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Thanks to the both of you! I'll send you guys a PM when I get back to my desktop.

Hello again, forumites! It's your 'ol pal, Broodelin, looking for a little help with her next project. :) Essentially, I'm looking for editors/critiquers who would be willing to look over the script of my work-in-progress game, Sunny South Seoul , and give honest feedback on its style, themes, execu...

They're coming along so well that the game should be ready for its big debut by the end of this week. It's pretty exciting!

Can you post some more story/character information here on Lemmasoft? My browser refuses to load your webpage for some odd reason.

I'd be willing to ideabounce with you for Clockwork Heart, as I cannot resist robots.

If that goes well, I can offer up my services to help you co-write Quiet Love also.

A quick update: # Roxanne's neutral, bad, and good endings have been implemented and are ready for private testing. # Christian's optional scene has been drafted but not yet coded. # Caleb's optional scene is in the process of being drafted. # Endings for all characters have been drafted. # Logo is ...

I think that a good mix-up of both is the perfect formula, but it all depends on the style and character you're trying to portray.

New Visual Novel Development Site:

http://broodelingames.vnovel.com/feed/

I'm glad I could be of help to you. I'm sure your prologue's going to turn out great!

If you're still offering, I'm interested.

May I send you a PM with the details?

I've just started coding the last scene before the epilogue. This project is almost complete already, and just in time for my trip into the mountains!

Currently finishing up skimming the introduction and first scene for bugs and typos. My plan is to release the first full act of three scenes and an introduction as an alpha/test build with placeholder graphics where necessary. Should all go according to plan, this should be complete by next Sunday....

No problem.

I hope it helps you out someday.

For a prologue, it does a nice job of setting up the main external conflict, but I feel as though it doesn't do enough on the character side of things. The protagonist just kind of... accepts these things happening to her. There's a little bit of reluctance implied, but we don't know enough about he...

Well, what I do is decide the turning points (choices) in the story first. For example, if Eileen wants a snack, does she choose the apple, the orange, or the bag of chips? Then I figure out what the advantages and disadvantages of each choice are in context of the narrative. Maybe the bag of chips ...