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by AshenhartKrie
Tue Feb 05, 2013 12:00 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: lemme review your writting!
Replies: 17
Views: 2207

Re: lemme review your writting!

elhlyn wrote:good good,
:) Anything else to add?
by AshenhartKrie
Mon Feb 04, 2013 11:43 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Siren's Plea [GxB] [Romance, Tragedy, Fantasy]
Replies: 41
Views: 12804

Re: Siren's Plea [GxB] [Otome, Romance, Angst, Fantasy]

Oh my, your art is gorgeous. A siren hunter? Hehehe he may be the first I romance. XD I like the sound and look of this. If you need a proofreader, hit me up. needs to stop offering to do that. Has enough schoolwork and VN work of her own..... Ahaha! My friend said the same thing, especially when s...
by AshenhartKrie
Mon Feb 04, 2013 7:24 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7876
Views: 1077131

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

Old, but meh.
I decided to draw the concept for some characters in a story a while ago, which has now been scrapped.
Actually they're the same person... she's just had her soul placed in the dude's body.
What is wrong with you brain?
by AshenhartKrie
Mon Feb 04, 2013 7:19 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
Replies: 5264
Views: 562217

Re: Get that thing off your chest... Now...

@ThisIsNoName
haha thanks for that. ^_^ It really made me laugh.
by AshenhartKrie
Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:19 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: lemme review your writting!
Replies: 17
Views: 2207

Re: lemme review your writting!

okay first of all I don't think its cliche that your monastery boy's niche is cliche, rather it mostly kinda has to be that way in a sense, its excused if you will. Perhaps Arrawn could be (its my opinion) rather uncomfortable about things outside of the monastery even though he is interested in th...
by AshenhartKrie
Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:41 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: lemme review your writting!
Replies: 17
Views: 2207

Re: lemme review your writting!

You were spot on in your last sentence. He grows (again, since he's gone from nature to a child to mature again I'm a horrible person Why did I kill his brother... ). The names are temporary. The names are meant to be in Norwegian, but I forget which is which and I can't be bothered to google it at ...
by AshenhartKrie
Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:33 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: [Swan Grimoire] Character Feedback
Replies: 91
Views: 13395

Re: [Swan Grimoire] Character Feedback

@AshenhartKrie, I though Grell too when I sketched him out XD I even got tempted to give him red hair. But he can't have red hair since Rowan has red hair. He'll probably change a little bit because I'm seriously inclined to making him Asian so he can be from the east. I think that would be cool. O...
by AshenhartKrie
Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:16 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What kind of puzzles do you like in your Adventure games?
Replies: 13
Views: 1956

Re: What kind of puzzles do you like in your Adventure games

None. I hate puzzles. With a passion. -ahem- I do like riddles though. Riddles count as puzzles, right? Being a not very logical person who gets frustrated when things in puzzle games don't go the way I want them to go, I find that riddle are much more fun for me. The answer is hidden within it, and...
by AshenhartKrie
Sun Feb 03, 2013 7:14 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: [Swan Grimoire] Character Feedback
Replies: 91
Views: 13395

Re: [Swan Grimoire] Character Feedback

The guy that stands next to the witch in the concept art looks like Grell.... XD Grell appear everywhere. No one is safe.... I really like the concept of this - and your art. Art so purdy~ I think a name that starts with an A or a T would suit her. -Azalea -Theresa (seriously... what is it with me a...
by AshenhartKrie
Sun Feb 03, 2013 6:38 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: lemme review your writting!
Replies: 17
Views: 2207

Re: lemme review your writting!

I could not be bothered to read all of that, but anyway. This isn't for a VN, but I'm taking advantage of this thread. I'm seriously touchy about people stealing my ideas, so COPYRIGHTED PEOPLES! sorry.... I know no one here would steal it, it's just that it's happened before from someone I trust. -...
by AshenhartKrie
Sun Feb 03, 2013 6:19 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Siren's Plea [GxB] [Romance, Tragedy, Fantasy]
Replies: 41
Views: 12804

Re: Siren's Plea [GxB] [Otome, Romance, Angst, Fantasy]

Oh my, your art is gorgeous.
A siren hunter? Hehehe he may be the first I romance. XD
I like the sound and look of this. If you need a proofreader, hit me up.
needs to stop offering to do that. Has enough schoolwork and VN work of her own.....
by AshenhartKrie
Sun Feb 03, 2013 6:12 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
Replies: 5264
Views: 562217

Re: Get that thing off your chest... Now...

Hey it rhymes! Sadly I need more than a motivation poster. I post in here a lot.... But anyway. I'm a big girl.. and I take karate lessons. So does my 'friend' who thinks she's absolutely great becuase she's a black belt and she's so much better than everyone else. The thing is, I only just started,...
by AshenhartKrie
Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:59 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Sketch requests [closed]
Replies: 22
Views: 2713

Re: Sketch requests [closed]

Ah thank you~~
-hugs of love- good luck with your project by the way!
by AshenhartKrie
Wed Jan 23, 2013 10:55 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Critique Requested Once Again.
Replies: 19
Views: 3311

Re: Critique Requested Once Again.

Heh, you're right, he kinda looks like a cyclops. XD
I really should start using reference pictures too.... Good thing I got a poseable mannquin (or however you spell it) for christmas.
Thanks~