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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:18 pm 
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Bones and guts, bones and guts.
The Kingdom of Ulla was made of the bones and guts of their enemies.

The new successor to the throne was the bloodthirstiest of all the heirs.
But inside the kingdom was a traitor.

He brought down all.
Even the new successor.
And all traces of her vanished mysteriously...

...Until today.


Lady Os has awaken from her cursed slumber...With a knife on her neck.
Search between the tower to find the culprit!
(I really know how to sell my things....)

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Anarchy and I gladly present this short VN.After many sad events like burned laptops and PCs we finally managed to finish it ;D!
Hope you guys enjoy it as we enjoyed making it(Of course not always but the happy times count more!)

The Knife of the Traitor
Comedy?/Mystery?!/Romance??!
Free or Comercial? >> Free!
Rated>>+16 because banality
Clua: Original story/Artist/ Programmer
Anarchy: Proofreader / co-writter / Programmer/ Editor
Music: 8BitPeoples
Length>>almost half an hour to get any ending(DO NOT SKIP!)
Routes to follow(Obtainable characters)>> 4
(Get all the 4 good endings to get a surprise!)
Endings>>7

:DOWNLOAD:
Windows> Here!(Mediafire/ 76.24 MB)
Mac>Here!(Mediafire/ 72.94 MB)
Linux>Here!(Mediafire/71.36 MB)

:TRANSLATIONS:
The Knife of the Traitor is currently fully translated into:
German
French

See this post for downloads!

:WALKTHROUGH:
I didnt realized this may be a little hard ;_;--Im so sorry about that!
Before looking into the walkthrough Im going to left some tips that may be useful(I hope!)
Basically Os is trying to patch things with everyone...So try to make the guys a little bit less miserables!
Also an small tip is that every chibi scene you get is a hint that you are getting THAT guy path

and now the temptation:
Vosges>Pat him>Tell that he is cute>Ask what would make him happy>Do NOT forgive Corvus
Gervase>Change his bandages>Ask him if it hurt less>Stop Gervase(This option is TIMED be sure to press it quickly!)>Forgive Corvus
Lilja>Cheer him> When you dont forgive Corvus you would get an scene with him...When he ask that to you say that you cant
Corvus>Pat Vosges, then he would ask why did you do that, tell him because you felt like it>Change Gervase s bandages and then Corvus would try to lecture you...Agree with him>Call him when you are on the basement with Vosges>Do NOT protect him when Gervase attacks(In other words, do not press the only option on the screen!)>Forgive him ;D!


EDIT:
Courtesy of Aurora s Otome Wonderland here I have a more detailed walkthrough for the ones who are still having trouble!
(In bold the actual actions which may favorate his route)

Vosges
Go to the basement
Pat him
Because he's cute
Go to the basement
Just passing by
Go to the kitchen
I'm hungry
Go to the balcony
Go to the kitchen
Just passing by
Go to the balcony
What can I do to make you not hate me?
Stop Gervase
Do nothing
Say nothing
Yeah, I don't care anymore
[/b]...see the mushrooms in the basement


Gervase
Go to the kitchen
Change his bandages
Refuse
Go to the kitchen
Does it hurt less?
Go to the basement
I'm hungry
Go to the balcony
Go to the basement
Why do you stink like that?
Go to the balcony
Call for Corvus
Stop Gervase (This option is TIMED be sure to press it quickly!)
Do nothing
Forgive him
...eat something in the kitchen


Lilja
Go to the balcony
Go to the kitchen
I'm hungry
Go to the basement
I'm hungry
Go to the balcony
Go to the kitchen
Just passing by
Go to the basement
Why do you stink like that?
Call for Corvus
Stop Gervase
Cheer him up
Say nothing
Actually...I can't
...watch the sunset before it gets dark.


Corvus
Go to the basement
Pat Vosges
I felt like it
Go to the kitchen
Change his bandages
Agree with him
Go to the balcony
Go to the balcony
Go to the kitchen
Just passing by
Go to the basement
Why do you stink like that?
Call him
Do NOT stop Gervase when he attacks
Forgive him
...tell you something

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:15 am 
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Annnd bad end on my first play through. Of course. /fail At least I laughed when
you first see Lilja and it says "WTF" where his name should be.

I don't know why, but that really made me LOL for some reason.

Also, the bad end I got was
Gervais Bad End.

I also have to admit, I
wasn't expecting the culprit to be herself.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:30 am 
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Mink wrote:
Annnd bad end on my first play through. Of course. /fail At least I laughed when
you first see Lilja and it says "WTF" where his name should be.

I don't know why, but that really made me LOL for some reason.

Also, the bad end I got was
Gervais Bad End.

I also have to admit, I
wasn't expecting the culprit to be herself.


Weee Im so happy that you tried it XD
Oh Gervase you bad dog...To tell the truth even If I memorized which options to get every good route
I usually made a mistake on his path and get the bad ending orz

Ohoho Spoilers
XD Its because Lilja is really a what the fuck-Nobody was expecting him neither me since he was the last guy I added-
And yes...She was! I bet you were expecting to be Corvus hehe

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:32 am 
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M-maybe we should make the happy endings easier to get, clua >_<

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:39 am 
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Anarchy wrote:
M-maybe we should make the happy endings easier to get, clua >_<


ww-what?!
Its Gervase s fault! Goddamn dog! You should have said it before!! lol


orz Hey guys...Tell me if its really very hard to get so I can balance the game better!--;_;

If you dont want frustration dont do Gervase s route he is just a dog afterall...This is not an excuse.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:40 am 
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....I've tried like four times and gotten Vosges bad end ;A;

No matter what though, it's a beautifully set up game, and
I totally was not expecting the culprit to be herself! I loved though how it turned out though she still had a conscience when she was doing all those terrible things. BUT I WANT TO GET THE SHROOM BOY WITHOUT HIM STABBING ME
!!

Any tips...? TT_TT


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Ginger wrote:
....I've tried like four times and gotten Vosges bad end ;A;

No matter what though, it's a beautifully set up game, and
I totally was not expecting the culprit to be herself! I loved though how it turned out though she still had a conscience when she was doing all those terrible things. BUT I WANT TO GET THE SHROOM BOY WITHOUT HIM STABBING ME
!!

Any tips...? TT_TT



;_____;
well since you are going after Vosges, maybe it would help having some facts about him present like he doesnt like egoist people and he HATES when Os makes fun of him...Try to go after things that would make him hate less Os.



Maybe...Do you want me to post the walkthrough?(Of all the routes)

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:49 am 
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I think that a walkthrough would be quite helpful~


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I should see if that makes any difference, because
on my second play, I got killed by Vosges.

I bet next I play, I get the same result. I can't tell you how many times I got a bad end for Okita in Hakuoki, so I may just suck at this sort of thing.

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Ginger wrote:
I think that a walkthrough would be quite helpful~


I posted it! ;_;! Hope it helps!

Mink wrote:
I should see if that makes any difference, because
on my second play, I got killed by Vosges.

I bet next I play, I get the same result. I can't tell you how many times I got a bad end for Okita in Hakuoki, so I may just suck at this sort of thing.


I know...I always lauch cofcofscripts of the renpy games I cant get the good ending!
I hope you get a good ending!
Hint>The easiest guy is Lilja...lol
(The one that nobody wants)

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:07 am 
First off, congrats on finishing your game! I finished one end already (I think the Corvus good end?) on my first playthrough! I didn't realize that getting a good end was hard so this kind of makes me happy aha...

But it's really cute and the art is pretty so thank you for making it!


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I'm playing the game right now. :D

I like the meme usage XD


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GARLICBREAD wrote:
First off, congrats on finishing your game! I finished one end already (I think the Corvus good end?) on my first playthrough! I didn't realize that getting a good end was hard so this kind of makes me happy aha...

But it's really cute and the art is pretty so thank you for making it!


Thanks to you for playing it ;_;!!
Corvus end is the hardest Im very glad you got it hehe!

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I'm playing the game right now. :D

I like the meme usage XD

XD Meme? Oh my Im spending too much time on internet haha
Hope you get a good ending, if not complain please!!

Guuys Im going to sleep...Its very late already! Leave your thoughts, complains, bugs(noo), critics about the game if you like

Im very happy already for finishing it..Im not a very constant person so this was a great experience..;D!!

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 4:22 am 
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Oh my gosh!! Your game is really coooool!! All the guys are *fdgsdhiajnmbfs* no comments *.*
I wasn't expecting Corvus to be SO HOT *.*
And LOL!! The fanservice was HILARIOUS!! XDD My favourite is "Rule 63"!!
And... I wanna see the On the Beach section T.T


Thanks for making this game xD You are the best xD


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OMG , I LOVED it! You did a really, really good job on it. All the art work was very impressive and unique, the storyline was quirky and interesting and the endings were all different, I really likes all of them, even the bad ones.
I got all the endings, but I did use the hints for Gervase's and Vosges's. I think the main problem with the level of difficulty was that there were no indicators as to which route you should choose. For instance, why would Gervase want you to forgive Corvus and how did that effect his ending? Hints in the story are good, like how Lilja mentions what he is a patron god of.

I really liked the sense of humour in everything, and the more dramatic moments in some of the endings. I do feel that some places were a little too serious given the overall tone of voice though. Talking about torture and massacres in a serious manner and not a tongue in cheek manner kind of clashes with the overall humour. Gervase eating Os is funny because it suits the tone. Vosges talking about Os killing his village, not so much. I think it would have been fine to leave it a bit more open ended. Take a more light hearted approach to the horror elements like you do most of the time. I really like the fact Os is kind of an evil queen, but sometimes the serious tone of voice threw me a bit.

I only caught on typo, where you first meet Vosges. "Gaze at the sky and you will see a small green light there".


Anyway, congratulations! You did such an awesome job on it. I loved the bonus content and music too XD I should do some fanart of Os~

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