Pure Tears (GxB Otome)

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#1 Post by Tenxinori » Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:44 pm

Summary: Kaya is dating her childhood friend Tooya, but he doesnt seem to return her feelings. Its her birthday, and they were supposed to meet at park but then she sees him with another girl in a store. She goes to meet him at park and he gets there an hour late. Controlled by her grief, will she say something that she would regret? And if yes, will she able to fix things?

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I only own the story XD
Character art and bg from bassnovel, and no cgs >.<
Music from Romeo and Juliet movie

Characters:
Kaya <- the mc
Tooya <- mc's childhood friend o.o
Kookiie (not the way you pronounce cookie , its like cooki-ee)
Mystery Character <- not obtainable guy but he has an important role :3

2 obtainable guys. Well I decided on 5 endings. [one of them is the true ending]

The game contains 227 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 1,703 words,
for an average of 7.5 words per screen.
The game contains 4 menus.

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#2 Post by Cidz » Tue Oct 04, 2011 11:36 pm

I just played this game and got all 5 endings.

It was a very touching story! the music added to the sadness as well. I enjoyed it for a short gxb game. (ah sorry for not saying much, but like i really did like it lol im just not big on words >_> )

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#3 Post by Cute.Sakura.Princess » Wed Oct 05, 2011 12:51 pm

Yay I love these charas and even though story is short it feels so... true, realistic(that creeps me out, cause I saw a ghost and I'm telling that this is realistic story)I just played on my insticts and got true ending ^^!
All in all this is great visual novel!:D

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#4 Post by lunanight » Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:29 pm

It would of been great if it was longer, but still great story!
"I might break or I might wither. But right now, in your arms, I bloom like a flower..."

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#5 Post by Tenxinori » Wed Oct 05, 2011 3:14 pm

@Cidz : I am glad you like it :3
@Cute.Sakura.Princess : Yay I wanted it to seem a little realistic :'D (Actually if you play all endings there are tiny details that piece together something.. o3o hehe)
@lunanight : Thank you XD

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#6 Post by PockieHoshi » Wed Oct 05, 2011 3:52 pm

I just played your game now and got all the endings ^-^!
The characters were great and so was the story ='D!
(But I think you could've used your art for the game,You shouldn't be ashamed to use it,I've seen it before and its really cute 8D!)
Congrats on finishing your first visual novel! I look forward to seeing more from you ^_^!

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#7 Post by Tenxinori » Wed Oct 05, 2011 4:37 pm

PockieHoshi wrote:I just played your game now and got all the endings ^-^!
The characters were great and so was the story ='D!
(But I think you could've used your art for the game,You shouldn't be ashamed to use it,I've seen it before and its really cute 8D!)
Congrats on finishing your first visual novel! I look forward to seeing more from you ^_^!
Ty Q^Q Since you played all paths o.o did you notice
the "girl" and "Kookie" had same text color >:D There is a mystery to it XD

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#8 Post by Cain0425 » Thu Oct 06, 2011 5:40 am

if the story and the game was longer i think it would have been better i did not get much story so i am not sure what to say about it

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#9 Post by PockieHoshi » Thu Oct 06, 2011 7:37 am

Tenxinori wrote:
PockieHoshi wrote:I just played your game now and got all the endings ^-^!
The characters were great and so was the story ='D!
(But I think you could've used your art for the game,You shouldn't be ashamed to use it,I've seen it before and its really cute 8D!)
Congrats on finishing your first visual novel! I look forward to seeing more from you ^_^!
Ty Q^Q Since you played all paths o.o did you notice
the "girl" and "Kookie" had same text color >:D There is a mystery to it XD
Lolz,I actually DID notice that
the "girl" and "Kookie" had the same text colour,but I have no idea what the mystery is ;A;!
(could it be they're...twins :s.......lolz nah that would be incest then,ew xD)
OMG i have no idea what the mystery is,please enlighten me Tenxinori-sensei :o!

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#10 Post by Tenxinori » Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:28 pm

@Cain0425 : Well ty for reading it anyway >o<

@PockieHoshi : O.O Ready for major enlightenment? 8D
The truth is............KOOKIE IS NOT HUMAN O3O
The person who helped her time travel is Kookie, and he turned into girl..(did that sound weird O.O"") to create misunderstanding (since tooya's fate was to die that say) but he is kaya's bestie , so seeing her cry, he tries to fix it by trying to help her time travel. (thats why if u believe what he say, he help you, otherwise Kookie "appear outa nowhere" and ask her to be with him) O3O

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#11 Post by lunanight » Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:33 pm

Oh I see, I was curious about who the mysterious person was.
"I might break or I might wither. But right now, in your arms, I bloom like a flower..."

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#12 Post by lunanight » Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:41 pm

Something bugs me though, did he really forget the present or actually didnt buy it, and was actually with another girl not to pick a present for her, and why didn't he smile at her the way he did with other girls?
"I might break or I might wither. But right now, in your arms, I bloom like a flower..."

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#13 Post by PockieHoshi » Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:46 pm

Tenxinori wrote:@Cain0425 : Well ty for reading it anyway >o<

@PockieHoshi : O.O Ready for major enlightenment? 8D
The truth is............KOOKIE IS NOT HUMAN O3O
The person who helped her time travel is Kookie, and he turned into girl..(did that sound weird O.O"") to create misunderstanding (since tooya's fate was to die that say) but he is kaya's bestie , so seeing her cry, he tries to fix it by trying to help her time travel. (thats why if u believe what he say, he help you, otherwise Kookie "appear outa nowhere" and ask her to be with him) O3O
OMG I get it now xDD!
I NEVER would've thought of that :lol: !
Lol, Kookie's such a sweetie for doing that .3.
Oh and I was wondering,Wanna make an organization together o-o;?
An otome game-making one of course 8D!
You have an amazing imagination =]

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#14 Post by Tenxinori » Thu Oct 06, 2011 3:46 pm

I was giving hint when
the mc said "why are people appearing out of nowhere today" XD
O.O You like my imagination? *runs around* yaaay and otome making organization? whats that o.o

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#15 Post by PockieHoshi » Thu Oct 06, 2011 3:54 pm

Tenxinori wrote:I was giving hint when
the mc said "why are people appearing out of nowhere today" XD
O.O You like my imagination? *runs around* yaaay and otome making organization? whats that o.o
We work together making otome games I guess o-o?
Oh and we can make a name for the organization and place it under that little section that shows the posts and location and stuff =D.
I think it would be a great idea to work with you. :lol:
Sounds like a neat idea to me :o!

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