I'm glad to have helped; they look pretty good!
I'd love to help test/proofread, although I'm ESL so I might not pick up grammar stuff.
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- Sun Mar 11, 2018 7:26 pm
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: Love Me, Browser-kun! [NaNoRenO18] [GxB] [Romance] [Comedy] [Visual Novel]
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2786
- Sun Mar 11, 2018 12:31 am
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: Love Me, Browser-kun! [NaNoRenO18] [GxB] [Romance] [Comedy] [Visual Novel]
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2786
Re: Love Me, Browser-kun! [NaNoReNo18] [GxB] [Romance] [Comedy] [Visual Novel]
Edge being the childhood friend is the best thing to come out of NaNo2018, period. *drops mic*
I like the new sprites, but please be careful the clothes aren't so simple they clash with the detailed hair/feel like you forgot to shade them. Best of luck to you!
I like the new sprites, but please be careful the clothes aren't so simple they clash with the detailed hair/feel like you forgot to shade them. Best of luck to you!
- Fri Mar 09, 2018 7:37 pm
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 40941
Re: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB] updated 3/6
Thank you, Eek! As promised, here's another character. Just what could be her role in Shiyun's story? https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/328642752759988226/421812230456344576/profile_rui.png The script's at 6.5k, I'm looking into 10k or so for the finished thing. (Hopefully) short and sweet! I'v...
- Wed Mar 07, 2018 12:54 pm
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: Colors of Fate [Nano18] (GxB/Slice of Life/18+)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 6691
Re: Colors of Fate [Nano18] (GxB/Slice of Life/18+)
This looks super cute, both the story and art! Too bad we have to wait until the release to see their older appearances.
I'm pretty much soloing my entry too, so I feel a sense of kinship, haha. Rooting for you!
I'm pretty much soloing my entry too, so I feel a sense of kinship, haha. Rooting for you!
- Tue Mar 06, 2018 4:50 pm
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 40941
Re: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
Hi there! Today I bring you our titular NEET god, Mao. https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/296827831885889537/420682689704886292/profile_mao.png On the writing side, the script's currently at about 4k words. I still don't know how long it'll end up so wish me luck . Also started working on a BG...
- Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:15 pm
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 40941
Re: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
Wow, thanks for the great reception even though I still only have one sprite up! Finished one more today, but wanna do Mao's first before updating so you folks will have to wait a bit more. :wink: @78909087: It's harder than I thought to try to get it all done within a month, but I'll keep it up for...
- Sun Mar 04, 2018 5:28 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Art
- Topic: Blue Forest Fantasy Sprites- Opinion?
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1476
Re: Blue Forest Fantasy Sprites- Opinion?
They look professional, but very old. As in, 15~20 years old. If you want to use that to your favor, I'd suggest making the whole art and design look equally old. They'd stand up too much against a clean, modern UI, for example.
- Sat Mar 03, 2018 5:23 pm
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 40941
Re: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
This is a really interesting concept, Shiyun seems like a unique protagonist. I'm curious to see how you balance the comedy with the darker aspects (I'm guessing there will be some, considering Shiyun's outlook on life?). Thank you! The darker aspects, such as the consequences of Mao not doing his ...
- Sat Mar 03, 2018 4:56 pm
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
- Replies: 28
- Views: 40941
Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/328642752759988226/419595122909642759/banner_about.png “When I was chosen as a sacrifice to the Volcano God, I thanked a god for the first time.” That’s what pessimistic village girl Shiyun thought, but she wasn’t expecting to actually end up in the realm of...
- Fri Feb 16, 2018 4:23 pm
- Forum: I am an Artist
- Topic: High Quality Background Art for $35 [OPEN]
- Replies: 53
- Views: 23090
Re: Background Art [OPEN $25]
Although I'm not looking for a BG artist myself, I just had to tweet about you because the price is too good. Hoping you get swarmed with clients!
- Wed Jan 17, 2018 1:47 pm
- Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
- Topic: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * closed
- Replies: 19
- Views: 6458
Re: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * Closed
Long time no see! I had the opportunity of doing the trailer for The Mind's Eclipse a while ago, and it's finally released around a week before the game's launch! This was a project that made me go completely out of my comfort zone, and I think the final result was worth it. rj7ia4iyP24 I know I sai...
- Fri Sep 22, 2017 6:50 pm
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Feedback for handsome butler
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2928
Re: Feedback for handsome butler
I agree about the mouth, it could be a little lower on the face. Otherwise the main thing I'd point out is the coloring feels flat, with not enough contrast. I know you didn't ask about that, but even a good drawing can be brought down by less good coloring, so do try working on it for maximum otome...
- Mon Jul 24, 2017 5:58 pm
- Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
- Topic: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * closed
- Replies: 19
- Views: 6458
Re: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * Open!
After the trailer, I've had the opportunity to do the CG animation sample for The Masquerade Killer! If we reach the stretch goal I'll be animating all CGs. https://puu.sh/wS7sB/73fb80a9da.gif I'm not currently looking into accepting CG animation jobs, but hopefully it gives you an idea of what I ca...
- Mon Jul 17, 2017 8:37 pm
- Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
- Topic: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * closed
- Replies: 19
- Views: 6458
Re: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * Open!
Hi, please feel free to add rito.peridot@gmail.com on Skype!
- Thu Jul 06, 2017 10:43 pm
- Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
- Topic: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * closed
- Replies: 19
- Views: 6458
Re: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * Open!
I'm reopening! Also working on a (hopefully) super cool new sample. Although I've updated the prices, most things should be in the 150~200 range so feel free to ask!