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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 11:30 pm
by Mirielle
I was actually really pleased with how it turned out. I think my voice is a lot clearer than it was in Senior Year, mostly due to the fact that during Senior Year I was getting over a cold.

Just a few minor technicalites...

- One of Michiyo's lines repeats twice.
- I think something happened to one of Yumi's lines that made it distort and go extremely high.
- One of Yumi's lines in the beginning doesn't show. Was that me? I might not have sent it...

But I can overlook those!

The story has really grown on me. It's generic, but it's cute and romantic.

Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 4:12 am
by Enerccio
Mirielle wrote:I was actually really pleased with how it turned out. I think my voice is a lot clearer than it was in Senior Year, mostly due to the fact that during Senior Year I was getting over a cold.

Just a few minor technicalites...

- One of Michiyo's lines repeats twice.
- I think something happened to one of Yumi's lines that made it distort and go extremely high.
- One of Yumi's lines in the beginning doesn't show. Was that me? I might not have sent it...

But I can overlook those!

The story has really grown on me. It's generic, but it's cute and romantic.
corrected... -_-; (my mistakes)
But still i am missing two files for Yumi (these lines in good epilogue):
"You remember this place?"
"What are you thinking about?"

If you could send me them, i will recreate and reupload.
BTW Your voice is great...

Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 4:37 am
by Mirielle
Enerccio wrote: corrected... -_-; (my mistakes)
But still i am missing two files for Yumi (these lines in good epilogue):
"You remember this place?"
"What are you thinking about?"

If you could send me them, i will recreate and reupload.
BTW Your voice is great...
Okay, I'll get to them tonight...or in a few hours. And thank you very much! I'm actually incredibly nervous as to what others think about my performance and voice!

Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 7:51 am
by Enerccio
Ok all corrected.
Redownload please ;)

Mirielle - you are very very good. And i think best line was Michiyo: No need to worry about me.
This was excellent just like it should be... :D :D :D

Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:32 am
by Ignosco
I enjoyed playing this, especially with the voices - it's one of those stories that makes you smile. :)

The one thing that surprised me was
how hard it was to get the bad ending.
I'm looking forward to your next VN :)

Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:45 pm
by Enerccio
Ignosco wrote:I enjoyed playing this, especially with the voices - it's one of those stories that makes you smile. :)

The one thing that surprised me was
how hard it was to get the bad ending.
I'm looking forward to your next VN :)
Yes it is somekind hard (i know how exactly to get it)