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by dizzcity
Thu Jul 16, 2009 1:21 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Replies: 31
Views: 30067

Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology

Hello! I've finally finished the Wedding Vows project, close to exactly 3 years after I first started it! Category: Kinetic Novel Estimated Playtime: 25 minutes Relationships: BxG and GxB (It's balanced equally between both points of view) Ren'Ai Archives: Yes, please! All copyright permissions have...
by dizzcity
Sat Jul 04, 2009 3:09 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What annoys you in visual novels?
Replies: 43
Views: 4639

Re: What annoys you in visual novels?

Heaven and Hell....an angel and a demon... -Dizzy- These are actually both covered in Animamundi: Dark Alchemist. Just thought I'd throw that out there...XP Oh, really? Haven't seen that yet. Hmmm... ah well, no problem. Scratch that off the list, and there's still plenty of other settings to explo...
by dizzcity
Sat Jul 04, 2009 1:51 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What annoys you in visual novels?
Replies: 43
Views: 4639

Re: What annoys you in visual novels?

As for other settings...it would be nice to have a VN that centers around a journey of some sort. Or if it needs to be centered around only a couple settings, have a greater variety of bgs, to make it feel a bit more fresh. Also, VNs in a fantastical or sci-fi-esque setting get brownie points just ...
by dizzcity
Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:09 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What annoys you in visual novels?
Replies: 43
Views: 4639

Re: What annoys you in visual novels?

Oh, on another note... this is not really an annoyance, but rather more of a wish. I would really like to see protagonists in a love story who do NOT belong to the "single, unattached" category. Anything else. They could be: - Widowed - Divorced - Separated - Engaged / seriously-committed ...
by dizzcity
Mon Jun 29, 2009 9:06 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What annoys you in visual novels?
Replies: 43
Views: 4639

Re: What annoys you in visual novels?

But is there anything that the structure of a VN is particularly prone to that annoys you? For example in interactive fiction, locations and physical objects are fairly straightforward to implement, but living characters are much, much harder. Consequently so many IF games have been designed to tak...
by dizzcity
Sun Jun 21, 2009 11:48 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: How to write froma third-person perspective?
Replies: 2
Views: 604

Re: How to write froma third-person perspective?

Third-person perspective doesn't necessarily mean you know everything that happens. That's an Omniscient Narrator technique... and it's usually pretty boring (produces documentary-like stories). Most of the good stories written from third-person still center themselves around one character... you on...
by dizzcity
Fri Jun 19, 2009 8:08 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Relationship Webs and Characters in VN
Replies: 12
Views: 3326

Re: Relationship Webs and Characters in VN

Wow, thanks for the comments! It does seem like quite a number of projects are all slowly heading in this direction, so hopefully we will be able to achieve it one day. ^^ Um... dstarsboy, your example with Sally is not exactly what I was picturing. What you were doing was basically showing the outw...
by dizzcity
Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:09 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Relationship Webs and Characters in VN
Replies: 12
Views: 3326

Relationship Webs and Characters in VN

Preliminary note: This is a post meant to provide insights and provoke thought about the character creation process, by outlining a different approach to the problem. It's also fairly image-heavy. Start with this maxim: "Every character is best defined not by what he or she does, but by their r...
by dizzcity
Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:51 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: BTW: The EVN Community Ezine #2
Replies: 9
Views: 2312

Re: BTW: The EVN Community Ezine #2

Overall, this edition seems to be better. Random comments on each article: I don't really see the point of the editorial. Um... is it supposed to convince me that the approaches to storytelling are important? Is it trying to introduce the subject of different storytelling approaches? Is it summarisi...
by dizzcity
Thu Dec 18, 2008 10:47 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Some questions.. EDIT: Still need some help
Replies: 9
Views: 1058

Re: Some questions about creative commons and some about Ren'Py

I was unsure too, so I took a deeper look at the legal code on the CC website. This is how they define "adaptation": "Adaptation" means a work based upon the Work, or upon the Work and other pre-existing works, such as a translation, adaptation, derivative work, arrangement of mu...
by dizzcity
Thu Dec 18, 2008 1:03 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Some questions.. EDIT: Still need some help
Replies: 9
Views: 1058

Re: Some questions about creative commons and some about Ren'Py

1. First off, I plan on using music from jamendo in my visual novel. There were times when I considered not using any music, but I think that would be rather boring since it's a longer story. I'm a bit unsure about this part: Share Alike. If you alter, transform, or build upon this work, you may di...
by dizzcity
Thu Dec 18, 2008 12:58 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: WIPs with huge lists of character details
Replies: 22
Views: 3734

Re: WIPs with huge lists of character details

I guess that might work for artists, since images are always attention-grabbing and generate interest, but what about pure writers? It seems that choices are either: 1) Character sheets/profiles (which, I agree, are pretty boring to read) 2) Premise/blurb (which works well for an opening post, but w...
by dizzcity
Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:46 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Ideas Dump
Replies: 1532
Views: 218319

Re: Ideas Dump

Matchmaking Idol You play the school's very popular, very beautiful idol, with tons of fans but a temper (think Chidori Kaname of FMP). Recently, a group of guys have been pursuing you for dates, and they're all weird or unsuitable in some way or another (brainless-athlete, closet-otaku, vain-Prince...
by dizzcity
Sun Dec 07, 2008 3:03 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: The 2008 Lemmy Visual Novel Awards - Results now posted!
Replies: 132
Views: 18584

Re: The 2008 Lemmy Visual Novel Awards

Oh wow, the Lemmy awards are incredibly cute! I'm tempted to release early just to stand a chance of winning one of them. ^_^

-Dizzy-
by dizzcity
Fri Dec 05, 2008 2:25 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Science Girls! - an RPG in Ren'Py
Replies: 29
Views: 5908

Re: Science Girls! - an RPG in Ren'Py

Don't have time for detailed comments like before, so just quick playtest reports on the new build (0.5.13): Interface - Nice work with the instructions screen, putting it on the blackboard. Looks like you took the text directly from Heileen, but it works. Instructions screen before the map appears ...