Thinking Of You [KN]
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- Hiddlestoners
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Thinking Of You [KN]
So yeah...a simple KN Probably about 10 -15 mins of game play depending on how quick you read...
Thinking Of You
The game contains 160 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 3,236 words,
for an average of 20.2 words per screen.
The game contains 0 menus.
STORY
You and Tom are friends. Alice and Tom are friends. You and Alice like Tom.
A simple fluff story.
CHARACTERS
You You're a girl btw...orz
You're friends with Tom, but you like him and he has no idea. You live close to each other, thus catch the same bus to and from school everyday.
Tom
He's a lively, outgoing guy. He's friends with everyone and likes to make sure that everyone is included. However, when it comes to noticing others feelings, he's oblivious.
Alice
Likes Tom, but he doesn't know. She's almost on the brink of insanity thanks to Tom and real life issues.
Nellie
Your best friend. She's also friends with Alice. She's peaceful and likes to help others.
SCREENSHOTS
CREDITS
Coding: Me
Story: Sketcha
Sprites: Anna
BGs: +cube+
DOWNLOAD LINK (ALL PLATFORMS & 25MB)
Mediafire:
http://www.mediafire.com/?flxdz25kvlzppbu
Rapidgator:
http://rapidgator.net/file/48298949/Thi ... l.zip.html
DepositFiles:
http://depositfiles.com/files/p18tw39f5
Thinking Of You
The game contains 160 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 3,236 words,
for an average of 20.2 words per screen.
The game contains 0 menus.
STORY
You and Tom are friends. Alice and Tom are friends. You and Alice like Tom.
A simple fluff story.
CHARACTERS
You You're a girl btw...orz
You're friends with Tom, but you like him and he has no idea. You live close to each other, thus catch the same bus to and from school everyday.
Tom
He's a lively, outgoing guy. He's friends with everyone and likes to make sure that everyone is included. However, when it comes to noticing others feelings, he's oblivious.
Alice
Likes Tom, but he doesn't know. She's almost on the brink of insanity thanks to Tom and real life issues.
Nellie
Your best friend. She's also friends with Alice. She's peaceful and likes to help others.
SCREENSHOTS
CREDITS
Coding: Me
Story: Sketcha
Sprites: Anna
BGs: +cube+
DOWNLOAD LINK (ALL PLATFORMS & 25MB)
Mediafire:
http://www.mediafire.com/?flxdz25kvlzppbu
Rapidgator:
http://rapidgator.net/file/48298949/Thi ... l.zip.html
DepositFiles:
http://depositfiles.com/files/p18tw39f5
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- specialtantei
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Oh, this seems cute :3. Definetly downloading it
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Aha thanks xD I'm not good with the description so it's a case of playing it to find out more rather than have the whole story out already...xDspecialtantei wrote:Oh, this seems cute :3. Definetly downloading it
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Congratulations on the release! It was a pretty simple story, but it was cute. Funny thing is, since the main character was named 'Me', I didn't realize it was a girl until later. I had quite the O_O-moment when she said she liked the guy too, since I thought 'he' was going to talk about liking Alice haha (what a twist!).
On the other hand there's some purple prose in there, the text messages were a bit annoying to read, and I wish it had music, but cute story~
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Haha xDAnna wrote:Yay, someone used the sprites~ Have. To. Read.
Oops sorry for the confusion! I guess I should make the character profiles and summary clearer...orzAnna wrote:Congratulations on the release! It was a pretty simple story, but it was cute. Funny thing is, since the main character was named 'Me', I didn't realize it was a girl until later. I had quite the O_O-moment when she said she liked the guy too, since I thought 'he' was going to talk about liking Alice haha (what a twist!).
On the other hand there's some purple prose in there, the text messages were a bit annoying to read, and I wish it had music, but cute story~
I was head-banging over the text messages too since they were so grammatically incorrect and the spelling! Oh the spelling...orz But then I decided to keep them because...they were texting. In slang.
I might go make a re-make one day when I have time. I was going to add music but then I couldn't find any which fit the atmosphere xD
Anyways, thanks for playing! Makes me happy ^^
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downloading now...
the graphics looks great:)
i will do a review of this on my blog...
the graphics looks great:)
i will do a review of this on my blog...
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I look forward to the review!natsumijam~ wrote:downloading now...
the graphics looks great:)
i will do a review of this on my blog...
And yeah, the graphics are beautiful - guess that's just how talented some people are! /cough Anna /cough
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This was a nice short read . I really liked it and the story was interesting, although I think the main character was kinda...wierd xD. Like: 'watch out guy may be douche' and the next second: 'man I'd tap that' xD. Don't get me wrong, I liked it a lot , want more from you .
So now it seems I'll just have to wait for Simplicity .
So now it seems I'll just have to wait for Simplicity .
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Thank you for playing!specialtantei wrote:This was a nice short read . I really liked it and the story was interesting, although I think the main character was kinda...wierd xD. Like: 'watch out guy may be douche' and the next second: 'man I'd tap that' xD. Don't get me wrong, I liked it a lot , want more from you .
So now it seems I'll just have to wait for Simplicity .
Haha I thought that as well but I decided to leave everything up to my writer xD
simplicity will be written by me, so I'm not sure if I'll do a good a job as this one, but I'll try!
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The girl is just like me. I swear. Be a total bitch on the outside yet sometimes think the exact opposite.
Anyways, NICE STORY.
Anyways, NICE STORY.
I like how you implied in the end that Tom likes 'Me'.
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It's so simple and nice KN, althought I'm wanting for more surprise inside..
You describe the 'me' narative thought greatly, I like it.
And it will be really good if it has music and sfx..
Anyway, congratulations on your work~
You describe the 'me' narative thought greatly, I like it.
And it will be really good if it has music and sfx..
Anyway, congratulations on your work~
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blahblah0625 wrote:The girl is just like me. I swear. Be a total bitch on the outside yet sometimes think the exact opposite.
Anyways, NICE STORY.I like how you implied in the end that Tom likes 'Me'.
Thank you all! I'll pass on the comments to the writer ^^ngareci wrote:It's so simple and nice KN, althought I'm wanting for more surprise inside..
You describe the 'me' narative thought greatly, I like it.
Oo I might remake it in the near future - maybe changing the title page and things like thatngareci wrote:And it will be really good if it has music and sfx..
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congrats on the release!since it looks interesting,i'll download and play it tomorrow (cause tired me is tired D:).after playing i'll write a review about it ;D
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Ahah thank you! I gladly await your review ^^WickedRaccoon wrote:congrats on the release!since it looks interesting,i'll download and play it tomorrow (cause tired me is tired D:).after playing i'll write a review about it ;D
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