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Thank you! :D The main characters are Takun and Will, Sara is just some kind of placeholder right now lol. *trying to avoid spoilers* So I looked at the script because I was trying to figure out how to make the fonts work like that in my own game, and I noticed something. There appears to be a Taku...

I agree with Lanna about the BL. If you like it and think it makes the story closer to the one you want to tell, then by all means, add it in. If you want, you can make some of the endings have it and some of the endings be BL-free, so that players can avoid it if they want, but you're not going to ...

I'm fairly sure the correct answers, if I want more information, are: I see you, it is answers you seek, to make you understand, only you can know. But when I try them all, I get a game over. I've tried each of them separately, but I still got a normal ending. Do I need to say that the white lady is...

Do you think I should try to give the sprites a blinking motion, or is that too advanced for a first project? What about having the sprites wear a different outfit each day-- I was really attached to that idea originally, but it looks like it'll be a lot more work. Do other people just have them we...

Mrs. Abject, your art is starting to really pop! I can't wait to see you refine your style in future games. :mrgreen: Thank you, JT. I can't wait till I'm better at this, either. :D Do you think I should try to give the sprites a blinking motion, or is that too advanced for a first project? What ab...

I've tried multiple times but I'm still not getting it. I had him draw himself. Then I tried to put him on meds. I had him talk to Sarah, then I ran away from the beast. I told him to forget about Rachel, and then I told Jane it wasn't a good idea to see Julius, and his previous therapist came and t...

First post is now more organized and informative! Designs on Maria and Justine are done! Still making progress on the writing! Call me sushi, 'cause I'm on a roll! ... :roll: I went with my idea to change the story, so that set the writing back a little, but I could still use some of the same dialog...

I can't understand Spanish at all, but I'm glad I took a look at this. The art is lovely and I really enjoyed the rabbits. Looking forward to the full version!

Also, you're a fan of Yume Nikki?

...Wow.
You have no idea how much I want to play the full version. Will and Takun are so freakin' adorable in their interactions with each other, and I hope very much that they are the subject of the BL ending.
The art really fits, too, and it's very original.

I am sorry and I did not mean to step on your toes at all-- I just really enjoy editing and thought you were only doing visuals. I'm sure the project will turn out wonderfully, and I look forward to playing it again in the new version.

I enjoyed the original game, and I'm looking forward to the version with the digital paintings. I liked the character of Liu, and the choices were impactful and interesting. The game also did a really good job of teaching the history to someone who didn't know about Falun Gong or the human rights vi...

This looks interesting, and if it's free I'm definitely going to play it. The protagonist is so pretty!
Out of curiosity, does Ayumi have a path?

I love the expression of the boy on the right in the CG where the characters appear like they're about to kiss. He's so... oh, I don't even know the word for it, but I like it when I see it. I am definitely going to want to play this when it comes out.
Good luck, and keep going!

That's great! I like the sound of this story and want to help it be the best it can. Just send me whatever you want me to edit via a PM (or by putting it here in this thread-- I'm not picky). I edit for content (plot, characterization, flow, etc) as well as spelling/grammar, if that's okay.

Nice try, but most of my fanfic is pretty obscure. (I write for an unpopular pairing in an unpopular game, lol). @ Minnfae: I would love for you to proofread it! Thank you very much. The script will probably be a little later than this weekend-- maybe the weekend after it? I know first drafts are su...