepiest person around Lemma? Let's do a contest? C: Your wish is my command. Oh? Really? Ohohohohohoh~! Wait, wrong character...