Grinning Heart: The Meeting [KN][Fantasy,Comedy][Free]

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Re: Grinning Heart: The Meeting [KN][Fantasy,Comedy][Free]

#31 Post by tiya_nofurita » Tue Sep 18, 2012 10:06 am

ngareci wrote: And about .rpa, still the same problem here, I dont know how to, in fact, I never knew that the packed game is called .rpa before you told me.. :mrgreen:
You can easily select "Archive Files" on Ren'py launcher before distribute your game, therefore the players won't get any spoilers :wink: You can delete .rpy files too, in case you don't want the players easily access your script :mrgreen: (and maybe STEAL your wonderful codes :p)
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#32 Post by cuttlefish » Wed Sep 19, 2012 4:16 am

I liked how you gave your characters personality. It almost felt like I was reading a pilot chapter for a manga. More descriptive writing during the conflicts or action scenes, or more action-packed visuals could help improve the KN. It would be nice to see the hunter and vampire play off of each other in a longer story. Keep improving, and keep it up!

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#33 Post by ngareci » Sat Sep 22, 2012 12:01 am

tiya_nofurita wrote: You can easily select "Archive Files" on Ren'py launcher before distribute your game, therefore the players won't get any spoilers :wink: You can delete .rpy files too, in case you don't want the players easily access your script :mrgreen: (and maybe STEAL your wonderful codes :p)
Aha, I see! :shock:
It's a lot easier than I thought, and I guess I'm too rushing when I made the game so I didn't realize that it is really important..
Thank you for your big help once again tiya~!

cuttlefish wrote:I liked how you gave your characters personality. It almost felt like I was reading a pilot chapter for a manga. More descriptive writing during the conflicts or action scenes, or more action-packed visuals could help improve the KN. It would be nice to see the hunter and vampire play off of each other in a longer story. Keep improving, and keep it up!

Thank you for playing and for the suggestion~! :D
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#34 Post by saguaro » Sun Sep 30, 2012 11:08 am

oooooomg this is awesome.

For the record, I actively discriminate against vampires as a purely a reflexive response to the current crop of urban fantasy smexy that is everywhere now, but this is a) A Vampire Accurately Portrayed in His Natural Habitat and b) hilarious.

It's a shame that you didn't get around to customizing the textboxes/menus, because everything else is so original and well-done. Your comedic timing is great. This is such a fun game.

Looking forward to your next project.

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#35 Post by ngareci » Mon Oct 01, 2012 1:48 am

saguaro wrote:oooooomg this is awesome.

For the record, I actively discriminate against vampires as a purely a reflexive response to the current crop of urban fantasy smexy that is everywhere now, but this is a) A Vampire Accurately Portrayed in His Natural Habitat and b) hilarious.

It's a shame that you didn't get around to customizing the textboxes/menus, because everything else is so original and well-done. Your comedic timing is great. This is such a fun game.

Looking forward to your next project.
I know what you mean, and I think everyone will think the same thing :lol:
But well, I cannot imagine any other figure except vampire for this story, and I'm really having fun when making the comedy~! (people might think that I'm crazy for laughing alone while making the script)
Alright, textbox customize, I will note it in the next series..
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#36 Post by RunicV » Thu Oct 11, 2012 5:51 am

I just wanted to say that I liked this game.

The characters were adorable, and their interaction with one another was just so sweet. I was smiling and giggling all the time.

The main character is really a unique person. She's happy-go-lucky, strong, brave, and hilarious. The part where
the vampire tried to bite her
was just brilliant. I really liked the story and events that happened in this game.

A few things that irked me was the fact that the GUI was the basic one, and that there was a tad bit overuse of '~', and a few spelling and grammer mistakes.

Overall, it really was a cute game. And you made it in ten days too, which is a pretty sweet feat. I hope to see more humourous games like this from you. :D
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#37 Post by AshenhartKrie » Thu Oct 11, 2012 6:50 am

Terima Kasih!
XD The only thing I remember from my childhood Bahasa Indonesia classes...
I really loved it it was so uplifting, especially cos I was in a bad mood when I played it. I'm also loving your WIP demo as well ^^

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#38 Post by ngareci » Sat Oct 13, 2012 7:17 am

RunicV wrote:I just wanted to say that I liked this game.

The characters were adorable, and their interaction with one another was just so sweet. I was smiling and giggling all the time.

The main character is really a unique person. She's happy-go-lucky, strong, brave, and hilarious. The part where
the vampire tried to bite her
was just brilliant. I really liked the story and events that happened in this game.

A few things that irked me was the fact that the GUI was the basic one, and that there was a tad bit overuse of '~', and a few spelling and grammer mistakes.

Overall, it really was a cute game. And you made it in ten days too, which is a pretty sweet feat. I hope to see more humourous games like this from you. :D

Thank you!!
Alright, I'll noted the that.. :wink:
Wish me luck in the next series..

AshenhartKrie wrote:Terima Kasih!
XD The only thing I remember from my childhood Bahasa Indonesia classes...
I really loved it it was so uplifting, especially cos I was in a bad mood when I played it. I'm also loving your WIP demo as well ^^
Terima kasih kembali!
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#39 Post by MJDAlleria » Sat Oct 20, 2012 12:36 pm

Looks fun~ (downloading)

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#40 Post by omgitstay » Sat Apr 27, 2013 2:16 pm

Defonetly downloading this! It is just too interesting to miss out! xD
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#41 Post by janrrah18 » Sun Apr 28, 2013 5:19 am

Lol!!!very nice hahahaha!!! love it!!!!!!

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#42 Post by ngareci » Sun Apr 28, 2013 8:58 pm

janrrah18 wrote:Lol!!!very nice hahahaha!!! love it!!!!!!
Waai, glad you love it~ XD
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#43 Post by Lire » Sun Jun 23, 2013 4:27 pm

Here is my reviews~ :)
http://scan-vn.blogspot.com/2013/06/gri ... eting.html
Have a nice day.. :lol: :lol:
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#44 Post by lemonscent » Mon Jun 24, 2013 12:01 am

You got me at the "BUT HE CAN READ HER MIND SO HE KNOWS WHAT'S REALLY UP!" [and I paraphrase]
Downloading it now:) Seems really fun!
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#45 Post by ngareci » Mon Jun 24, 2013 7:48 am

Lire wrote:Here is my reviews~ :)
http://scan-vn.blogspot.com/2013/06/gri ... eting.html
Have a nice day.. :lol: :lol:
Thank you~ I'll put the link on the first page~

lemonscent wrote:You got me at the "BUT HE CAN READ HER MIND SO HE KNOWS WHAT'S REALLY UP!" [and I paraphrase]
Downloading it now:) Seems really fun!
Hahaha, I hope you enjoy it~ :wink:
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