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Hello! While I'm not a writing pro or anything, I thought I'd give you my two cents on the writing of your VN as you requested~ I like it; it's not bad or anything. There weren't any spelling or grammar mistakes that I could tell, and no parts that stuck out as confusing. I don't know if it was inte...

Alrighty, thanks for naming it for me! :lol: And thank you for the advice! I'm sure it's a lot more interesting when stuff is actually happening while characters are feeling things. Additionally, I've made sure to only have one character's POV the entire time. Also, I enjoyed your fanfic excerpt. I ...

I understand that some people find some styles of writing to be "better" than others, and that some work "better" in VNs than others. I have not seen many good VNs written in a journal-like style, but I'm curious to see what other people think of this style and how well it would ...

Hi! I just played your other game and when I saw this one had a demo, I thought I'd try it out too! ^.^ This one was nice too, it had the same feel as the other one~ In response to your questions: - Should Itsuki have more scenes in the future completed version? Yaaassss. I liked him. He seemed like...

I kind of just wanted to drop in and say that this game is really cute. :3 There were a couple typos here and there (and somewhere in there the background was just empty and black in one of the times Kou was confessing to Midori when it wasn't supposed to be) but everything was just adorable. I actu...

Hi, I listened to your demo reel (despite it being rather long ahaha)! I'm not professional and I don't have any projects that need voice acting at the moment, but you sound pretty good! It'd be cool if you listed more specifically what experience you have, or put up an example of your singing. I th...

Thanks! I thought Willy might be too annoying for people's tastes, but I'm glad you like him!

I agree with the others; you sound good (hey, better than me, and I think I like my voice )
Besides, if you like it, you should keep singing, no matter what others or even you yourself think about your voice!

I've only played one route and got ending 2~ I haven't played the original, but I hope you don't mind if I tell you what I thought. The story was cute and the art was nice. I'd prefer it if you capitalized your "i"s and stuff (there were a couple typos). I don't think it would hurt to deco...

Hello! I played your prologue :) I like it and I think it has a lot of potential. Here's some feedback as you requested~ - The first thing I saw was the black menu screen... hope you change that soon! - Your sprites are fine. They fit well with the bgs and stuff. - I didn't have any problems with yo...

Hi! I listened to your monologue and I think your voice is different (in a good way) from a lot of others I've listened to around here. I hope you're able to make a demo reel soon~

Hey! It's cool that you want to hear other composers' works. I've noticed this thread a couple days ago but it still seems like no one is interested ^.^" (the music thread doesn't get as much attention as it deserves lol) edit: If you can't get people to respond, you can just search around the ...

@Azura: heard the first few seconds of this song and was like whoa this is awesome XD You sound very professional, good job :) the harmonies are all very well done~ @Loveli: I had a hard time distinguishing your voice from the original, but I enjoyed it :) yes if you like singing keep it up! @Leetmu...

Congratulations! :D This game is awesome! It's worthy of being a commercial game but it's free yay thank you :) My friend and I spent a long time getting 4 of the endings... and we both liked it! The art is lovely, the backgrounds fit well, and the music was great (like it ranged from funny to super...

This looks awesome! ...but I wanted to mention that farmers and cowboys did (and still do) live in the same towns. In the olden days of bad long-distance transportation cowboys would leave their ranches to drive the herd to wherever it was being sold but cows have always been raised at stationary r...