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by ParrotWatcher
Sun Jul 29, 2018 2:47 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Big Bad Wolf [BxB] [Yaoi Jam 18] [Romance?, Historical?, Action, Mystery, Fairy Tale] [DEMO 1.0 OUT]
Replies: 18
Views: 8297

Re: Big Bad Wolf [BxB] [Yaoi Jam 18] [Romance?, Historical?, Action, Mystery, Fairy Tale] [DEMO 1.0 OUT]

1. What do you think of the characters, do you have a favorite one? I'd say Gyles is my favourite so far. He's nice, both to Freki and to other people, and I always like nice guys. I don't really have a feel for Rohit right now, but he seems likeable, too. I know Dreiden didn't give the best first ...
by ParrotWatcher
Wed Jul 04, 2018 3:18 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Clarity in Qualia [BxB, Yaoi Game Jam 2018, Slice of life, Drama]
Replies: 9
Views: 4196

Re: Clarity in Qualia [BxB, Yaoi Game Jam 2018, Slice of life, Drama]

This looks like an interesting concept, and I'd like to see where it goes. I do have a couple of issues with what I see so far, though. Firstly, Alyx looks too young. While the other guys look 18-20s, Alyx looks several years younger than that. Would it be possible to have his eye size reduced, to b...
by ParrotWatcher
Wed Jul 04, 2018 2:44 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Yearning: A Gay Story [BxB][School/Slice of Life/Coming Out][16+]
Replies: 67
Views: 28493

Re: Yearning: A Gay Story [BxB][School/Slice of Life][18+][DEMO]

That looks great! I do have one suggestion to make, though: all the guys should be shirtless... Uh, I mean: I probably wouldn't have just Nikhil with the romanceable guys. Either have only the romanceable guys (and probably skip Adam, too, in that case), or have several other guys (like Elliot and N...
by ParrotWatcher
Thu Jun 28, 2018 3:00 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Sexy Litter [BxB, BL, Parody, School, Omegaverse, 18+] DEMO
Replies: 45
Views: 17062

Re: Sexy Litter [BxB, BL, Parody, School, Omegaverse, 18+] DEMO

I've also tried the game and enjoyed it quite a bit. There are quite a few things it does that I'd hate in a serious work (I mean, Omegaverse just to start with), but the parody is obvious enough that it works in the game's favour. :) Regarding the characters, I don't really like Ren, even as a paro...
by ParrotWatcher
Mon Jun 18, 2018 2:08 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]
Replies: 5
Views: 1897

Re: Gehennam Game [Demo VN/Fantasy Dating Sim]

Would it be possible to get some more information about the game? Such as the genders of the protagonist and romances (plus character information), and some indication of the plot?

Thanks. :)
by ParrotWatcher
Tue Jun 12, 2018 10:12 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Belong [FREE][GBNxGB][ROMANCE][CUSTOMISIABLE MC][NEW POVS!]
Replies: 10
Views: 12477

Re: Belong [FREE OTOME] [ROMANCE] [CUSTOMISIABLE MC]

This is a very nice, sweet game, and I completely agree with Isotta about how great the characters are (okay; I've only done Flint's route so far, but I'm assuming the others will hold up too). My only real issue isn't with the game itself, but with the thread title: this is not an "otome"...
by ParrotWatcher
Thu Jun 07, 2018 2:48 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Big Bad Wolf [BxB] [Yaoi Jam 18] [Romance?, Historical?, Action, Mystery, Fairy Tale] [DEMO 1.0 OUT]
Replies: 18
Views: 8297

Re: Big Bad Wolf [BxB] [Yaoi Jam 18] [Romance?, Historical?, Action, Mystery, Fairy Tale]

I get what you mean now! Hmm... I do want to try and write some humorous ends now :D Thanks for the advice~ I think I'll try a generic good, or neutral end. Each boyfriend gets 2 bad ends + 1 good end, by my original plans. The good end being unlocked by playing the bad ends. For example, if you pl...
by ParrotWatcher
Mon Jun 04, 2018 2:53 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Big Bad Wolf [BxB] [Yaoi Jam 18] [Romance?, Historical?, Action, Mystery, Fairy Tale] [DEMO 1.0 OUT]
Replies: 18
Views: 8297

Re: Big Bad Wolf [BxB] [Yaoi Jam 18] [Romance?, Historical?, Action, Mystery, Fairy Tale]

Any chance you can give an example of a bad ending you've found enjoyable? Most games' bad ends I've played are generally sad or characters end up dying. (And this is just me brainstorming now) Maybe I could have a very general good end available unlocked and make the good end an unlockable best en...
by ParrotWatcher
Sun Jun 03, 2018 2:42 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Big Bad Wolf [BxB] [Yaoi Jam 18] [Romance?, Historical?, Action, Mystery, Fairy Tale] [DEMO 1.0 OUT]
Replies: 18
Views: 8297

Re: Big Bad Wolf [BxB] [Yaoi Jam 18] [Romance?, Historical?, Action, Mystery, Fairy Tale]

One of the plans I have for this game is to make good ends unlockable. As in, you have to complete the two bad ends before you can play the good end. This is to enforce the idea of having to work for a happy ending? What do you think of that? Would that turn you away as a player? I would say it dep...
by ParrotWatcher
Sat Jun 02, 2018 2:05 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Virtual Hearts [BxB]
Replies: 8
Views: 2497

Re: Virtual Hearts [BxB] [Yaoi Jam 2018]

This looks fun, and I love Hero's hair (that is Hero, right?) 3) It often frustrates me when video game characters are particularly obtuse, either rushing off and doing the obviously wrong thing, ignoring obvious signs and clues, or generally just handling situations in horrible and unrealistic ways...
by ParrotWatcher
Fri Mar 23, 2018 1:06 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: (Idea for a Visual novel!!!) People Like Us!
Replies: 7
Views: 1804

Re: (Idea for a Visual novel!!!) People Like Us!

As a fan of DRRR, I think this sounds fun. The summary is a bit lacking, but then I realise how hard it would be to summarise DRRR without spoiling anything ("a boy goes to the city to go to school with his best friend and... stuff happens")... :P I'm certainly interested in finding out mo...
by ParrotWatcher
Fri Mar 16, 2018 1:31 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Seventh Circle [Urban Fantasy & Romance VN, AllxAll] [Currently crowdfunding; Demo available!]
Replies: 6
Views: 1546

Re: Seventh Circle [Urban Fantasy & Romance VN, AllxAll]

These are great points and ones we've considered. As a writer I'm hyper aware of tokenism in fiction and it's something I actively work against... I'd like to think that you can already tell our characters have distinct personalities and interesting lives from the demo, but if not, I can assure you...
by ParrotWatcher
Mon Mar 12, 2018 1:11 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Sexy Litter [BxB, BL, Parody, School, Omegaverse, 18+] DEMO
Replies: 45
Views: 17062

Re: Sexy Litter [BxB, BL, Parody, School, Omegaverse, 18+] WIP

illuminate001 wrote: Sun Mar 11, 2018 4:22 am Gou is definitely available! :)
Great! :D
illuminate001 wrote: Sun Mar 11, 2018 4:38 am "Hey kittens, I'm Kaemon and most think I'd be an asshole...mostly I just pound em. ;)"
Okay, now this guy *has* to be an omega. :P
by ParrotWatcher
Sat Mar 10, 2018 4:50 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: To Trust an Incubus (Kickstarter) Now on Steam! [NSFW] [yaoi] [bara] [bxb][sci-fi] [adults only] [erotic] [dating sim]
Replies: 48
Views: 15492

Re: To Trust an Incubus (Kickstarter) WE'RE FUNDED! [NSFW] [yaoi] [bara] [bxb][sci-fi] [adults only] [erotic] [dating si

Well, I've only tried Saji thus far, but it's certainly an improvement. His pleas for help could still be emotional blackmail, but they do feel far more heartfelt. ("Please help me because I'm scared" rather than "You have to help me because we bonded.") And congratulations on th...
by ParrotWatcher
Tue Mar 06, 2018 2:09 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Sexy Litter [BxB, BL, Parody, School, Omegaverse, 18+] DEMO
Replies: 45
Views: 17062

Re: Sexy Litter [BxB, BL, Parody, School, Omegaverse, 18+] WIP

I was a little worried by this one at first, and it took me rather too long to realise that it was actually a parody... :lol: 1. What BL/Yaoi tropes would you like explored and thus made fun of? Well, I've always wanted to see subversions of the seme/uke relationship. This would be especially fun to...