Dusk ~A Moonlight Romance~ (KN)

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#16 Post by Auro-Cyanide »

...Struggling. To breathe. Laughing. Too much...

That, was excellent. Everything about it was absolutely perfect. There isn't really much else I could say. I laughed all the way through it and your were spot on with the funny bits.
GUI wonderful, writing wonderful, art wonderful (seriously, I love your style and you have improved since Lucky Rabbit Reflex.) I demand chapter 2.

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#17 Post by azureXtwilight »

PASSION AND CONSTIPATION.
ANGELICA CHASITY ROSEBUD HONEYDEW DOVE.

I have no other words to say other than...

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I DEMAND CONTINUATION.
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#18 Post by Coren »

I love his usage of romantic imagery!

"... going to tear all the classmates apart to have you to myself..."
" ... a succulent leg of lamb...."
"...own personal brand of meow meow"

THIS IS HILARIOUS. DO PLEASE CONTINUE. :D

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#19 Post by PrettySammy09 »

Oh. My. Lord.

That was BEAUTIFUL.

I mean, Twilight practically makes fun of itself, so bravo to you for making a hilarious little parody here.

My favorite recurring jokes included the heroine's reference to her "brown-hairedness" (which was turned into pretty much every part of speech I could recognize.) Also gems such as:
"I didn't follow."
"Angel: I don't follow."
GOD. KILL ME.

Please tell me Quilete is a pun on Quaaluds (anti-anxiety medication). Because that's ALL I could say when I read that. I kept thinking Jason (or Jordan) was from the Quaaluds tribe and it cracked me up immensely.

"I pondered on whether any of my other classmates knew how to read."

THANK YOU. <3 That was loooveely.

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#20 Post by chensterrain »

Thanks, guys! :D
PrettySammy09 wrote:Please tell me Quilete is a pun on Quaaluds (anti-anxiety medication). Because that's ALL I could say when I read that. I kept thinking Jason (or Jordan) was from the Quaaluds tribe and it cracked me up immensely.
Quileute is actually the name of the tribe in the book (and in real life, I think) but I'm totally going to pretend that was intentional, hoho~ ;)

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#21 Post by PrettySammy09 »

chensterrain wrote:Thanks, guys! :D
PrettySammy09 wrote:Please tell me Quilete is a pun on Quaaluds (anti-anxiety medication). Because that's ALL I could say when I read that. I kept thinking Jason (or Jordan) was from the Quaaluds tribe and it cracked me up immensely.
Quileute is actually the name of the tribe in the book (and in real life, I think) but I'm totally going to pretend that was intentional, hoho~ ;)
Oh wow, shows how much I know about Twilight. (Read the first hundred pages and called it a day...) xD

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#22 Post by Aquane »

Pffffff XD Hahahahahaha! Tall glass of chocolate milk... xD this was hilarious. I watched the movies at least, so I was better able to appreciate this >:3 I can now say something good about Twilight! It makes for good parodies!

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#23 Post by RemnantDream »

I just have to say..

I love you.
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#24 Post by tecm »

This is delightfully awful, though it does lose some of the magic for being intentional. It's a wonderful piece, and I can't play it for long stretches without frequent breaks to laugh. My ribs curse you

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#25 Post by Snow Blossom »

Dying. From stomach pain. Too... much... laughter... GAHAHAHA
This is awesome.

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#26 Post by lepapillonrouge »

I died.

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#27 Post by Version »

Oh Lord. That was the funniest thing I have ever played. xD
CHAPTER 2! PLEASE!
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Omo, omo, omo, aigoo.
Sorry for all of these: [!!!!]

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#28 Post by Arisu »

This made my evening. Bloody brilliant <3

Exceptionally well written, and the art and GUI is lovely.

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#29 Post by BladeDancer »

First- This is BRILL. I am not a fan of twilight, but a parody of a parody hell yes :D
Second- I like Jared.
Rhirs- Lucky Rabbit was great! I really liked Rhett

Thanks for making these awesome things, I'm in the process of making a game too, but text-based or rpg maker since I cannot draw
But these things inspire me to keep working!

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#30 Post by KnightofWind »

Um my computer doesn't allow me to download zip files, is there another way I can download this?

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