Yandere in 100 Words (creepy romantic short stories)

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pardon the download link to windows say that as the following below

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I love your game. I hope you'd make more in the future :D
And yeah, I agree with increasing the length of the stories.
I have high hopes for you to turn this world to a better yandere world~
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different kinds of Yandere!! heheh
way to go! :D
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I got the same note that Chibichann did;
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khfan12 wrote:I got the same note that Chibichann did;
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ShippoK wrote:I actually don't know if the person posts here anymore, so I'll provide a link I had backuped on my computer. If the creator does comes back and post updated links, I'll delete this.

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#22 Post by heavyblade »

I really loved this VN.
I thought having a yandere partner would be fun. But this kinda opened my eyes as to how scary it can really become.
I love the first track, it seems most fitting for the entire thing. All the short stories were good, but some where a bit lack lustre when compared to the really good ones.

The way you played with the speed of the text was amazing, but it got old quickly in a few places.
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#23 Post by Kokoro Hane »

These were excellent! It must of been hard to write in only 100 words to illustrate, but it worked. It felt more like a kind of dark poetry than anything else, much like summaries for an actual short story. The music and simple backgrounds worked beautifully. This is quite different than most VNs I am used to, but elegantly done. Despite it being about psychotic love ^.-
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I really liked this. I've always enjoyed the 100 word format and seeing it applied to something so creepy was rather nice.

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#25 Post by Amy »

O-oh no, I forgot about this topic! >.>;;
I hope nobody minds me going on a giant reply spree...
tiya_nofurita wrote:So finally I have read some of the story provided. My thoughts ? I'm not really into poem, but the story beautifully written and creepy as well :D. Maybe on the next project you can try to costumize your GUI into a better look (yours is kinda...plain. but this is your first VN afterall and I understand that)
The music is fits the story, I like it ^^

p.s : Are you yandere type IRL ? no offense, just kidding :p
Thank you! I've been working on figuring out some interface stuff for the next issue. There are 52 stories now on my Tumblr. I'll have to revise quite a few of them, though, since I just discovered that I didn't choose my word count tool very well for the past who-knows-how-many stories. >.>;;

So, anyway, the next version will probably have twice as many story/poem/things, plus a new interface. :3

And as for whether I'm yandere IRL, well, probably not - I'd expect myself to be in jail or something by now, if I was, heh.
D'd'D wrote:I love your game. I hope you'd make more in the future :D
And yeah, I agree with increasing the length of the stories.
I have high hopes for you to turn this world to a better yandere world~
Thank you :3
Perhaps these are a little on the short side. Writing in such a tiny word limit is somewhat like walking with a rubber band around your ankles ^^;
trish_vc wrote:different kinds of Yandere!! heheh
way to go! :D
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heavyblade wrote:I really loved this VN.
I thought having a yandere partner would be fun. But this kinda opened my eyes as to how scary it can really become.
I love the first track, it seems most fitting for the entire thing. All the short stories were good, but some where a bit lack lustre when compared to the really good ones.

The way you played with the speed of the text was amazing, but it got old quickly in a few places.
Thanks for this awesome collection of short stories!
Thank you! :3 It's interesting how much people romanticise yandere, when at its heart, it was always a deconstruction.
Apologies for the fluctuations in quality >.>;; They've persisted even with the newest ones. There are quite a few that I'm not personally happy with, but that people seem to like.

...Ah, I'll have to work out some more innovative things to do with words. My current collection of tricks would get repetitive very quickly with 52 stories...
Kokoro Hane wrote:These were excellent! It must of been hard to write in only 100 words to illustrate, but it worked. It felt more like a kind of dark poetry than anything else, much like summaries for an actual short story. The music and simple backgrounds worked beautifully. This is quite different than most VNs I am used to, but elegantly done. Despite it being about psychotic love ^.-
Thank you :3
Oh, there's often a strange sort of elegance in these things - look at Edgar Allan Poe, for instance, or Le Fanu's Carmilla. It's... quite dangerous, actually. ^^;
Kiki wrote:I really liked this. I've always enjoyed the 100 word format and seeing it applied to something so creepy was rather nice.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :3

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#26 Post by D'd'D »

In some stories the shorter the better though, it makes thing ambiguous and you start to wonder and guess what actually happened in your own perspective xD
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I love this one! :D I always have a thing for yanderes and reading poetry from their point of view is just awesome~ I love psychotic and twist love and this is so amazingly well done ;~; I love "Spell" the most, maybebecauseIfeelthisoncehahaimjk :D
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D'd'D wrote:In some stories the shorter the better though, it makes thing ambiguous and you start to wonder and guess what actually happened in your own perspective xD
<3 I love ambiguity myself - it leaves the most potential in the story, not forcing you to pin too much down, just enough to direct the imagination. It's interesting to write and to read. :3
hikaa212 wrote:I love this one! :D I always have a thing for yanderes and reading poetry from their point of view is just awesome~ I love psychotic and twist love and this is so amazingly well done ;~; I love "Spell" the most, maybebecauseIfeelthisoncehahaimjk :D
Thank you! :3
(Maybe I should start labelling this as a poetry collection...)
Ah, Spell. It was interesting to write - two sides of the same story just assembled themselves, and made sense, and then I just had to write it down.
Yandere reasoning is fun to play with.
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#29 Post by Katta »

Thank you so much for the stories, I really enjoyed them, my favourite being Forgive, Spell and Counting. I now so want to add a yandere character to my own project...
I also liked Secret, but the last bit "or I will have to seal your leaps" seems excess, as this part is clear without saying it explicitly, so it only lessens the feeling.
I didn't really like Accident, as there's no feeling in the letter itself, the author loses her boyfriends but all she thinks about is getting a new one. Or am I missing something here?
I think I get the idea of Expressions, but all the minor details like how he organized everything seem to distract.
I liked the beginning of Tainted, though the idea is classic, but then it gets too straightforward with sewing and amputating, I think something more subtle would be more creepy.

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#30 Post by ShippoK »

Katta wrote:
I didn't really like Accident, as there's no feeling in the letter itself, the author loses her boyfriends but all she thinks about is getting a new one. Or am I missing something here?
It's not the Author who's Yandere...
Remember how her 'Friend' was always at the scene when the 'Accident' happen?
Think about it...
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