Lemonade Debt (Very Cute CGs!)

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Lemonade Debt (Very Cute CGs!)

#1 Post by milotabur » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:35 pm

LINK : Lemon

My first visual novel! Light(?) comedy game by me, I can't draw fine, but my friends find that my artwork are cute, please try and play this game!

Synopsis : No money to pay the circus's land Uncle's been renting, they've though of many things to do to pay back the debt, but Saru thought that selling lemonade would work, but then everyone vetoed it. What will happen to Saru's lemonade shop? Will it sell? Download the game and try it yourself! ^^

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-media for game: Of course Ren'Py


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#2 Post by milotabur » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:46 pm

anyone.................?

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#3 Post by MaiMai » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:50 pm

It hasn't even been a day since you've uploaded your game. Give people time to play it and then they'll eventually give their thoughts (also don't spam your own topic, I will be straight forward and say it's downright obnoxious. This is a forum, not a chat room.)
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#4 Post by PyTom » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:50 pm

This is a forum, not a chat room. Especially since it's the start of a holiday here in the US, it will take a while for people to find and play your game - so be patient. It might help if you describe it in a little more detail, as it's hard to tell what it's about and why we should play it.
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#5 Post by milotabur » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:53 pm

MaiMai wrote:It hasn't even been a day since you've uploaded your game. Give people time to play it and then they'll eventually give their thoughts (also don't spam your own topic, I will be straight forward and say it's downright obnoxious. This is a forum, not a chat room.)
ahh, okay, i just thought that this website is almost the same as GaiaOnline,
btw thanks for saying that, good thing that you said it early, or not people'll just find me annoying spamming my own post... ^^lll

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#6 Post by milotabur » Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:55 pm

PyTom wrote:This is a forum, not a chat room. Especially since it's the start of a holiday here in the US, it will take a while for people to find and play your game - so be patient. It might help if you describe it in a little more detail, as it's hard to tell what it's about and why we should play it.
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#7 Post by MaiMai » Wed Nov 21, 2012 2:11 pm

Also if you're going to reply to multiple people, do so in one post.

Despite my not so welcome message, I would actually like to congratulate you on releasing your first game. I'll check it out later and give feedback.
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#8 Post by milotabur » Wed Nov 21, 2012 2:14 pm

MaiMai wrote:Also if you're going to reply to multiple people, do so in one post.

Despite my not so welcome message, I would actually like to congratulate you on releasing your first game. I'll check it out later and give feedback.
Yay thank you very much! ^^
And I just visit your blog and your arts are so pretty and clean, mines are just messy, but I'm ashamed that you'll play my game that is 10 times uglier than your work, but I want to hear a great artist like you feedback! thank you!!

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#9 Post by Daistarir » Wed Nov 21, 2012 2:23 pm

Aww Look cute, I will trying to play. Be patient I will reply soon. It look cute :3

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#10 Post by milotabur » Wed Nov 21, 2012 2:38 pm

Daistarir wrote:Aww Look cute, I will trying to play. Be patient I will reply soon. It look cute :3
thank you thank you!! >w<
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#11 Post by Daistarir » Wed Nov 21, 2012 3:03 pm

Okay, I make a look through it and the CGs is cute though I smelled BL. It was fun to play and it is your first KN so good jobs! I'm a fan girl myself and I'm almost yelled because of the shotaness of Saru. The game was quite sparkle to my eyes but I LOVE the cute Saru. Want to bite him already!

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#12 Post by Katty16 » Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:29 pm

I finished the game and must say that it was super CUTE!! I really loved Saru, he was so cute :3 but the other characters was nice too. It was good to be your first game, and I don't think it was too short or anything, just a nice little game ^^
I can't wait to see more of your games now

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#13 Post by WickedRaccoon » Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:36 pm

aloha! ^^ so i just played your game,and it was cute.the art was nice and i laughed so hard at the funny scenes!!!although it was a bit too short and the whole plot developed too fast,i really enjoyed it.hope to see more of your games in the future!

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#14 Post by ngareci » Wed Nov 21, 2012 10:06 pm

As you said, and everyone said before, this is really a cute simple KN..
Congratulation on your first release!~
Actually I wish that Saru have more event with the landlord. And deeper event with Mr.Mike :wink:
Are you gonna make the next game with the same OC?
He's cute~ :D
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#15 Post by azureXtwilight » Wed Nov 21, 2012 10:49 pm

I would highly reccomend you to include screenshots and put more detailed pictures in order to make more people to be more interested in this game. You wrote that the game have cute CGs, but without actually seeing any premise of the art we can't really believe that now can we? :P
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