This was so cute! I didn't think of Jamie as selfish, but more as... uh... bad at making decisions? XD I guess she was being cowardly for running away from her feelings and from her responsibility to tell Jamie the truth, but considering how long she's been suffering and will suffer for her actions, I can't help but feel sorry for her.
Aaanyways, I really liked this! I'm a sucker for drama and tearjerkers, and this one has great potential! Hope there will be a continuation in the future! :3
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It was really good, but like Hayzel said it is a bit short. I can't wait till next installment!
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I loved it! i just read all the chapters (sorry for not downloading the KN D: )
It was a bit expected @ the end where Liam weds the other twin o; .
But non-less, it was a sweet ending <3 .
It was a bit expected @ the end where Liam weds the other twin o; .
But non-less, it was a sweet ending <3 .
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Re: [KN] Saving Project: Blind? (Part One) LOOKING FOR REVIE
I just found out your story has been done in a one-shot manga.
It's from Kono Koi wo Wasurenai (Chapter 3 - A flower blooms in you)
The plot & everything is mostly the same. Just the different flower , accident & a few other details.
Did you know of this before? If you did, it's not too creative... & It's been copied, I guess.
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It's from Kono Koi wo Wasurenai (Chapter 3 - A flower blooms in you)
The plot & everything is mostly the same. Just the different flower , accident & a few other details.
Did you know of this before? If you did, it's not too creative... & It's been copied, I guess.
X: .
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