Lemonade Debt (Very Cute CGs!)

[Taleweaver]

I would highly reccomend you to include screenshots and put more detailed pictures in order to make more people to be more interested in this game. You wrote that the game have cute CGs, but without actually seeing any premise of the art we can't really believe that now can we?

You could just click on the link OP provided....


Question: People said this game smells of BL. Well, is it BL? I'm asking because BL is usually a big no-no for me.

[azureXtwilight]

Oh, really sorry about that! I thought it was the download link. >_<
I second Taleweaver's question though

[gekiganwing]

Milotabur, unless your characters are speaking Japanese to each other, they should not use honorifics or lend-words. Even if your characters are occidental otaku, you will benefit by avoiding fan-speak unless you're writing broad comedy.

[milotabur]

Okay, I make a look through it and the CGs is cute though I smelled BL. It was fun to play and it is your first KN so good jobs! I'm a fan girl myself and I'm almost yelled because of the shotaness of Saru. The game was quite sparkle to my eyes but I LOVE the cute Saru. Want to bite him already!

ah! you've found out owo;;

ehehe, i liked BL but not to hard core, thank you >w<
I love you for playing the game!!
How bout yours? do you have any game?

Milotabur, unless your characters are speaking Japanese to each other, they should not use honorifics or lend-words. Even if your characters are occidental otaku, you will benefit by avoiding fan-speak unless you're writing broad comedy.

Yes they are actually!
But only the names, can't think of perfect Japanese names :/

I would highly reccomend you to include screenshots and put more detailed pictures in order to make more people to be more interested in this game. You wrote that the game have cute CGs, but without actually seeing any premise of the art we can't really believe that now can we?

You could just click on the link OP provided....


Question: People said this game smells of BL. Well, is it BL? I'm asking because BL is usually a big no-no for me.

nope, din't intend to, but not to BL
no kisses and stuffs, just hints.

[Ryue]

Okay, I make a look through it and the CGs is cute though I smelled BL. It was fun to play and it is your first KN so good jobs! I'm a fan girl myself and I'm almost yelled because of the shotaness of Saru. The game was quite sparkle to my eyes but I LOVE the cute Saru. Want to bite him already!

ah! you've found out owo;;

ehehe, i liked BL but not to hard core, thank you >w<
I love you for playing the game!!
How bout yours? do you have any game?

Milotabur, unless your characters are speaking Japanese to each other, they should not use honorifics or lend-words. Even if your characters are occidental otaku, you will benefit by avoiding fan-speak unless you're writing broad comedy.

Yes they are actually!
But only the names, can't think of perfect Japanese names :/

I would highly reccomend you to include screenshots and put more detailed pictures in order to make more people to be more interested in this game. You wrote that the game have cute CGs, but without actually seeing any premise of the art we can't really believe that now can we?

You could just click on the link OP provided....


Question: People said this game smells of BL. Well, is it BL? I'm asking because BL is usually a big no-no for me.

nope, din't intend to, but not to BL
no kisses and stuffs, just hints.

A couple of screenshots on the opening thread of the post till would increase the advertisement effect

On another note (call me clueless.....ok I AM clueless) what IS BL? (read that 2 characters word for the first time)

[MaiMai]

A couple of screenshots on the opening thread of the post till would increase the advertisement effect

On another note (call me clueless.....ok I AM clueless) what IS BL? (read that 2 characters word for the first time)

Boys' Love.

There's different variations of the genre like yaoi which usually has more explicit content and then there's shounen ai that focuses more on the relationship and romantic aspects of it. Although overall the differences seem a bit arbitrary.

[Ryue]

AH i c tnx.

[Heavenbornvip]

The graphics are so cute
I'll play it when i get back home
Good luck & Good job !

[Daistarir]

@milotabur : Uhm... Not yet :3 WIP xP

[milotabur]

The graphics are so cute
I'll play it when i get back home
Good luck & Good job !

Play it as quick as you can!
I wanna hear more comments!
(greedy lol!)

[azureXtwilight]

Okay, I finally played it. The art is indeed very cute :3 Congrats for releasing your first game, and although the story pacing was quite rushed the art makes up for it.

Good luck on making your next games~

[VerdeICe]

Damn that was ADORABLE. It made me smile and laugh. You should be proud. It may have been short but I loved everything. BEST BOOK EVER.

[DangoRiceBalls]

It's not bad for your first time, and the art is hella cute. But remember to take your time. It kind of seems like you're rushing a bit. But overall, it's sooo cute and I want to bite the characters. XD

[TsukiShima]

Finally took some time to play your cute game!

I think it's very fun, and the musics were very enjoyable and fit the situation so perfectly! I liked how the sound effects were used too. I agree that it felt fast, but that's only because I liked it. I wished that we would could follow more about Mr. Mike and Saru, or maybe even the Uncle. But for a short story, this is already enough.

There are some few typos, and I saw the 'CENTLAHHH' a hint of a Malaysian thing, are we? but I believe since this is a more lay-back game, the typos made it funnier.

Looking forward for the sequel or your other future games!

[sharkiecutie]

I liked the game alot! Gratz for finishing it..Something I would never do