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by Fenrir34
Mon Mar 02, 2015 9:50 am
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: Seeking Proofreader and Writer for Fantasy Game(Closed)
Replies: 5
Views: 998

Re: Seeking Proofreader and Writer for Fantasy Game

thankthebear wrote:If you're still looking for a proofreader and don't mind someone who falls completely outside the probable target demographic, I could probably give it a go.
Sure =). I'd be happy to have you as a proofreader. Where would you like me to send the story?
by Fenrir34
Mon Mar 02, 2015 7:55 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(GxG)(Music)-Update 03/2/15
Replies: 21
Views: 10706

Re: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(GxG)(Music)-Update 03/

New Character Added! http://i60.tinypic.com/33vyt93.png Ace-A fellow knight and rival of Sasha. Unlike our protagonist, Ace has trained for many years as a knight and is very skilled. However, this is hard for some to believe due to her short stature and rather immature attitude. Though talented wit...
by Fenrir34
Sun Mar 01, 2015 10:15 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: This World Unknown [Fantasy, Otome, GxB] [Complete!!!]
Replies: 62
Views: 20579

Re: This World Unknown [Fantasy, Otome, GxB]

Oh yay! Another game from you XD. Its funny though. I actually saw your blog about this earlier today was wondering when you'd post it :lol: . Anyway, once again you've got a really interesting game =). I'm excited to play it. The concept is really good and I love the art ^^. I wish you the best of...
by Fenrir34
Sun Mar 01, 2015 9:17 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: This World Unknown [Fantasy, Otome, GxB] [Complete!!!]
Replies: 62
Views: 20579

Re: This World Unknown [Fantasy, Otome, GxB]

Oh yay! Another game from you XD. Its funny though. I actually saw your blog about this earlier today was wondering when you'd post it :lol: . Anyway, once again you've got a really interesting game =). I'm excited to play it. The concept is really good and I love the art ^^. I wish you the best of ...
by Fenrir34
Sun Mar 01, 2015 8:57 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: Seeking Proofreader and Writer for Fantasy Game(Closed)
Replies: 5
Views: 998

Seeking Proofreader and Writer for Fantasy Game(Closed)

Hi, I'm in real need of a proofreader and writer for my game Lynarsia-The Broken Song. I'm writing the prologue but have some doubt in if the writing is good enough or if it's interested for a demo release. As the proofreader all I ask is that you give me a critique on the story. Please keep it posi...
by Fenrir34
Sun Mar 01, 2015 7:12 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Postcards from Canada
Replies: 13
Views: 2191

Re: Postcards from Canada

Hi, I'd love a postcard to. I'd be happy to sent one as well =).
by Fenrir34
Fri Feb 27, 2015 11:59 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(GxG)(Music)-Update 03/2/15
Replies: 21
Views: 10706

Re: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(GxG)(Music)-New Art!

Oh, sweet! An Ar Tonelico-inspired game? Yes please! And you've got iekika-bp as the artist? Great choice. I had a feeling that style looked familiar. I noticed you said you wanted Hymns in the story; if you need help writing them, let me know. I write songs in Hymmnos a lot. The issue is that you ...
by Fenrir34
Fri Feb 27, 2015 11:56 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(GxG)(Music)-Update 03/2/15
Replies: 21
Views: 10706

Re: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(GxG)(Music)-New Art!

I don't know how I didn't notice this before, it looks very interesting. Fascinating setting, and good art. I'll be keeping an eye on it :) And, Actually, maybe having friendship as routes for all the girls will be a better idea No please :( I mean, if you meant only friendship routes for them. I s...
by Fenrir34
Tue Feb 24, 2015 5:09 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
Replies: 5264
Views: 564384

Re: Get that thing off your chest... Now...

Today just isn't a very good day for me. Am still getting over a crappy cold that I have no idea who I got it from. No one's been sick around me. Left this morning without my wallet and so I'm driving around in fear since I don't have my license(man was that stupid). And I had a panic attack in clas...
by Fenrir34
Mon Feb 23, 2015 11:03 pm
Forum: I am an Artist
Topic: Free Logo Request (CLOSE)
Replies: 31
Views: 6161

Re: Free Logo Request (OPEN)

Sending a Pm =)
by Fenrir34
Fri Feb 20, 2015 1:09 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(GxG)(Music)-Update 03/2/15
Replies: 21
Views: 10706

Re: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(BxG)(GxG)(Music)-New A

A few questions for you: 1. What are you planning to do about music? You have it in the thread title, so I imagine it's supposed to be a major feature. But you don't mention it anywhere else. Do you have a musician for the game? 2. Will Diving play a role in the story? It's always been a big part o...
by Fenrir34
Fri Feb 20, 2015 1:03 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(GxG)(Music)-Update 03/2/15
Replies: 21
Views: 10706

Re: Lynarsia-The Broken Song(Fantasy)(GxG)(Music)-New Art!

Ooh, pretty! I love both your logo and the character art! I haven't played Ar Tonelico (though it looks interesting), but the story/art seem to fit what I know of it. I hope you won't have any legal issues... I don't know if you've thought about setting it in your own Ar Tonelico-inspired-but-diffe...
by Fenrir34
Thu Feb 19, 2015 11:16 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Our Personal Space [Sci-fi] [Relationship Sim] [Free]
Replies: 71
Views: 48318

Re: Our Personal Space [Sci-fi] [Relationship Sim] [Free]

You did a really good job on your first game though =). And you don't always have to add super dramatic scenes. And I haven't gotten all the endings so I need to see that XD. I got ending 3 though and was very satisfied with it =). And really 0_0? That's hilarious XD. I named her that because it's a...
by Fenrir34
Tue Feb 17, 2015 4:46 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Our Personal Space [Sci-fi] [Relationship Sim] [Free]
Replies: 71
Views: 48318

Re: Our Personal Space [Sci-fi] [Relationship Sim] [Free]

Just got done playing. Here are my thoughts.... Writing-The writing was very well done. In the play through I did I didn't see any mistakes =). I'm really glad you took the extra time to make sure things were written correctly and spelled right =). Also the description was pretty good and I loved se...