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Wright1000
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by Wright1000 » Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:14 am
lordcloudx wrote:
the protagonist is Eri with permanent memory loss. This is the reason why she's so obsessed with finding out everything there is to know about Eri. She just wanted to be acquainted with her past self.
Oh, I didn't even know.
I thought the protagonist was a boy.
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by lordcloudx » Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:15 am
Heh, please spoiler tag your response since it spoils the whole story for Wings II
I intentionally wrote it so that the gender of the protagonist would be ambiguous and seemingly masculine. The fact that the protagonist is Eri part of the impact of the climax scene in Wings II.
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by Wright1000 » Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:18 am
Spoiler tag added. Climax scene? I don't understand.
There was no CGI. Did you release another version of Wings ii?
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by lordcloudx » Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:20 am
Um, no. The climax scene I'm referring to is this type of climax
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Climax_%28narrative%29
In Wings II that would be:
The conversation between present Eri and past Eri.
Furthermore, I think we're going to get called out by an admin for this off-topic conversation sooner or later, so I guess we'd better take it to PM if you wish to continue.
How do you make your games? I see. Thank you for the prompt replies, but it is my considered opinion that you're doing it wrong inefficiently because I am a perfushenal professional. Do it my way this way and we can all ascend VN Nirvana together while allowing me to stroke my ego you will improve much faster. Also, please don't forget to thank me for this constructive critique or I will cry and bore you to death respond appropriately with a tl;dr rant discourse of epic adequately lengthy proportions. - Sarcasm Veiled in Euphemism: Secrets of Forum Civility by lordcloudx (Coming soon to an online ebook near you.)
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by Wright1000 » Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:07 am
All right.
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by Applegate » Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:16 pm
Well, that was time well spent! I liked the story, even if it was a bit whimsical. It emulated the feel of romcoms from the past well enough, though.
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by RemnantDream » Wed Aug 17, 2011 5:30 pm
That was so cutee. Very short and sweet. :D I really enjoyed it. I always get excited when you release a game because your games are adorable.
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by Blue Lemma » Wed Aug 17, 2011 10:36 pm
Hmm, I'll have to give this a whirl soon. Something amuses the heck out of me about "The Affair" being in cute bubbly letters
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