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by Luminar
Fri Sep 07, 2012 2:52 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)
Replies: 31
Views: 3678

Re: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)

Woah, I'm sorry again for not updating and such. Test's coming this tuesday, so I was studying. But anyways, I edited Fuyumi's sprite because I wasn't satisfied with her proportions. I also plan to edit the others too. After my test, I'm sure I would be able to be free. About Fuyumi's sprite, did I ...
by Luminar
Fri Aug 17, 2012 11:15 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Amy's Super Life! [GxB][School life][Supernatural][Tragedy]
Replies: 118
Views: 35864

Re: Amy's Super Life! [GxB][School life][Supernatural][Trage

Wow, you've updated alot since the last time I've commented! I like the new sprites! :) Amy and Loren look great! :D How about editing the first post and post you updated sprites/lineart instead of the old one to make the users who came here for the first time interested in this? Good luck on finis...
by Luminar
Fri Aug 17, 2012 11:13 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)
Replies: 31
Views: 3678

Re: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)

Sorry for not updating that much, lately, I searched for references, tutorials and such about anatomy and proportions... I made Saiko... Did I perhaphs improve a little in proportions? Though, I think her right hand is too... short? (I think that's the word) Her hand is very small, and her arm is t...
by Luminar
Fri Aug 17, 2012 11:04 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Amy's Super Life! [GxB][School life][Supernatural][Tragedy]
Replies: 118
Views: 35864

Re: Amy's Super Life! [GxB][School life][Supernatural][Trage

Wow, you've updated alot since the last time I've commented! I like the new sprites! :) Amy and Loren look great! :D How about editing the first post and post you updated sprites/lineart instead of the old one to make the users who came here for the first time interested in this? Good luck on finish...
by Luminar
Fri Aug 17, 2012 8:15 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)
Replies: 31
Views: 3678

Re: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)

chocojax wrote:One of the best ways to learn is to study your own body. Look at yourself in a mirror, do the same pose as her, and compare. :v
Though yes, you did improve a bit compared to before. c:

Keep at it~.
Hmm... I see! Thank you for telling me!
Really?? Great! I'm going to practice more! :3

I will!
by Luminar
Fri Aug 17, 2012 8:00 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)
Replies: 31
Views: 3678

Re: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)

Sorry for not updating that much, lately, I searched for references, tutorials and such about anatomy and proportions... I made Saiko... Did I perhaphs improve a little in proportions? Though, I think her right hand is too... short? (I think that's the word)
by Luminar
Fri Aug 17, 2012 12:33 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Looking for a team ver. 2 lol
Replies: 15
Views: 1954

Re: Looking for a team ver. 2 lol

Hmm... I'm quite interested in the story plot... Maybe I could give you some ideas?? :3 I could do writing too, if you would like it... Hmm, but English isn't my mother language and my grammar's not really good.... But still, I would love to help in giving you ideas and such! :D I hope you continue ...
by Luminar
Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:47 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Nemuri [GxB, GxG] - looking for a team
Replies: 10
Views: 2230

Re: Nemuri [GxB, GxG] - looking for a team

Ooh~! How interesting! Haha, yes, it indeed is similar to it. :3 I see, so we need proof readers to proofread, then? :) Okay, sure. Bye!
by Luminar
Thu Aug 16, 2012 7:58 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Nemuri [GxB, GxG] - looking for a team
Replies: 10
Views: 2230

Re: Nemuri [GxB, GxG] - looking for a team

.... Reminds me of naruto... about Sasuke and Itachi... XD But, I'm quite interested in this :3 Hmm... I don't think my writing is that good, but maybe I could give you some ideas? If I could, I wouldn't mind being a writer too... Haha, but since English is not my mother language... so... ^^" B...
by Luminar
Thu Aug 16, 2012 7:17 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Otome Fantasy Seeking Artists
Replies: 18
Views: 3017

Re: Otome Fantasy Seeking Artists

Can I volunteer at the character colouring part? :3 A-ah! Almost forget to give you samples! Here! This is just the way I colour currently , not sure what's going to happen in the future! http://missgamefreak.deviantart.com/#/d5afsd0 http://missgamefreak.deviantart.com/#/d59o07r http://missgamefreak...
by Luminar
Thu Aug 16, 2012 6:47 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Partner(s) wanted for VN/ Otome game
Replies: 5
Views: 1630

Re: Partner(s) wanted for VN/ Otome game

Hey~~! I'm quite interested~! :3 I could give you some ideas if you would like to! English isn't really my mother language... Ehehe... But, I will help as much as I could! :D Ummm... You can PM me if you think I could help!
by Luminar
Sat Aug 11, 2012 11:06 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)
Replies: 31
Views: 3678

Re: Friendship Episode 1: Caught in Between (KN)

Well, I rarely redline but... 79.jpg Gomen for scribbling over your drawing! >//< In case you can't read my scribbles, technically your problem's just the anatomy. The arm, face and the torso doesn't follow proportions. If you want, you may search for some stock drawings in dA for reference or... j...
by Luminar
Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:50 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing Requests
Replies: 7
Views: 1045

Re: Writing Requests

That's probably a good idea Even most native English speakers struggle with it. Yes, especially when English is not my mother languange. Well, you definitely have the right idea. You kept the story brief and didn't inject pointless information, which is a very good trait to have as a writer. But in...
by Luminar
Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:34 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Newbies Visual Novel Project!
Replies: 31
Views: 4279

Re: Newbies Visual Novel Project!

Sorry, I don't really have skype or any of the accounts you mentioned. I'm so glad that I would be accpeted in a group, I can see that all of you are talented. I'm afraid that I'll drag you down... ^^" But anyways! Nice to meet all of you guys!! I hope we could get along really well!! Let's wor...
by Luminar
Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:28 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing Requests
Replies: 7
Views: 1045

Re: Writing Requests

Aww, this is a really sad story and unfortunately one that happens more often than we'd like to imagine. :( Yes, that's true. Actually the insparation to write about bullying was from my past, really. I was bullied for 3 years, and that isn't something nice. I just added something more serious to t...