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No unread posts General Writing FAQs and Resources

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Alte

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Mon Jan 23, 2017 7:23 pm

Neeka View the latest post

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alfdale

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Wed Jul 19, 2017 8:00 am

alfdale View the latest post

No unread posts What do you do when it just. doesn't. work?

PMscenarios

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Tue Jul 18, 2017 11:03 pm

Imperf3kt View the latest post

No unread posts Love interest doing something gamer DON't LIKE.

Cakey

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Mon Jul 17, 2017 4:32 pm

Xandra View the latest post

No unread posts Transitioning from novel writing to vn writing?

CathyR

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Sun Jul 16, 2017 8:56 pm

arisan View the latest post

No unread posts Switching POV for one scene?

APkittis

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Sat Jul 15, 2017 10:33 am

hoihoisoi View the latest post

No unread posts Time I should give to player before choosing otome lover?

Cakey

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Fri Jul 14, 2017 1:09 am

Cakey View the latest post

No unread posts Never-ending Whirlwind Flow

磯七ラスミ

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Wed Jul 12, 2017 5:21 pm

Imperf3kt View the latest post

No unread posts What kind of Personalities for a MC?

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JayBlue

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Wed Jul 12, 2017 1:30 pm

Cakey View the latest post

No unread posts How do you avoid "convenient" or "coincidental" plotting?

Yunou

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Wed Jul 12, 2017 7:58 am

SundownKid View the latest post

No unread posts Question on identifying lengthy purple prose

hoihoisoi

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Mon Jul 10, 2017 6:01 am

Kuiper View the latest post

No unread posts Context-free Delight

磯七ラスミ

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Mon Jul 10, 2017 5:18 am

Kuiper View the latest post

No unread posts Unreasonable Teen Requests

TellerFarsight

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Sat Jul 08, 2017 12:40 am

Milkymalk View the latest post

No unread posts Outlines for otome idea - Critiques Welcome!

PedalRocket

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Sun Jul 02, 2017 8:33 am

Jordgubben View the latest post

No unread posts The middle part is the hardest to figure out...

Horma

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Thu Jun 29, 2017 9:45 am

chocoberrie View the latest post

No unread posts VNs without dialogue

Horma

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Tue Jun 27, 2017 4:02 pm

Horma View the latest post

No unread posts A Short Opening Script to a New VN, Any Thoughts Appreciated

MalusGreen

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Wed Jun 21, 2017 5:15 pm

Zelan View the latest post

No unread posts How to write and designing a character correctly?

ScarletKnives

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Tue Jun 20, 2017 10:49 am

hoihoisoi View the latest post

No unread posts First short visual novel question

asahi_tanuki

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asahi_tanuki View the latest post

No unread posts Should I really put this out there so early?

quinnsea

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Sun Jun 18, 2017 11:03 am

Scribbles View the latest post

No unread posts Weaving a mystery

Hazel

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Sun Jun 11, 2017 9:27 pm

hoihoisoi View the latest post

No unread posts Playing with no MC visual

Neeka

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Sat Jun 10, 2017 10:53 am

Neeka View the latest post

No unread posts Writing in a different language

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Banya

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Wed Jun 07, 2017 8:29 pm

Banya View the latest post

No unread posts Are there a One-scene games?

ido

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Wed Jun 07, 2017 8:23 pm

Banya View the latest post

No unread posts Naming characters, avoiding the same first letter?

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Shinoki

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Wed May 31, 2017 6:57 am

fullmontis View the latest post

No unread posts Writing someone else's story

MoonByte

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Sat May 27, 2017 1:43 pm

Mammon View the latest post

No unread posts Character types in Otome VN

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Cakey

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Mon May 15, 2017 4:45 pm

Mammon View the latest post

No unread posts The Invincible Protagonist

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Twoflower

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Sun May 14, 2017 11:42 pm

YossarianIII View the latest post

No unread posts Common routes?

dfbreezy

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Sun May 14, 2017 12:46 pm

Xandra View the latest post

No unread posts Ways to make a "slice of life" story interesting?

Sonomi

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Tue May 09, 2017 5:08 am

Hazel View the latest post

No unread posts Would anybody be willing to read my Death Note VN?

NikiFig

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Thu May 04, 2017 9:52 pm

NikiFig View the latest post

No unread posts Pacing your scenes

Sonomi

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Thu May 04, 2017 9:35 pm

Imperf3kt View the latest post

No unread posts Western vs. Eastern Storytelling

pigionsdeliver

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Thu May 04, 2017 8:07 am

pigionsdeliver View the latest post

No unread posts Writing dialog for characters of different genders

Kuiper

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Mon May 01, 2017 9:04 am

Kuiper View the latest post

No unread posts How to write a VN based off Mythology/Folklore/Fairytale?

shadowkazaki

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Sun Apr 30, 2017 2:31 pm

Katy133 View the latest post

No unread posts How would one communicate a change in language in the story?

hikarinakano

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Sat Apr 29, 2017 6:38 pm

Katy133 View the latest post

No unread posts Wanting Critique- Script- 18+ / mature content

Freak-Angel

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Thu Mar 30, 2017 4:51 pm

Mammon View the latest post

No unread posts Writing With Multiple Main Characters

Neeka

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Mon Mar 27, 2017 5:05 pm

Neeka View the latest post

No unread posts Good locations on starting a mystery/adventure story?

LittleRainySeasons

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Sat Mar 25, 2017 11:47 pm

SundownKid View the latest post

No unread posts How do you write and organize your branching?

wyverngem

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Fri Mar 24, 2017 2:02 pm

SpeCTRL View the latest post

No unread posts Attachment(s) Route Choices: Free Will vs. Force

Mama J

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Mon Mar 20, 2017 7:50 pm

TheJerminator15 View the latest post

No unread posts Having trouble checking ;;

Chell

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Fri Mar 10, 2017 8:42 pm

Chell View the latest post

No unread posts Projectstuck: How to pace yourself?

thornofthelily

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Mon Mar 06, 2017 7:28 pm

Laurence L View the latest post

No unread posts Eliminating all forms of "to be": Active Voice

Sonomi

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Mon Mar 06, 2017 7:00 pm

Laurence L View the latest post

No unread posts Opening with a hentai scene, in a non-hentai-without-plot VN

hikarinakano

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Sun Mar 05, 2017 5:34 am

usagi236 View the latest post

No unread posts Critique Needed

TennisHero

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Fri Feb 17, 2017 7:31 pm

TennisHero View the latest post

No unread posts Any suggestions on how to strengthen this external conflict?

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Yunou

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Tue Feb 14, 2017 12:40 pm

Yunou View the latest post

No unread posts Yet to be named characters speaking

Shinoki

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Mon Feb 13, 2017 4:41 am

PassiveChicken View the latest post

No unread posts Meaningful choices?

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pelmeniki

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Wed Feb 08, 2017 4:24 am

Mammon View the latest post

No unread posts How visual novel writing is different

Kuiper

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Thu Feb 02, 2017 11:52 pm

YossarianIII View the latest post

No unread posts My first draft is better than my second?

hikarinakano

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Sun Jan 22, 2017 7:28 pm

Imperf3kt View the latest post

No unread posts ¶ Share fun snippets of your work, anyone?

LeonDaydreamer

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LeonDaydreamer View the latest post

No unread posts VN's Without Narration

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ForkAndKnife

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ForkAndKnife View the latest post

No unread posts Similarities between VNs

Mama J

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gekiganwing View the latest post

No unread posts Suggestive Time Lapses

磯七ラスミ

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Katy133 View the latest post

No unread posts Emoji detours

磯七ラスミ

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Zelan View the latest post

No unread posts Secrets behind the one-dimensional MC?

Mammon

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Katy133 View the latest post

No unread posts Critique Wanted

Ragnos

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Sun Dec 25, 2016 8:59 pm

Ragnos View the latest post

No unread posts Character with ambiguous gender or outright deceptive

ghostpel

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Thu Dec 22, 2016 7:54 am

Frullo View the latest post

No unread posts Using Different Themes Between Routes

hikarinakano

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hikarinakano View the latest post

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