Hired Gun

[Wright1000]

I understand. I will look for an editor for my next project.

[Celestine]

Here's a guess maybe they mean your writing in a 3rd person point of view with analysis in a 1st person character's story.

[Celestine]

I'm posting again only because out of my curiosity I wanted to play the game.
It's really adventurous. Your writing style wasn't what I had expected people were saying it is. Not really anyway. To me it seem like it was all in Robinette view of everything.

That was so cruel. WHy did Robinette have to die no matter what? I got all 3. I can't believe I got End 3 last, usually surviving one of the things I'm best at in a story. You were right not to add more emotion to the story otherwise then it wouldn't be to the quick in its fast pace action.

I think the cold -straight forward- calculating way of speaking fits Victor's personality. I liked how the story was quick and to the point. It makes sense in a hostage-assasin mission situation.

The pictures for the background were really nice, especially

the mountain. I liked how you added the snow falling to the appeal, make it seem more real.

It's too bad there isn't going to be a sequel. I'm going to miss the assasin.

[Wright1000]

That was so cruel. WHy did Robinette have to die no matter what? I got all 3. I can't believe I got End 3 last, usually surviving one of the things I'm best at in a story. You were right not to add more emotion to the story otherwise then it wouldn't be to the quick in its fast pace action.

It's true that most people think that Robinette will die no matter what. But what about Ending 2? Ending 2 never stated that Robinette is dead. It stated "Maybe she is dead". So, I may continue with this story and may create a sequel.

[Celestine]

Haha your right , sorry, forgot the exact wording since I was basing it off what the boss said.

I Hope you do! It'd be great to see Robinette and Victor again

[Wright1000]

It depends on whether I find a good artist.
A lot of artists have betrayed me, so I am not sure about it.
But if I make a sequel, I may use a different sprite for Victor.
One that makes him look more scary and more ruthless.

[Celestine]

I don't see why you would change Victor. What's wrong with his appearance? His face and stance seem stoic enough that fit his sentences in the story. Unless you mean his drawing style doesn't fit with the other sprites drawing styles.

[Wright1000]

That's right, but the sprite doesn't look very professional.
If you look at the sprites of the other two assassins, they look much better.