I really love this.
I noticed not many people like Alden,
I did. xD
I liked all the characters pretty equally.
I really liked how you made Alden's character,
because there are MANY people who feel that way about someone,
and they don't know the person at all.
The way you had his story played out,
It makes since, because she didn't really get to know him. The bad endings though made me sad D:
They were very amazing.
SINCE I'm a completion-ist.. >.>
I cannot figure out how to get ending 8 o-o;
I swear I've tried like everything.
And continuously got the same exact endings >.<
I don't want it given away,
so maybe a hint?
is to have it where you get the three choices for each of the guys and have one give like 2-3 points, one give 1 point and the other 0, or maybe one -1 another 0 and the last 1.. I have no idea, just a suggestion thing if you make another VN. Sorry if this is unneeded xD;