Normally I'd avoid this type of stories but it certainly lured me in
with its whole affair drama (n-not like I enjoy reading those!). It
was just for a change of pace. I'd have to say it was very refreshing
and different from the whole "Love will always Prevail!". The setting
was very unsettling and made me very nervous the whole time also
question marks were flying round my head on what the heck was going
on at some parts then I remember this story has a sexual theme in it.
I seriously thought he was the abusive or cheating husband but I was proven wrong.
Pity the man with his infertility. Also frustrated with his wife being the way she was
somehow also made open my eyes about about relationships in future for me. I hope
I don't have experience anything like this... Both endings were very sad and as for the
ending where the wife goes to a TV show to reveal the father of the baby. I realized the
husband is still very caring as he still hasn't divorced or found another woman.
But one part confused me. Was he also committing debauchery too?
These words "Naive little virgin" harsh I don't know but it is true but everyone
makes their mistakes and eventually will move on. I was happy he moved on but upset he didn't take
responsibility but I can't blame him when the wife said she was "using" him. In all endings where she
gets a baby it's pretty obvious it's the Paperboy's child. I doubt his childhood friend is very happy.
Fairly good story. Has a proper length to it too. The GUI is... I won't comment as this is a submission for
Nanoremo 2013 so it's fine. I do enjoy your sprites they're nicely made--though still could need some touch-up
and cleaning. The only thing that irked me most in this game was hearing the baby (shudders) I like kids but
it almost made me remember the babies from Silent Hill 4: The Room - almost.
Overall - Good. I enjoyed it. (smiles)