Ooh, this was a really pretty VN. I loved the animated backgrounds, and that Kali had so many sprites to showcase her walking around, peering about corners, looking all curious... It added a lot of life to the VN, and was a really nice touch.
The design of the Dreamweaver was also really pretty - I love how elaborate his clothes are, and all the whites...
Actually, the aesthetic of the whole VN was very pretty. The whole thing felt very 'dream-like', which I guess fits the theme of the story perfectly? XD
I imagine the very cursive font would be a pain to read if the story was any longer, but since it was short and sweet, it wasn't a problem - and went well with the general atmosphere of the story.
Though it was short, I think there was some nice depth to the story:
the conversation about the importance of names was especially nice. Kali has some good characterisation - she's very believable for a young girl, and asks a lot of complex questions about the world in a very simple and innocent way. She contrasts nicely with the Dreamweaver, who seems more cynical (about the fact people don't often remember him/come back), so their interactions were interesting. It's nice to have characters who can play off each other like this.
The music, too, was really pretty - it suits the story well.
All in all, this was a really enjoyable experience. It's clear a lot of effort went into it, and I think you did a really good job! u///u
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if you wanna check! u///u
With a yandere dating sim, a moemoe moege about cute grills and food, a sad GxG story, a sad GxB story, there should be something for everyone <3
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