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by rito
Sun Mar 11, 2018 7:26 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Love Me, Browser-kun! [NaNoRenO18] [GxB] [Romance] [Comedy] [Visual Novel]
Replies: 7
Views: 2786

Re: Love Me, Browser-kun! [NaNoRenO18] [GxB] [Romance] [Comedy] [Visual Novel]

I'm glad to have helped; they look pretty good!
I'd love to help test/proofread, although I'm ESL so I might not pick up grammar stuff.
by rito
Sun Mar 11, 2018 12:31 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Love Me, Browser-kun! [NaNoRenO18] [GxB] [Romance] [Comedy] [Visual Novel]
Replies: 7
Views: 2786

Re: Love Me, Browser-kun! [NaNoReNo18] [GxB] [Romance] [Comedy] [Visual Novel]

Edge being the childhood friend is the best thing to come out of NaNo2018, period. *drops mic*

I like the new sprites, but please be careful the clothes aren't so simple they clash with the detailed hair/feel like you forgot to shade them. Best of luck to you!
by rito
Fri Mar 09, 2018 7:37 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
Replies: 28
Views: 40941

Re: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB] updated 3/6

Thank you, Eek! As promised, here's another character. Just what could be her role in Shiyun's story? https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/328642752759988226/421812230456344576/profile_rui.png The script's at 6.5k, I'm looking into 10k or so for the finished thing. (Hopefully) short and sweet! I'v...
by rito
Wed Mar 07, 2018 12:54 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Colors of Fate [Nano18] (GxB/Slice of Life/18+)
Replies: 22
Views: 6691

Re: Colors of Fate [Nano18] (GxB/Slice of Life/18+)

This looks super cute, both the story and art! Too bad we have to wait until the release to see their older appearances.

I'm pretty much soloing my entry too, so I feel a sense of kinship, haha. Rooting for you!
by rito
Tue Mar 06, 2018 4:50 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
Replies: 28
Views: 40941

Re: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]

Hi there! Today I bring you our titular NEET god, Mao. https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/296827831885889537/420682689704886292/profile_mao.png On the writing side, the script's currently at about 4k words. I still don't know how long it'll end up so wish me luck . Also started working on a BG...
by rito
Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:15 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
Replies: 28
Views: 40941

Re: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]

Wow, thanks for the great reception even though I still only have one sprite up! Finished one more today, but wanna do Mao's first before updating so you folks will have to wait a bit more. :wink: @78909087: It's harder than I thought to try to get it all done within a month, but I'll keep it up for...
by rito
Sun Mar 04, 2018 5:28 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Blue Forest Fantasy Sprites- Opinion?
Replies: 4
Views: 1476

Re: Blue Forest Fantasy Sprites- Opinion?

They look professional, but very old. As in, 15~20 years old. If you want to use that to your favor, I'd suggest making the whole art and design look equally old. They'd stand up too much against a clean, modern UI, for example.
by rito
Sat Mar 03, 2018 5:23 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
Replies: 28
Views: 40941

Re: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]

This is a really interesting concept, Shiyun seems like a unique protagonist. I'm curious to see how you balance the comedy with the darker aspects (I'm guessing there will be some, considering Shiyun's outlook on life?). Thank you! The darker aspects, such as the consequences of Mao not doing his ...
by rito
Sat Mar 03, 2018 4:56 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]
Replies: 28
Views: 40941

Bride of the NEET God [NaNo2018] [fantasy, comedy, optional GxB]

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/328642752759988226/419595122909642759/banner_about.png “When I was chosen as a sacrifice to the Volcano God, I thanked a god for the first time.” That’s what pessimistic village girl Shiyun thought, but she wasn’t expecting to actually end up in the realm of...
by rito
Fri Feb 16, 2018 4:23 pm
Forum: I am an Artist
Topic: High Quality Background Art for $35 [OPEN]
Replies: 53
Views: 23090

Re: Background Art [OPEN $25]

Although I'm not looking for a BG artist myself, I just had to tweet about you because the price is too good. Hoping you get swarmed with clients!
by rito
Wed Jan 17, 2018 1:47 pm
Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
Topic: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * closed
Replies: 19
Views: 6458

Re: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * Closed

Long time no see! I had the opportunity of doing the trailer for The Mind's Eclipse a while ago, and it's finally released around a week before the game's launch! This was a project that made me go completely out of my comfort zone, and I think the final result was worth it. rj7ia4iyP24 I know I sai...
by rito
Fri Sep 22, 2017 6:50 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Feedback for handsome butler
Replies: 17
Views: 2928

Re: Feedback for handsome butler

I agree about the mouth, it could be a little lower on the face. Otherwise the main thing I'd point out is the coloring feels flat, with not enough contrast. I know you didn't ask about that, but even a good drawing can be brought down by less good coloring, so do try working on it for maximum otome...
by rito
Mon Jul 24, 2017 5:58 pm
Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
Topic: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * closed
Replies: 19
Views: 6458

Re: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * Open!

After the trailer, I've had the opportunity to do the CG animation sample for The Masquerade Killer! If we reach the stretch goal I'll be animating all CGs. https://puu.sh/wS7sB/73fb80a9da.gif I'm not currently looking into accepting CG animation jobs, but hopefully it gives you an idea of what I ca...
by rito
Thu Jul 06, 2017 10:43 pm
Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
Topic: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * closed
Replies: 19
Views: 6458

Re: [Video] Atelier Apricot animations * Open!

I'm reopening! Also working on a (hopefully) super cool new sample. Although I've updated the prices, most things should be in the 150~200 range so feel free to ask!