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Sorry for double posting!
Loved the game! What's the next sin? c: .

Ahh. I'm seriously falling in love with your games more & more, especially since the Fantasia times! ^^;; .
I hope you'll plan the next episode when you can!
Take your time!

Also, I seriously LOVE the Cgs & the main menu !
Your main menus & Cgs look so pretty nowadays <3 (: .

Thank you! I thank Lumen for the effects XD Have you got the last one?

I wonder what everyone's guesses about Gerald now that I've explained more about him~

The next sin? I was thinking envy or gluttony.

azureXtwilight wrote:Thank you! I thank Lumen for the effects XD Have you got the last one?

If you were talking about all 3 endings + the bonus epilogue, then yupp! [: .
And thus, the mystery about Gerald increases! Cx .

& Hmmm.
Personally, I would like to see envy because this episode was about
I personally think those two connect with each other xP . Haha, well good luck planning it! c: .

I see, envy eh? XD

Well, let's just see what ideas I can come up with!
Please look forward to the next episodes~

i found something, in the OP n°2, Lust is clearly showned, and not in the 1st one. So it means we'll see Greed in the "light" for the OP n°3

Am i right ?

Anyway i would like to see Envy for the next game, but you do as you want

Yes, Greed will be showed in the third episode XD

I got all three endings thanks to your tips! This game makes me really happy! I seriously like the way you write.

Thank you! Is there anything I can fix/add/do for the next game? I plan to give the next games longer script, but maybe there's anything else to add.

I finally finished all endings! :3 Whew, what in the world took me so long It was a fun read, overall.

Firstly, I'd just like to give comments on the art XD Everything was quite good, except that Mike's body quite looks odd (It seems a bit too small, making it seems her arms are muscly and all that, and the neckline of the dress seems a bit too low). Frank's face seems like it's a floating skull with skin plastered around it, with the way the face is shaded, and Grace's eye lines seems too light and the blue of her eyes seems to be blending into her face because of that. She looks a bit too young for 16 though, And in the beginning, I was laughing so hard at the 9gag references XD Like the "gaaaay" and the Mordor thingie ("One does not simply win an argument with a girl~" I feel like making a 9gag post XD). And gosh, Mike's ribbon! Mike's ribbon looks like she stole it from Derpina! I hope there are more references in the next episode. 9gag sorta got my soul. Well, maybe half my soul.

The CGs are very nice, even before editing. ^^ I saw how they were before they passed under me, so kudos to you! The story's really nice, although that one ending was quite hard to get ^^; (I got more trouble in the berserk Gerald ending than the other best ending everyone had trouble getting, sorta) Though I think it's just me skipping through all read text, but I feel everything's a bit too fast... I guess. They went in Grace's palace, ate, slept, talk about stuff, then they went on detective mode. And that seems like few rooms for a big place, don't you think? I mean, I was expecting a game room *shot* The music was really enlightening, but the thing that bugged me is that sometimes it was too loud, and worse it will just play without any fadein or so. Overall, it's a nice read! I look forward to the next episode and I want to write another sceeene XDD

Thanks! XD Ehh, it's a NaNoRenO project, so it's meant to be short anyway. And yeah, I've gotta fix something about Mike's anatomy. Thanks a lot for the input!

Hummm... Story wise I like the pace in which you are choosing to progress the plot so far. If I were to really nitpick I guess the character design makes Grace look really young and it was a bit confusing as to what exactly happened to Gerald's arm (I thought he actually lost his arm but on the sprite it just looked bloody?) and there's this laughing sound that I feel goes on for a little too long.

Maybe give more of an in game clue as to how to get the harder to get ending? I guess that's pretty much the only suggestion I have at the moment.

It's really hard for me to point of things for you to improve on when I love it this much XD

Hopefully this makes sense as I'm really tired

To tell you the truth, he just lose the function of it as it implies XD As in, he can't use it anymore. Sorry for the un-clearness.

Game clue, like the first game, right? Check! Thanks for the comment!

it took me a long time to finish it. really love the game. for the next chapter, I think it will be great if two sins appear in same time. they collaborate to finish Mike and Gerard.

Two sins collaborating is actually one of my ideas from the beginning XD I won't tell which, but it will definitely be cool.

This series is totally awesome!

The writing is top notch. I love the dialogue between Mike and Gerard.

I like the pace of the story. You reveal a bit more about the story behind Mike and Gerard, but leave enough mystery so the reader wants the next installment.

Keep up the good work.

Susan