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The art is fantastic! Man, at 1st I'm so in love with Gilfred, my male doll is like a secondary student @@ But... who thought he could grow up THAT HANDSOME?! Its a little sad that I can only see his mature charm once =='
Well, the story is good too. The bond they share is so strong, I'm quite jealous of them
Good job!!! Looking forward for your future games
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~the whole typing in the exact phrase thing
(it was novel at first, but the prompts came up so often that it got annoying after a while. I started out with proper capitalization, grammar, and punctuation---but by the middle, I was just impatient for the story to move on and just typed the suggested reply words without anything else.)
~the "flow" of the event screens in comic-book mode is too "streamlined"
Usually when something like a CG screen [screens in your case] happens, I sit back and wait for the entire scene to play out before pressing any buttons. But the one time there was a longer pause between actions, I pressed enter and accidentally skipped the entire scene! So I had to reload an earlier save and skip to view the scene from the beginning again.
(I'm not talking about the regular dialogue parts, but the ones where your VN goes into "comic-book mode", with epic screen cuts and sound effects and awesome art.)
Hopefully future adaptations won't have such massive skips!
Thanks for making! I enjoyed reading this story---and I reloaded multiple times to make sure I read all the books in the library. (Love them!) The world you've created in this work is very intriguing---a familiar yet foreign vibe, kind of like the same feeling I got when reading Full Metal Alchemist for the first time.
The Doll-verse is nothing like FMA, of course, but still, it made me nostalgic. Great job! ^__^
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I played the game a few months ago, but I didn't have an account here, so I'm dropping a review now.
As said, I loved the art! (I only played the route of the Male Doll, though.) He is so cute. >3<
(Now I hope the spoiler box works, if not, please stop reading if you don't like spoilers!)
Anyway. I loved how you could type in the answers yourself. I even thought you could write something else and he'd react. An example:
The male doll asked what a wife was and I answered (with the keywords), then added something like, "You know, something you'll be to me in the future." Later he then said he wouldn't mind being my wife and I was like, "Whaaa--?! *laughs hard* It worked?!?" I then tried typing something else again, but unfortunately he didn't react to it. XD It was hilarious, but I think it'd would have been even better if you actually could lie to him and stuff. I bet the coding must've been killing you, still. Maybe worth considering? Superb job, nonetheless!
To the comics, I must say . . . AMAZING! o_o Very creative and badass! The only thing I didn't like about it was that it had just a few secs and then moved on. I like to take my time and absorb. Is that something you can change (as the player)? Even with the bubbles, they moved too quick for my liking, and I wasn't even done reading sometimes. So later on, I skimmed it, more or less. (I am terrible under pressure.)
Otherwise, I LOVED your game. I actually thought he was dead at the end, like most, I think. XD It was so sad! You cruel person. But I didn't cry. I'm a tough potato. In any case, the actual ending is beautiful ;~; and mesmerising like the art and the sweet little story.
The Art was better then i thought it would be and i enjoyed it.
The music really pretty but half way through the beginning I turned it "all" the way down it was loud > _< But enjoyable.
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I just can't believe this game's for free.
I was seriously into this!
I feel so envious with the glorious GUI and everything.
really, really, really polished!!! <3 <3 <3
ugh, I played Mdoll's route and oh boy I wanna marry him---- //slapped
Would definitely like to see a sequel to explain the cracks and the sudden growth. I agree that this story will flourish better if it's longer, and perhaps more could be explained about the dolls and the world they live in.
The art is superb!!! Loved like, every bit of it, even the bg. The only downside is the typing system (which is also the upside XD), but there has already been comments on that so yeah. Anyway, good job for your first KN, it's amazingly well done^^
His story were so sweet and sad, made me cry and feel so emotional ;__; <3 Great job! Everything from the setting, art, music and comic style events made the game awesome.
I truly wouldn't mind a beefier remake or a sequel to this game because I love what you've created.