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Sasuya wrote:This was an awesome game. I thought the idea was very interesting and the story was engaging. I particularly liked the art style for the sprites. The music was a good fit for the game and now I have someone else to add to my playlists, Haha. The story was compelling enough for multiple plays. I'm still trying to get all the endings =) Great job you guys!

Kizhusa wrote:wha omg omg

the culprit is herself? awesome twist

and

omg that "wtf" name

I look forward to more vns from you *A*

Kizhusa wrote:LOL

fanservicee

XD and

the dog just wants her not the harem lol he is so cutee

omg this is awesome :'D
corvus is my favorite , he is so handsome omg ;A;

and the kiss scene *Q*

and omg the fanservice in the end was so funny xD

Auro-Cyanide wrote:

clua wrote:

Auro-Cyanide wrote:

I think some of the serious parts were really nice and gave cause for things. I especially liked Os's speech on why she did what she did. It's more the specfic mentions on what she did that seemed a little too realistic. It would make sense talking about that type of thing if this was quite a gritty piece talking about pyscological maschoism where despite everything (inclusing death of family/torture) they still fall in love, but I prefer the funnier tone for our novel. Vosges hat was quite good I think. Maybe make up some stuff like that or be more vague about what it was she did. I was trying to find a good way to explain what I meant, but I don't think I did a very good job ;_;

Yes I know what you ment XD....I really liked how nippon ichi games are written(Maybe they were my main inspiration)Like disgaea or better, Makai Kingdom...which most of the time was very hilarious but It had times that it was very serious
We will soften some parts...but not that softer! hehe...Hey BTW X

Awesome! Cause I really liked the horror elements as well. Os would have been no where as awesome if she wasn't previously the Queen of all Darkness. Seriously, it was awesome to see a female main character, who while being evil, took all this power in her stride and did things on her own terms. So much love for Os <3

*squee* OMG!!!!!! Thank you! I love it, it's so awesome! *rolls on floor out of happiness* Wait, wait, wait, I'll do something for you too! *waves arms* Os is my favourite and Camille likes Corvus so please wait for me! ///>_<///

Camille wrote:I don't know what counts as a spoiler and what doesn't, so I'll just put it all here. XD

Disclaimer: I've only had time so far to play through Corvus' route, but oh my god I loved him so much. ;___; He is the first EVN character that I have felt so strongly about in a long time, but I just adored him. (clearly I'm not the only one xD) At first, he seemed like the typical servant/butler-type character, but when his backstory was revealed and I got to see just how much he cared about Os, it was so touching. He did everything for her even though he thought she would hate him for it... To me, I feel like it's impossible for her to truly be with anyone else since he's been there for her all this time and understands her so well. ;A; I just love him and I love their relationship.

UMMM my Corvus fangirling aside... I actually did like the other characters a lot, just not as real romantic interests for Os. I'm looking forward to playing their paths and seeing how things end up, but I really don't think anyone will be able to dethrone Corvus in my heart. XD If I could draw, I would draw so much Corvus fanart, but I'm trying to get Auro to do that instead, so wait for it!! If I get inspired enough, I might be able to write you some fanfiction soon, though. ;____; I hope you won't judge it too harshly once it's done.

Other notes... I really liked the music, the interface, and the art. (I just feel very strongly about characters and story--honestly, you could have drawn this VN with stick figures and I still would have loved it) Your art style is so smooth and beautiful and all the characters were each very distinctive. They all fit the setting very well, design-wise, and your BGs looked great with the characters and the UI. Even though the UI was not changed a whole lot from the Ren'Py default, you changed it enough that it really fit the color theme/atmosphere of your game and I thought it was great. The music fit the game very well, too, and I loved all the songs very much.

The only things I would nitpick would be stuff that Auro and others have already said... I think that considering how much the other three characters hate her, they warmed up to Os a little too fast, but you only had a month to write the story, so that couldn't be helped. I had similar problems while writing RisAmo, as well. All things considered, you did a wonderful job and I really enjoyed the game. My biggest complaint would just be that it was so short! ;__; I wanted to see more Os and Corvus... I didn't want it to end. ;A; Anyway, I'm greatly looking forward to your future games. <3 Keep up the great work!

StupidBunny wrote:Ahhhh I really liked the art style, but I wasn't expecting to like the game this much. <3

In spite of the game's length I actually did feel that there was a lot more of a character arch for everybody than many longer games manage to pull off. I actually went through similar feelings as some characters about Os... didn't like her in the beginning but really, really warmed up to her.
Also, the fanservice segment was tons of fun. I almost clicked right through it, but I am so glad I didn't.

Thank you very much, this was really inspirational. <3

DiamondRoseTears wrote:

clua wrote:

DiamondRoseTears wrote:Whaaaa *dying right now*
I love him. *Changes mind* GERVASE IS THE BEST!!!
I like him like a puppy but he is more handsom in the human form!!!
*Breath Breath!!*
GERVASEE <3 *Puppy eyes*

XDD Why you guys like Gervase so much?? Is because..he is a puppy ? lol

Haha well he was a bad puppy that's why!!

I like bad and innocent people!!

Gervase <3

Aileo wrote:The whole thing's in spoilers.

Okay I caved and looked at the spoilers to get everyone but Corvus' good endings. His was kind of obvious, even though I missed rescuing him from the dog, where I thought I did something wrong until I got the CG. The others, not so much. I don't think you need to change the choices, but I think you need to make it a little more obvious in the dialog that this or that is a choice you should take.

Let me tell you that I really love Corvus. I have a thing for master/servant relationships, so yeah. Mr. WTF Fanservice Lilja is super awesome. Gervais is a cute dog. Vosges looks a toad from Mario, which is always a win in my book. Os is one of my favorite heroines that I've played as since I started playing VNs. I like that she can show a vulnerable side, and yet still be awesome and strong. She had a change of heart, but didn't become a total doormat like others who make a change like she does in a story.

I liked how the title changed depending on who you got from the last good ending. The art is to die for. The gui is very well done even without full Ren'Py customization. My favorite part is the music. It fits very well with the horror setting.

But I think the horror could have been handled a little differently. I mean I am all for the comedy part of it, but everyone was so mad at her for some serious things, it was a bit of a mood whiplash at points. It doesn't really detract from my enjoyment, but it was a bit of a distraction.

All in all, I really liked your game, and I think clua and Anarchy did an awesome job, especially for a month long project.

Morishita wrote:I actually played this on the day you posted it up *Like right before you even had the both links up, I kept checking in to see if the link I needed was up.* I jus haven't posted anything yet but I do have a lot to say so I'll just put it in a spoiler tag and forgive me if some of my words are missing letters. I'm using my sister's laptop so the keyboard is a little buggy.
ahem *clears throat* now I shall begin my tL;dr

First of all I think my favorite path would have to be Gervase. When I got his bad ending I was really scared when he said that he was really hungry. I think you did a wonderful job playing on the human's fear of being eatten aliv, taken she was dead but it still terrified me because I wouldn't want that to happen to me and I belive that a good story does this, they manipulate human fears like being barried alive or eatten a live or not being accepted and use that to pull in the reader. Very good job!! I love seeing people use those story telling techniques. Also I was really touched by his good scene and didn't think it was odd or out of no where when he forgave her. It really reminded me on how dog's treat there owners. Even if the owner did wrong it is still willing to come back to them because of the friendship they had before. I really almost cried because I thought that it was so sweet and touching for them t become friends again even after she made so many mistakes. He didn't hold it agianst her after she learned her fault and decided to change. Again very VERY good job!!

Now I did like the other paths as well but my least favorite was Corvus but that was just because it's hard for me to root for the guy who is already in love with her but I didn't see the development of it so it doesn't hi me very hard but I don't expect that with a story made in a month. I still loved the cg and thought that his character was funny at times, like when he was laughing at Vosges for being smelly. I think you did a good job at making his character I'm just not always a big fan of master and servant but I'm just picky about love stories so don't worry about that

Vosges path was cute and he was my thid favorite before Corvus. I did have mixed feelings about those two becuse his people's posion did kill her people but she also did wrong by him to so it was interesting.

Now Lilja had me cracking up! I loved how he just bursted out with laughter. You did a wonderful job at showing how crazy he was! I just loved it!! I laughed out loud when he was saying that he's crazy and becuase his personality was so off the wall and because you didn't add ay romantic parts with him it made him even more likable for me because he was so different from the others. Like you kind of want to be around him just to see what he will do next

Okay I think that's all I have to say for now. Great job once again on the game. I also really like OS because she had such a human side to her. You did a great job with her and I think her personality fit well with each character. I don't think I can say this enough but GREAT job on the game and your story telling!

9:19 wrote:

They blink! They blink differently sometimes! I love you.

Seriously though, congrats on your release. I adore Corvus' design; his florescent blush is asdfjlcometomenao. On second thought, your art just tickles me in general. I need more of it in my life. Fawning aside:

The choices were mostly self-explanatory, which I enjoyed, April being the month of finals and thus a time when my brain is maxed-out as far as executive function is concerned. I only used the walkthrough for Corvus' path because I was impatient XD Also, I avoided the Mario Mushroom because he had major B.O.

I have no complaints about the characters I did go after. Lilja is wonderfully nuts. It took me physically removing myself from my keyboard when he spoke to complete his path in its entirety because every time he laughed I cracked up and accidentally hit "next" thanks to my shaking shoulders, consequently whatever else he said went unread.

Gervase would probably like boob mouse pads. I went with the flow at first, and the flow led me to Gervase (or more accurately, the kitchen, and it lies). I have to admit, the first time Os pulled out her Handy Dandy Notebook, I totally thought it was Blue's Clues. C'mon, she's green, he's blue, we've got a mystery and you edited the thread on April 1st.

Okay, okay. Sorry.

Last but not least, Corvus is so Sebastian. I'm a sucker for master-servant relationships so he's a winner from the get-go. I could go on but this post is much too long so I'll optimize my feelings: fan disc? XD

The green skull and the moving text box are neat touches as well!

No comment on the music choice because I mute everything always.

Sasuya wrote:This was an awesome game. I thought the idea was very interesting and the story was engaging. I particularly liked the art style for the sprites. The music was a good fit for the game and now I have someone else to add to my playlists, Haha. The story was compelling enough for multiple plays. I'm still trying to get all the endings =) Great job you guys!

Kizhusa wrote:

Sasuya wrote:This was an awesome game. I thought the idea was very interesting and the story was engaging. I particularly liked the art style for the sprites. The music was a good fit for the game and now I have someone else to add to my playlists, Haha. The story was compelling enough for multiple plays. I'm still trying to get all the endings =) Great job you guys!

she has a walk through if you have trouble getting the ending too *_*

kersplode wrote:this looks really amazing! could you please upload to linux? sorry, last time I tried to make a linux version myself it went horribly wrong >w>

9:19 wrote:@clua:

(///_///) It’s embarrassing so I won’t say.

Blue's Clues is a children's TV series where a human and a dog solve mysteries with the help of a spiral notebook. Their trademark colours are green and blue, respectively. Now you will forever see The Knife of the Traitor anew. You're welcome XD

NanaVampire wrote:Woooooo O.O It's working! It's actually working!!! Yaaaay ^_^ Thank you!
So now I'm going to play it ^_^

Edit:
Just finished all endings! And it was totally worth waiting for new version ^_^ Cute, funny, suprising and awesome ^_^
And, well... Gervase is so cute xD But

Corvus looks so cool in human version! *o*

Anyway, I really liked it ^_^
And also, art is awesome! I was very impressed!
And sorry if there is any mistake, writing in language that's not my first language at 1 A.M. is a bit difficult xD

Patty wrote:Finally finished playing! I didn't get all the bad endings though. ^^;;

In my first playthrough, I got killed by Gervase, then I reloaded from the save and got killed by Vosges. D: I didn't try for Lilja though... I don't like him, haha.

I followed the walkthrough, and got Corvus's end first. He's so handsome in his human version OvO. Then got Gervase, Vosges, and Lilja.

Corvus's path was really nice. I liked the backstory explained in his path, as well as the ending.

Gervase is a sweety <3 I didn't expect Os and him to be friends before. :O Also, his puppy form is adorable.

Vosges's path was okay... I didn't really like him too much because he was kiddy and a bit twerpy... (I do not like kids, even in real life.) I did like the ending, however, with Os taking off his hat and setting him free.

Lilja's... I didn't get it a lot, to be honest... Maybe I should go play his path again...

The plot was twisty, and I really thought Corvus was the traitor. D: Wasn't expecting it to be Os herself, so good job on that!

I liked the change of the main menu whenever you get a guy's good ending. It's a nice touch, and I found myself replaying Corvus's path just to change the picture! Although I wish there was an option to choose which image to display, since Gervase's is adorable too.

The art of the game's also very good. It has a distinctive style, and the coloring's gorgeous. OwO I really liked Os's character design, as well as Gervase's and

Corvus's.

I liked the chibi CGs too, they were cute and a nice touch.

Of course, the non-Chibi CGs at the end were beautiful. Did you do chibi CGs for the events at each guy's path, and a nice non-Chibi CG at the end on purpose? The contrast is nice, and it sets the mood well.

Congrats on your release! I'm amazed you made such a nice game in just one month! OvO

DiamondRoseTears wrote:

clua wrote:

DiamondRoseTears wrote:Whaaaa *dying right now*
I love him. *Changes mind* GERVASE IS THE BEST!!!
I like him like a puppy but he is more handsom in the human form!!!
*Breath Breath!!*
GERVASEE <3 *Puppy eyes*

XDD Why you guys like Gervase so much?? Is because..he is a puppy ? lol

Haha well he was a bad puppy that's why!!

Gervase <3