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@kialaa: Thank you for playing Kialaa. I'm happy you still enjoyed it. . .✿◕ ‿ ◕✿ I still don't know what will look like if I make a serious game. I wish it will not become funny XD
@Teacup: Thank you for playing Teacup~. I will be more strict in spelling check next time. That's the bloodiest part of the production for me~ (T.T)
I really want Kouhei to be really typical~ as if he is the regular guy you can found on the other class, etc. But I think you're right, I should have put more personality in him~ ✿◕ ‿ ◕✿
Thank you again~ ✿◕ ‿ ◕✿ ✿◕ ‿ ◕✿
@Magicprincess20: Oh my. . . . .what was that. . (T.T) What operating system are you using? After having lots of trial and error, The only solution I think is to rebuild in again on another version of renpy~ If it's okay, here is another download link http://www.mediafire.com/?csp3t0p49o1rorr
I hope that can help.
@MelonCandy: Thank you for downloading MelonCandy~~~~
For the bad points, I dont have many, I just want to say that I saw few spelling mistakes and I think at some places part of dialogues were missing like if the character answered a unasked question.
So, congratulation for your game! It is really sweet!
Good luck for your futur games!
PS: My boyfriend's last name is Durand, so when I saw Charlotte last name, I laughed!
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the spelling of the characters' names confused me. is "Eimi" supposed to have the same pronunciation as "Amy?" Also, is "Henri" supposed to be the english version or the french version?
@Riku: Thank you~(◕‿◕✿) I'm happy that you liked the rout of henri. hihihi~
Thanks for pointing out the missing dialogues. . I will be aware about that next time~(◕‿◕✿). Thanks again~
@Magicprincess20: Waaah~ I'm so happy that it worked already~. . .I'm so nervous yesterday because what if that link won't work too. . I really don't know what to do when that time comes. . hahaha. . But I'm happy that it worked . and thank you for playing~ (◕‿◕✿)
@Cute.Sakura.Princess: Thank you for downloading~ I'm glad you liked the route of Henri~
And yes~ I will remember those advice for my future games~ Thank you.
@KimiYoriBaka: Thank you~. . . About their names, I chosen the name Eimi because it's japanese yet english sounding. It is pronounced as Ay-mee. I want to give them all japanese names but since I don't know how the teens behave in japan, I decided to give them names from various sources. Henri is french version. It's from Henri Matisse (◕‿◕✿) and his surname Eustace is from the old guy in Courage the Cowardly Dog cartoon. XD
@Minachu: Thank you for downloding(◕‿◕✿)~ Noooo! For me, I will never stop to be a teenager until the eve of my birthday. . . hohoho XD. I think even when I reach twenty . i will call it twenteen~~XD
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To start with, I congratulate you on this game and it seems rather impressive. I don't hate it, not at all, but I do have two issues that I would like to bring up. I think it is wonderful you managed to complete this and I am quite happy for you despite not enjoying the game as much as I could have.
The good parts first!
The chibi art is utterly ADORABLE. I honestly wished that I could have seen more of it.
The animations. THE ANIMATIONS. THESE ANIMATIONS. They are spectacular! The entire game is so wonderfully animated I love it!
The UI is adorable, simple, and I love the side portrait of Eimi. I am a sucker for side portrats. I like that the text box also looks like a piece of paper, nice touch given the love letter plot!
I'm not a fan of stock music usually, but the ones you chose I enjoyed.
The endings were really really sweet.
Middle ground, I feel no strong way positively or negativelty.
I looked at your main site and it says this game is 20 minutes... it took me longer than that to read it though. Huh.
Normal sprite art, specially the gag stuff, isn't my cup of tea, but it's nice.
Eimi is... not... my kind of main character. Just not for me.
The... not so good?
I was able to guess every twist from the get to. Maybe it was from all my younger years reading shoujo manga, maybe that was on purpose, maybe I should have expected it all, but that rubbed me the wrong way personally.
Typos... I... I'm sorry. I started screencapping typos as I fount them. By the time I got to 30 I gave up... This is my only major complaint they are everywhere hon... But, on the bright side, almost all of them seemed to be missing punctuation or capitalization, though there were a few tense issues and misspellings. They didn't make the game unreadable, simply distracting to me.
Overall, I really enjoyed this. You've improved so much from your first game. I hope to see more games from you. ~<3
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