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by ebi-hime
Thu Feb 19, 2015 2:13 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: NAOMI v1.1 [Kinetic][Transgender Protag][#JamForLeelah2015]
Replies: 16
Views: 4196

Re: NAOMI v1.1 [Kinetic][Transgender Protag][#JamForLeelah20

Aw, this was a sweet story. The art is really, really adorable, and I really like the GUI - and also the font you used for the character names haha. I loved the sketch in the extras section of Haiden and Naomi, it was so cute. With all the dokis~ The character profiles were also a really nice touch ...
by ebi-hime
Thu Feb 05, 2015 11:54 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: White Box [Romance, Tragedy]
Replies: 15
Views: 11321

Re: White Box [Romance, Tragedy]

Hello! The story and all seems very interesting, but I was wondering if there will be a Mac version as well? No, there isn't a mac version. I completely neglected to make one, for some reason... I'm considering to just make a mac version of the old version, or if I should revamp the VN a bit first ...
by ebi-hime
Wed Feb 04, 2015 2:19 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: It Followed Us Home [Horror][Drama][Survival][Cool][Romance]
Replies: 38
Views: 6952

Re: It Followed Us Home [Horror][Drama][Survival][Cool][Roma

Ooh, the art looks so pretty o: The character art and the backgrounds look so good! The term 'beta male' always makes me hmmm, but the characters look interesting so far. And the story is inspired by Suspiria? That's cool! The film has a lot of atmosphere, I think (from what I remember). Though I re...
by ebi-hime
Tue Feb 03, 2015 11:08 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: White Box [Romance, Tragedy]
Replies: 15
Views: 11321

Re: White Box [Romance, Tragedy]

Wow. I think there were tears in my eyes in the whole second half. I really liked that the protagonist wasn't just going to lay down and die (for the most part). I guess I can relate to the 'brat' part of her. Most characters aren't quite that strong willed and blunt, and I liked that she was, espe...
by ebi-hime
Sun Feb 01, 2015 5:07 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: White Box [Romance, Tragedy]
Replies: 15
Views: 11321

Re: White Box [Romance, Tragedy]

What are stock sprites? (I'm new here..) Yeah.. I guess that the end was kinda happy but I feel like that she died in the end... o.o What do you think? Um, stock sprites are ones that are free for use, that anyone can use them for their projects. Sprites that are not made specially for one particul...
by ebi-hime
Fri Jan 30, 2015 1:26 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What turns you off in a Visual Novel? Mistakes etc.
Replies: 18
Views: 4948

Re: What turns you off in a Visual Novel? Mistakes etc.

One of the things that annoys me the most is when people will customise the textbox, text and main menu of their VN, but then leave the rest of the ren'py default menus... It bugs me a lot haha XD Which is very unfair, because about 3 or 4 of my first VNs do this exact same thing (I'm such a hypocri...
by ebi-hime
Wed Jan 28, 2015 8:09 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Spirit Parade [Otome/Asian fantasy] [Commercial] Demo out!
Replies: 68
Views: 22429

Re: Spirit Parade [Otome] [Asian fantasy] [Commercial]

Ooh this looks so pretty o: The art is really gorgeous, and I love the charcter designs. And I love how fluffy Shuye's hair is. Like a big, floofy cloud, hehe~ Actually, there are a lot of characters with really nice, fluffy-looking hair, haha XD I look forward to trying out the beta when it comes o...
by ebi-hime
Sat Jan 10, 2015 10:30 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Pink (NaNoWinter2015...?) -2 Hour VN-
Replies: 3
Views: 3746

Re: Pink (NaNoWinter2015...?) -2 Hour VN-

Aah... And now I have read the word 'pink' so much, it doesn't even feel like a real word anymore XD And I just realised... I was almost entirely dressed in pink whilst reading this myself, haha XD What a coincidence o: Anyway, onto the story... I think I caught on that the whole thing was a metapho...
by ebi-hime
Fri Jan 02, 2015 7:37 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Ambre [Drama][Free][NaNoReno 2013] Now on Steam!
Replies: 45
Views: 27909

Re: Ambre [Drama][NaNoReno 2013] Remake released !

Some people told me the real Ambre looked frightning XD She kind of does look frightening, but I think it contrasts well with her child sprite, and makes the second loop of the story more shocking... and has more impact. The spritework really adds a lot to the story, I think n_n;; You may be right ...
by ebi-hime
Fri Dec 26, 2014 6:12 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Without Within
Replies: 7
Views: 5211

Re: Without Within

Ooh, this was a fun VN. The GUI looked super pro, and the art is really nicely done, too. I thought it was interesting how there are no character sprites, it's all told through CGs - I wonder if that was more hard work that doing sprites? I liked that some of the art was animated, it made it all fee...
by ebi-hime
Sun Dec 21, 2014 10:58 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Wish Upon A Christmas(Festive/Cute/Comedy)
Replies: 5
Views: 2858

Re: Wish Upon A Christmas(Festive/Cute/Comedy)

Aw, this was a cute little VN. Even though there were so many characters, it was nice to see how everything wrapped up neatly in the end, ehe. The art was really cute, too! I like how even very minor characters had their own sprites (like Lyla's mother). Although I did think some of their outfits di...
by ebi-hime
Wed Dec 17, 2014 12:47 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Way We All Go [BxG, Horror, Romance] [Commercial]
Replies: 58
Views: 28069

Re: The Way We All Go [BxG, Horror, Romance]

Played the game and the first ending that I got was no. 2: Proof, which was Noelle killing Amu and gave me Amu's eyes. x_x That was kinda creepy, haha. Gramps are cute too, especially Chiyo. I imagine her face as a bright old lady. Overall, the story was good, I like your use of words. The characte...
by ebi-hime
Sun Dec 14, 2014 11:41 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Ambre [Drama][Free][NaNoReno 2013] Now on Steam!
Replies: 45
Views: 27909

Re: Ambre [Drama][NaNoReno 2013] Remake released !

Oh, this was an interesting story. It's unfortunate that I already read a review of it online first, so I already knew the twist at the end before it happened, hahaha XD I think that spoils the story somewhat. But that obviously isn't your fault XD I loved how the sprites were drawn! The coloring bo...
by ebi-hime
Sun Dec 14, 2014 9:18 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: How visual novel changed my life [Nano14] [SoL] [Friendship]
Replies: 14
Views: 8414

Re: How visual novel changed my life [Nano14] [SoL] [Friends

Omg i really loved this vn. All the meta!!! XD The concept reminded me a lot of the Charlie Kaufman movie Adaptation? Which all about the creative process of a screenwriter, trying super hard to write a movie, but is unable to, which was all autobiographical hahaha. I don't know if you've seen it or...
by ebi-hime
Sat Dec 13, 2014 7:42 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Passion Sync (Magical Girl) (Yuri)(Episodic)
Replies: 22
Views: 7086

Re: Passion Sync (Magical Girl) (Yuri)(Episodic)

I really like the concept for this story haha XD It looks like a fun action/comedy fanservice anime plot, with magical girl doses thrown in - like Vividred Operation, maybe. 9 obtainable heroines seems like so much, though! Wouldn't that be hard to write - and isn't it difficult to come with up with...