Still Life [NaNoRenO 2013]

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Still Life [NaNoRenO 2013]

#1 Post by Tachyonia » Mon Apr 01, 2013 2:06 am

Title: Still Life
Synopsis: A brother and sister find themselves torn apart by tragedy, with their conscious’ unsteady.
Genre: Drama

Statistics/Features:
-Kinetic novel
-Gameplay time: ~1/2 hours
-5101 words
-Original art and soundtrack

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http://www.mediafire.com/?qtunm0r1lco2644
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Re: Still Life [NaNoRenO 2013]

#2 Post by blahblah0625 » Mon Apr 01, 2013 4:11 pm

Will be back here with thoughts :)
Edit:
Wow. I really like how the author approached this. It was puzzling yet poetic.
I knew that she was going to
marry/be with the doctor
for some reason.
But this story, though it had its bad moments, ended with a high note. It was very well written, and I love the way at the end when
they were reunited
the font was
purple
.
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Re: Still Life [NaNoRenO 2013]

#3 Post by Funnyguts » Tue Apr 02, 2013 10:18 pm

Just finished! The art and ambient sounds were really well done, I think it was the strongest aspect of the work. My biggest gripe was the stilted narration, constantly breaking the sentences up made everything feel choppy and awkward. I also think more differentiation on how the brother and sister narrate their situations would help, as it is now I wouldn't be able to tell the brother and sister apart if they didn't have color-coded text.
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Re: Still Life [NaNoRenO 2013]

#4 Post by VerdeICe » Thu Apr 04, 2013 10:46 am

Holy crap. I didn't even realize this was posted. Full of banana's time for cake.

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Re: Still Life [NaNoRenO 2013]

#5 Post by ixWishing » Sat Apr 06, 2013 1:10 am

Seems a bit dark, but intriguing!
Downloading it right now!
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