Line of Heroes [GxB][Arabian Night Fantasy]

[Katty16]

When I saw this I was like YYYYYAAAAAYYYYY, shame on me who didn't see this sooner.
I got all the endings after playing it, and loved them all. I think my favorite was Shamir but my second was Melek. Couldn't believe how great the art was. But was a disappointed when I saw that it wasn't any CGs

But a really good game

[buttdumpling]

going to download this, I love that everyone is so dark skinned! Lots of games based in Africa/Arabia make most (if not all) of their characters pale which puzzles me.
(ex: Arabians Lost and Let's Date - My Sweet Prince)

[JunAir]

hi ya there, newbie here.
thanks for modesty for this good VN, really.

but for review, maybe i can add some detail to it..
suprisingly i found someone already review it and quite similar to my own opinion..
(Not all and it was much more detail.
That mean your VN is quite good to have people critism for it. )
You can found it here <http://www.weeaboo.nl/2012/10/review-line-of-heroes/>.

If you think it as harsh, just leave it. xD
if you think it as good, learn from it. Thank you.

[modesty]

Much belated responses.

@Katty16: thanks for playing. Glad you liked it. Sorry I didn't add a gallery to view the CGs. This was a one person project and I'm still learning.

@buttdumpling: yeah not a lot a truly dark skinned characters in stories of this setting. I liked designing them.


@JunAir: Thanks for playing the game. I am surprised the game got reviewed! Can't say I particularly liked how they reviewed it, but I do acknowledge the story's weaknesses which stem from the games RPG origin and the visual flaws.

[AstrellaLunari]

What an amazing game.. o.o I am in awe! Yeah, I guess I usually enjoy a little more involvement, but the story was truly captivating. You only lost me when

we got to the winged character. I didn't really believe him... even for being a "fan," he was a little too convenient.

But really, this was awesome! I went for the dark elf. He had me from the beginning. <3

[paronomasia]

Hello there, newbie to the site.

I would like to do a blind LP of your game so I was wondering if there is any way to make the game not take up the entire screen? I need to be able to switch between the game and my browser.

Thanks and I love the music and idea~

[paronomasia]

Never mind, I just had to choose a different option in Display. Can you tell I'm new to this?

[Miss-Mae]

I can't wait to try this! It's so nice to see someone else who also draws in more than just anime style, since I eventually want to make a game in my non-anime style as well. Your artwork looks great.

[Eulu]

I'm about to download your vn, and before I play I just wanted to comment how cool it is to be playing a game with a heroine not only similar in appearance to me, but with the same name as my own as well.

Very neat, haha. The game looks beautiful, I'm sure I'll enjoy.

[vividXP]

Just finished playing. I really enjoyed this game. I got almost all the endings except

Melek

, but I'll probably go and fix that soon. I did go for Lucios first though. He is my favorite guy. On the non-romantic side, Rama was a hoot.

I'll second a couple of posters before me that I liked the character designs. Everyone was so unique and colorful, and yes I especially liked that quite a few of them were dark skinned. Also, I liked the girls all had different body types from super skinny to stocky. Mara is really pretty.

I felt very bad for Opal. Although I guess I didn't really understand her motivation at the very end. Did she think that the Thief King would allow her to be free or something?

I also felt bad for Lady Miret. The whole part about how she couldn't be free unless she did everything that was expected of her really struck a chord. I hope she had found someone nice at the party.

[buttdumpling]

OMG I just finished it! I suggested it to my friend, she's super excited about it :3
Also how bad is it that Rama is my favourite character? Because he definitely is.

The fact that it's a story about people of color, and also queer women is AWESOME.

I only have a slight complaint:

I wish I had been able to flirt with Shamir...He was awesome but felt like a weird default. Also, how on earth was he spared?Also, I would have liked more options, but that's not really a big deal.
Romancing Daire or Rosalia would have been cool too <3

The complaint is really nothing compared to how much I loved this game though!!! Seriously, I can't get over your character designs & their personalities, I love everyone!!

[kandymiki]

Wow, this game was so original. It would do well as a roleplaying game I think, or something Zelda-esque. I thought your art style was unique and cute and I liked that there were many characters. I guess my favorites were Rama and Shamir. I felt bad for Shamir when Mara was mean to him, he didn't even do anything wrong half the time xD But yeah, awesome game, keep

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