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by Laiska
Thu Aug 13, 2015 7:18 pm
Forum: WiP: Short Noncommercial Games
Topic: Cerulean [SuNoFes] [Friendship] [Complete!]
Replies: 19
Views: 5227

Re: Cerulean [SuNoFes] [Friendship]

A friend of mine is writing about the theme of belonging, from the sounds of it this touches quite a bit on that? The tone looks fairly light from the art style you're going for, the title is interesting. Would it be possible to have any more hints in regards to any of those aspects? The main theme...
by Laiska
Wed Aug 12, 2015 3:02 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Wings of Justice [Detective] Cancelled
Replies: 25
Views: 6455

Re: Wings of Justice [Detective] the Kickstarter has begun!

You should put the KS link in your first post, too!
by Laiska
Wed Aug 12, 2015 2:59 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Switching the translation file if 'female' is chosen.
Replies: 8
Views: 1168

Re: Switching the translation file if 'female' is chosen.

In the Japanese translation of my novel, the protagonist refers to themselves as either male or female, so a gender-neutral version of the script (like I'm using for the other languages) isn't possible. (I'm actually confused as to why this is, since Japanese is fairly gender neutral already (unles...
by Laiska
Wed Aug 12, 2015 2:51 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Free!: Arabian Nights [BxB] [Doujinshi Game] [Complete]
Replies: 45
Views: 14416

Re: Free!: Arabian Nights [BxB] [Doujinshi Game]

Who every said it was water? *wink wink nudge nudge* Haha, but yea it just turned out that way because I'm not very good with drawing water. Lol I'd suggest just removing the line of water between the bottle and his mouth xD Water doesn't have enough tension to form a string like that. And then it'...
by Laiska
Wed Aug 12, 2015 5:51 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Free!: Arabian Nights [BxB] [Doujinshi Game] [Complete]
Replies: 45
Views: 14416

Re: Free!: Arabian Nights [BxB] [Doujinshi Game]

That water looks a little... viscous, haha.

But to make a game build, use the "Build Distributions" link in the launcher.
by Laiska
Sun Aug 09, 2015 4:59 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: Graphic Novel - Writer/Artist Partnership
Replies: 6
Views: 912

Re: Graphic Novel - Writer/Artist Partnership

What I think you're referring to here is a Kinetic Novel? The term Graphic Novel usually refers to a long-form comic, in a print medium.
by Laiska
Fri Aug 07, 2015 3:44 am
Forum: I am an Artist
Topic: ❀ I DOODLE ❀ [sprites, CGs, chara design] [closed]
Replies: 18
Views: 3480

Re: ❀ I DOODLE ❀ [sprites, CGs, chara design]

I hope it's alright if I say that I think you're completely undercharging. Your art looks great!
by Laiska
Mon Aug 03, 2015 11:19 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Fairly Dangerous [Dark Comedy][NaNoReno2015]
Replies: 26
Views: 15679

Re: Fairly Dangerous [Dark Comedy][NaNoReno2015]

Heiden wrote:This was definitely my favorite scene in the entire VN, it was very memorable, :D.
You monster xD
(I enjoyed this scene a lot too, even if it made me wary of using the microwave afterwards.)
by Laiska
Mon Aug 03, 2015 12:33 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Luxumbra Chronicles [Fantasy][Visual Novel][Early Demo]
Replies: 5
Views: 1611

Re: Luxumbra Chronicles [Fantasy][Visual Novel][Early Demo]

I'm also struggling slightly on how to 'show the characters'. Using the standard 'look at the player' model kinda unnerves me. Would having the characters face each other work? Having the characters at 3/4, facing each other, could be a way to do it. It's fairly common. And you can make a separate ...
by Laiska
Sun Aug 02, 2015 7:09 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Lilli's Flow of Phantasmagoria [Maku Puppet][CGs][Fantasy]
Replies: 5
Views: 2131

Re: Lilli's Flow of Phantasmagoria [Maku Puppet][CG-based]

1) Yes! This seems like something I would play! 2) No! I think it's always a good idea to keep your scope small, and reigning in the amount of characters you have is an important part of that. If you keep the cast fewer, you can give each of them more screen time, and therefore more depth. 3) Defini...
by Laiska
Sun Aug 02, 2015 7:04 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Yuri Game Jam
Replies: 71
Views: 18099

Re: Yuri Game Jam

yuzukimasu wrote:I'd love to participate in this as well! I do music and am interested in collabing with a group for the jam.
Sent you a PM!
by Laiska
Wed Jul 29, 2015 11:34 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Eldritch Summoners [Fantasy,Adventure (Updated 9/16)
Replies: 5
Views: 2032

Re: The Eldritch Summoners [Fantasy,Adventure,Optional Horro

This looks rather interesting, but as your intro here talks a lot in generalities, I can't get any sense of what this game is actually about. Even if the script is one with many branches, what would you say your basic plot is? Beyond "Brez leaves his home and goes on a journey"?
by Laiska
Sun Jul 26, 2015 7:42 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: 2012 Apocalypse Squad [GxB, GxG] [Dark Magical Girl]
Replies: 5
Views: 1328

Re: 2012 Apocalypse Squad [GxB, GxG] [Dark Magical Girl]

wittyblather wrote:Isn't this just Sailor Moon with continents instead of planets?
Pshaw, as if. *sweats nervously*
Honestly I think that's a great idea xD

This sounds like it would be fun to play! Good luck with this!
by Laiska
Sat Jul 25, 2015 5:14 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: IB Attorney
Replies: 5
Views: 2878

Re: IB Attorney

Could you maybe post some details and screenshots of the game?
by Laiska
Tue Jul 21, 2015 5:09 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Summer Novel Festival Discussion Thread [Jul - Aug Gamejam]
Replies: 48
Views: 7791

Re: Summer Novel Festival Discussion Thread [Jul - Aug Gamej

Kailoto wrote:wrote 17,000 words in a day
Mad props. The most I've ever managed I think is 5k @_@