Dusk ~A Moonlight Romance~ (KN)

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Dusk ~A Moonlight Romance~ (KN)

#1 Post by chensterrain » Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:02 pm

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For shy, unassuming Angelica Dove, senior year started out like any other – until a chance meeting with sallow-skinned heartthrob Ephraim transformed her life into a tumultuous tempest of passion. But does a dark secret lie beneath those chiselled biceps...?

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-Two unbelievably gorgeous guys
-4k words of scintillating text

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(I wrote the script for this in the middle of the night about a year ago, found it lurking on my hard drive about a week ago and figured I could use it to practise making UIs and using those nifty screen language functions before launching into my next game, so I apologise in advance for the quality! Hopefully someone'll find it at least vaguely amusing. :lol:

Oh, and any similarities to that other vampire novel are purely coincidental!)

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#2 Post by clannadman » Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:09 pm

Looking at the worm coming out of the apple, can I ask if this is a comedic parody or a serious romance? I mean, obviously it coincidentally bears similarities to another vampire novel but... :P

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#3 Post by chensterrain » Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:13 pm

Heh, yeah, it's a total parody. (Though, uh... I actually don't completely hate Twilight. Maybe.

...Don't tell anyone :()

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#4 Post by clannadman » Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:16 pm

Your secret's safe with me :D So long as, that is, nobody else browses this forum :roll: Loving the artwork by the way, especially the old storybook layout :)

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#5 Post by Camille » Fri Aug 05, 2011 4:49 pm

LMAO this was amazing. There were so many great lines that I'd be here forever if I tried to quote all my favorites. I love the storybook layout of it.
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#6 Post by MaiMai » Fri Aug 05, 2011 5:17 pm

Oh my glob, I have to play this.
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#7 Post by Mild Curry » Fri Aug 05, 2011 5:19 pm

"Tall Glass of Chocolate Milk"

I lol'ed. :lol:

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#8 Post by Fawn » Fri Aug 05, 2011 5:34 pm

Hahahha, that was so worth procrastinating my homework for! The gui is lovely, very original :) Great work. The only thing I'd suggest is maybe making the options "banner" thing a little larger if you use it again, though, the text was a little small in non-full screen mode.
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#9 Post by chensterrain » Fri Aug 05, 2011 6:00 pm

You guys are awesome :D Thanks for the comments!

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#10 Post by aestate » Fri Aug 05, 2011 10:09 pm

YOU ARE MY IDOL. ;_; You write the funniest stuff, TRU FAX. (And the layout / art was absolutely gorgeous!)
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#11 Post by NatsukiDeath » Fri Aug 05, 2011 11:07 pm

Oh.. Wow! Haha This was just awesome and unexpected!

"Jesus" Hah Nice touch there!~

I loved this and will be telling others to see this!

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#12 Post by carosene » Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:38 am

Oh, the epicness. XD I loved this so much. Your purple prose is hilariously spot-on!

I'm wondering how the hell you cranked this out so quickly after Lucky Rabbit Reflex. XD Where does your workdrive come from?!
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#13 Post by Veniae » Sat Aug 06, 2011 10:34 am

*dies laughing*

I love the art, and the text itself is hilarious. Way to go, this is made of win.

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#14 Post by Lumen_Astrum » Mon Aug 08, 2011 7:51 am

I let my Twilight fan bestfriend play it. XD
(I might as well as play it when I get the time though)
She said it was awesome, yet she found it too short.
And she's demanding a continuation. XD

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#15 Post by Sublime » Mon Aug 08, 2011 11:46 pm

Most hilarious parody I have ever had the pleasure of reading. You are so wonderful with comedy, I hope you continue to make such funny VNs in the future. :) I downloaded not expecting to be so thoroughly amused but you had me snorting in laughter so hard that even my brother had to stop playing his video games to ask me what was so funny. :lol:

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