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- Sun May 25, 2014 10:27 am
- Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
- Topic: Looking for Editors/Critiquers for "Sunny South Seoul"
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1667
Re: Looking for Editors/Critiquers for "Sunny South Seoul"
Thanks to the both of you! I'll send you guys a PM when I get back to my desktop.
- Sun May 25, 2014 3:34 am
- Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
- Topic: Looking for Editors/Critiquers for "Sunny South Seoul"
- Replies: 12
- Views: 1667
Looking for Editors/Critiquers for "Sunny South Seoul"
Hello again, forumites! It's your 'ol pal, Broodelin, looking for a little help with her next project. :) Essentially, I'm looking for editors/critiquers who would be willing to look over the script of my work-in-progress game, Sunny South Seoul , and give honest feedback on its style, themes, execu...
- Sun May 25, 2014 3:11 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: The Death of Mrs. Macey [Drama][Family][Indefinite Hiatus]
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3887
Re: The Death of Mrs. Macey [Drama][Family][Free][Demo]
They're coming along so well that the game should be ready for its big debut by the end of this week. It's pretty exciting!
- Sun May 25, 2014 2:00 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Summer Break Disappearance [GXB, Crack, Slice of Life]
- Replies: 2
- Views: 950
Re: Summer Break Disappearance [GXB, Crack, Slice of Life]
Can you post some more story/character information here on Lemmasoft? My browser refuses to load your webpage for some odd reason.
- Sun May 25, 2014 1:51 am
- Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
- Topic: Looking for ideabouncers(and possibly a co-writer)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 743
Re: Looking for ideabouncers(and possibly a co-writer)
I'd be willing to ideabounce with you for Clockwork Heart, as I cannot resist robots.
If that goes well, I can offer up my services to help you co-write Quiet Love also.
If that goes well, I can offer up my services to help you co-write Quiet Love also.
- Sun May 25, 2014 1:44 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: The Death of Mrs. Macey [Drama][Family][Indefinite Hiatus]
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3887
Re: The Death of Mrs. Macey [Drama][Family][Free][Demo]
A quick update: # Roxanne's neutral, bad, and good endings have been implemented and are ready for private testing. # Christian's optional scene has been drafted but not yet coded. # Caleb's optional scene is in the process of being drafted. # Endings for all characters have been drafted. # Logo is ...
- Sat May 24, 2014 7:57 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Potraying Emotions in Sprites
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3287
Re: Potraying Emotions in Sprites
I think that a good mix-up of both is the perfect formula, but it all depends on the style and character you're trying to portray.
- Sat May 24, 2014 1:48 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Planet EVN
- Replies: 375
- Views: 72696
- Sat May 24, 2014 1:39 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Please critique my prologue!
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1000
Re: Please critique my prologue!
I'm glad I could be of help to you. I'm sure your prologue's going to turn out great!
- Sat May 24, 2014 7:00 am
- Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
- Topic: (FREE) Sprite Artist (CLOSED)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1597
Re: (FREE) Sprite Artist
If you're still offering, I'm interested.
May I send you a PM with the details?
May I send you a PM with the details?
- Sat May 24, 2014 6:57 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: The Death of Mrs. Macey [Drama][Family][Indefinite Hiatus]
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3887
Re: The Death of Mrs. Macey [Drama][Family][Free][Demo]
I've just started coding the last scene before the epilogue. This project is almost complete already, and just in time for my trip into the mountains!
- Sat May 24, 2014 6:53 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Sunny South Seoul [Family][BxG][Free][Indefinite Hiatus]
- Replies: 33
- Views: 4864
Re: Sunny South Seoul [Family][BxG][Free][Update 5/22]
Currently finishing up skimming the introduction and first scene for bugs and typos. My plan is to release the first full act of three scenes and an introduction as an alpha/test build with placeholder graphics where necessary. Should all go according to plan, this should be complete by next Sunday....
- Sat May 24, 2014 6:47 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: How does the writing stage work
- Replies: 3
- Views: 704
Re: How does the writing stage work
No problem.
I hope it helps you out someday.
I hope it helps you out someday.
- Sat May 24, 2014 6:43 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Please critique my prologue!
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1000
Re: Please critique my prologue!
For a prologue, it does a nice job of setting up the main external conflict, but I feel as though it doesn't do enough on the character side of things. The protagonist just kind of... accepts these things happening to her. There's a little bit of reluctance implied, but we don't know enough about he...
- Sat May 24, 2014 6:29 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: How does the writing stage work
- Replies: 3
- Views: 704
Re: How does the writing stage work
Well, what I do is decide the turning points (choices) in the story first. For example, if Eileen wants a snack, does she choose the apple, the orange, or the bag of chips? Then I figure out what the advantages and disadvantages of each choice are in context of the narrative. Maybe the bag of chips ...