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- Thu Feb 05, 2015 8:04 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Trigger [Drama][Realistic Fiction]
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1181
Re: Trigger [Drama][Realistic Fiction]
I know two people very dear to me who suffer PTSD, so I'm very interested in this. Looks like you found a good artist too. Suits the feel of it, I think.
- Sun Feb 01, 2015 4:29 am
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: What are your favourite VN Characters?
- Replies: 50
- Views: 11567
Re: What are your favourite VN Characters?
This guy over here... http://vndb.org/c534 Just look at him... who wouldn't fall for this guy? The friendly smile that will bring world peace, That mustache that can seduce men, women and objects, That glamorous (but ridiculously hard to maintain) long hair that is the envy of the Greek Gods... and...
- Thu Jan 29, 2015 5:39 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: What turns you off in a Visual Novel? Mistakes etc.
- Replies: 18
- Views: 4948
Re: What turns you off in a Visual Novel? Mistakes etc.
Cliches! Cliches in an ironic, funny, making for of themselves way are good, but when it's something that's been done 2342534 billion times I get bored. Only naturally. And I don't see the point in someone making it. There have been a few V.Ns posted that I'm like... 'yes, but WHY did you bother?' b...
- Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:41 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 6820
Re: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
But that's just me, and I'm the kind of guy who would rather read someone's two-hundred page forum spam on why he thinks my mother is a whore than two empty lines of praise from someone who wants to tell me that he thinks my mother is a classy lady. LMAO. If we could 'like' posts, I would 'like' yo...
- Tue Jan 27, 2015 7:01 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 6820
Re: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
Clearly, you are an Exception. Eh, I'll be going in as a mature age, since the 'career path' I was in isn't really viable anymore. :) Check the ages of those people gushing about drivel. I guarantee that they're under 18, as are the writers posting said drivel. In other words, neither the writers n...
- Tue Jan 27, 2015 6:00 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Who is Mike?[Mystery/Thriller,Supernatural]FULL RELEASE!
- Replies: 102
- Views: 21027
Re: Who is Mike?[Mystery/Thriller,Supernatural]Beta ver 2 is
Hmph not hmp - somewhere in there. But aside from that - can I tell you how AMAZING this is? You had me hooked. I needed to know who is Mike! Great writing, nice art. EDIT: Just got almost all the endings. Oooh! I want to see a sequel with #the catalyst. I'm curious though, in the sly ending, and an...
- Tue Jan 27, 2015 3:59 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: How to come up with plot twists and interesting endings?
- Replies: 37
- Views: 6647
Re: How to come up with plot twists and interesting endings?
I definitely won't forgive pretty characters and fancy settings if the story is Crap. Also, what's the point of making great characters if they don't have a Story (Plot) strong enough to show off how great they are? (In case you haven't caught on, I'm a die-hard plotter.) I disagree. There are two ...
- Tue Jan 27, 2015 3:26 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 6820
Re: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
Here's a tip: A quick check of the writer's Age will tell you ahead of time whether they're serious about wanting advice or not. Namely, if they're under 25, they're probably going to fight you every step of the way because they have yet to realize there are people out there that know more than the...
- Mon Jan 26, 2015 7:55 pm
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Caging me Softly (Nicolas Cage Dating Sim)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 38616
Re: Caging me Softly (Nicolas Cage Dating Sim)
I... have no words.
Okay yes I do. BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
I hope this didn't take you too long to do, really. But it was ridiculous. I played through the whole thing in barely a minute but it did make me laugh.
Okay yes I do. BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
I hope this didn't take you too long to do, really. But it was ridiculous. I played through the whole thing in barely a minute but it did make me laugh.
- Mon Jan 26, 2015 7:53 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 6820
Re: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
Haha. :) This should almost be a stickied post. People don't normally know what they're asking for. And I know that usually when people ask for critiques they don't want the honest truth, so I normally don't bother commenting at all. I try to put a positive spin on critques, but you're always going ...
- Sun Jan 25, 2015 7:26 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Kaitlyn in Chinaland [GxB], [COMPLETE]
- Replies: 30
- Views: 15908
Re: Kaitlyn in Chinaland [GxB], [Language Learning]
I have read a bit of ABC (American Born Chinese). I meant to get it some time actually but then I forgot all about it! :) Maybe I will get it then. I bring you an update! It's really hard to give progress estimates but here I will try. So that makes it... GUI = Almost 100%? Art = 50%? Something like...
- Sat Jan 24, 2015 4:02 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
- Replies: 74
- Views: 32467
Re: The Walk [Psychological][NaNoWinter 2015]
You're back! And making awesomeness again! I've been meaning to come here and tell you that I've played most of your stuff and it blows me away every time. I love this. I learned about myself... sorta. I got lazy and just typed in one word answers like 'black' or 'big' most of the time. Haha. But it...
- Sat Jan 24, 2015 4:00 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?
- Replies: 36
- Views: 5388
Re: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?
Darlin', the easiest way to get over this is by playing Terrible games, and reading awful stories. I am dead serious. Playing something truly awful will make you realize that you're really Not that bad. Case in point: I just got finished playing a game where the creator apparently did not believe i...
- Sat Jan 24, 2015 12:12 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!
- Replies: 117
- Views: 49151
Re: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!
Yeah, I hope Acer will be romanceable. He's adorable.
The characters are all interesting and have great chemistry with the protag. Alice.
Good demo though. Huge word count for something that's just the demo! Whew!
The characters are all interesting and have great chemistry with the protag. Alice.
Good demo though. Huge word count for something that's just the demo! Whew!
- Fri Jan 23, 2015 8:34 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?
- Replies: 36
- Views: 5388
Re: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?
I don't want to add to your anxiety at all but it's good that you're admitting your shortcomings! :) There are numerous VNs out there that are the product of bad writing (or even MORE horrendous - spelling and grammar mistakes) and I commend you for not being one of them who doesn't care or not if t...