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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 4:42 am 
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Faery Tale
A Romantic Fantasy Visual Novel
This is NOT a dating simulation.


Faery Tales Featured
-- They are NOT true to the originals, by any means.

Red Riding Hood
The Nixie of the Millpond
Cinderella
The Red Shoes

Free to download. Free to distribute.

This is rated PG-16 for moral safety's sake.
-- This contains NO adult content, but there is quite a bit of suggestive story content and a couple of nearly nude female images.

748 screens of dialogue
19 Menus
12,753 words.
8 possible endings.

Downloads available in Mediafire: 200MB
or Internet Archive

06/19/11 - Version 3.0 Proofread & edited by Riveria.
-- Hopefully we got it all this time. :)

All art was photo-manipulated and rendered in Photoshop by me.
-- All of the photos used in my manipulations were from free to use resources:

Deviant Art
MorgueFiles
WikiMedia
StockXchng

All of the music and sound effects were also from free to use resources:
Jamendo
Museopen
SoundBible
Partners in Rhyme
Free Loop and Sound

Full credits listed in the game.

The Characters:
-- They are all name-able.

The Fair maiden
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The Fae
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The Nixie
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The Prince
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The Sorcerer
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The Big Bad Wolf
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I would be VERY interested in your opinions and critiques.


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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 6:35 am 
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Downloading naooo! X3

EDIT : Broken link for me :o
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 7:49 am 
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I'll still download it even if its for 16+... why? Cause i love the concept and.... I even play an 18+ BL games, what's to back off over a 16+ one? XDD

Sorry, but I'd really download it....

EDIT: Didn't notice Azurextwilight's post! Yeah, the link is broken!!!!!!!!! X((

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 7:58 am 
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I just made it as the other mediafire files and changed "#" to "?" and deleted ",1", so I got the link. As it seems, in this folder there are links for mac and windows (.exe) file.

http://www.mediafire.com/?58iw6ufp0vasw

This is a direct link for windows:
http://www.mediafire.com/?2ot7qeo20epqt4u

I hope it helped. =)

Looking forward to playing the game. I love the artwork so far!

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:07 am 
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azureXtwilight wrote:
EDIT : Broken link for me :o
Any file link?


OtomeWeekend wrote:
EDIT: Didn't notice Azurextwilight's post! Yeah, the link is broken!!!!!!!!! X((


Sorry! Sorry!
-- Not enough sleep, I guess.
Folder -- > http://www.mediafire.com/?58iw6ufp0vasw

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:12 am 
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Victoria wrote:
I just made it as the other mediafire files and changed "#" to "?" and deleted ",1", so I got the link. As it seems, in this folder there are links for mac and windows (.exe) file.


So sorry. I was dead tired and posted the wrong folder link.
-- That Mac was a less than perfect version. It's been replaced. (Finally!)

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Looking forward to playing the game. I love the artwork so far!


I hope you like it!

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 4:21 pm 
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165 megs, holy guacamole! I hope it's worth it...

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:19 pm 
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165 megs, holy guacamole! I hope it's worth it...


I hope so too!

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 11:08 pm 
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I enjoyed it, though I had some trouble suspending my disbelief.
With the exception of Tristan (wolf guy), none of the guys even knew the main character before that day, and yet all of the guys wanted to kiss her and ended up marrying her (or making her his mistress) if they got the kiss.
Then again, this is based off of fairy tales (which do that sort of thing a lot) so a little leeway can be given for that. The art is very pretty, and the music is nice.

The wolf dude, despite being stubborn and the human-with-fluffy-ears-and-tail (which I don't normally like), was my favorite character. He had pretty hair, derp. <3 My favorite part was definitely when
the main character said "Screw you, you bastard! I'm going home!" and then danced home, on the sorcerer's path. xD Now that's showing him!


When I was playing through Oberon's path (I kissed the prince both times, but declined Princey's offer), I got an error saying "frog6" and "frog7" weren't defined as images? (it said around line 150) , so I had to hit ignore for both those errors, and didn't get to see what they might have been.

Overall, an enjoyable game.

Edit: Here's a traceback for one of the errors I got:
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/cinderella.rpy", line 154, in script
        show image frog7 with dissolve
  File "game/cinderella.rpy", line 154, in python
        show image frog7 with dissolve
NameError: name 'frog7' is not defined

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It's such a pretty game with pretty music!

Hmm, I don't know why but I liked the wolf's route the best~

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azureXtwilight wrote:
It's such a pretty game with pretty music!

Hmm, I don't know why but I liked the wolf's route the best~


I think it's because his route is somehow most realistic and true to their characters, at least the one
where you find grandma's recipes and decide to wait with a marriage.


Fairytales are mostly simple and easy to understand, so it wouldn't be suitable to complain because of an easy storyline and sometimes unexpected (but hardly believable) twists, but it was interesting enough for me to try finding all of the endings.

I only had some problems with a game crashing or simply stopping, but I'm not sure is it to my computer or something else, as I had to forcefully restart my computer to start working properly.
I also had an error with the frog6 and frog7 pictures.

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Lotus wrote:
I enjoyed it, though I had some trouble suspending my disbelief.
With the exception of Tristan (wolf guy), none of the guys even knew the main character before that day, and yet all of the guys wanted to kiss her and ended up marrying her (or making her his mistress) if they got the kiss.
Then again, this is based off of fairy tales (which do that sort of thing a lot) so a little leeway can be given for that.


Thank you. :) Not a whole lot of character development in fairy tales as a rule.

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The art is very pretty, and the music is nice.


Thank you very much. All that art took several weeks to makes. The music, however, was a miraculous find.

Lotus wrote:
The wolf dude, despite being stubborn and the human-with-fluffy-ears-and-tail (which I don't normally like), was my favorite character. He had pretty hair, derp.


Aww! Thank you.

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<3 My favorite part was definitely when
the main character said "Screw you, you bastard! I'm going home!" and then danced home, on the sorcerer's path. xD Now that's showing him!


That's my favorite too. :)

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When I was playing through Oberon's path (I kissed the prince both times, but declined Princey's offer), I got an error saying "frog6" and "frog7" weren't defined as images? (it said around line 150) , so I had to hit ignore for both those errors, and didn't get to see what they might have been.


(face-palm) It was because I included the word "image". Fixed it. However, it'll be several hours before version 2 will finish up loading. (sigh)

THANK YOU for catching that! (I guess none of my testers made it that far in the game.)

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Overall, an enjoyable game.


Thank you very much!

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azureXtwilight wrote:
It's such a pretty game with pretty music!


Thank you!

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Hmm, I don't know why but I liked the wolf's route the best~


I freely admit I spent a lot more time on Wolfe's character. I guess I liked him best too. :)

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Victoria wrote:
Wolfe's route...
I think it's because his route is somehow most realistic and true to their characters, at least the one
where you find grandma's recipes and decide to wait with a marriage.


Fairy tale or not, I wanted at least One realistic ending in there.

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Fairytales are mostly simple and easy to understand, so it wouldn't be suitable to complain because of an easy storyline and sometimes unexpected (but hardly believable) twists, but it was interesting enough for me to try finding all of the endings.[/spoiler]


Interesting enough to keep playing is more than enough to make me happy!

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I only had some problems with a game crashing or simply stopping, but I'm not sure is it to my computer or something else, as I had to forcefully restart my computer to start working properly.


I suspect that is because of your video card. Before I bought my new computer that runs Windows 7, 64 bit, my computer did exactly the same thing with VNs -- stopped cold, made the pictures look wonky, AND crashed.

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I also had an error with the frog6 and frog7 pictures.


Found the image error and have fixed it. Now it's just a matter of waiting several hours for all the uploads to finish. (I'm on DSL.) Sigh...

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