Amity: One Tale [Otome] [NaNoReNo '13]

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Amity: One Tale [Otome] [NaNoReNo '13]

#1 Post by Hijiri » Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:48 pm

(From the thread)
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Story
(Note: Because this title occurs in an alternate universe, no knowledge about Death Rule: lost code is required. However, playing the demo is recommended. )
It has been days since Tina Blatchford won the Game as its sole survivor. Struggling to readjust to the world, Tina wishes that she could return to a normal life. Little does she know that her wish is about to be granted.
Waking up one day in her school's infirmary, she finds herself in a world in which the Game never occurred, and that the people she saw perish now run the school she once knew. However, there is a strange air about them, and a sense of unease seems to follow her. Will she settle into this sinless world and enjoy the new-found peace, possibly discovering love in the process? Or will she attempt to discover what lies behind those amicable faces?

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Tinasa 'Tina' Blatchford
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DOB: 4/02
Blood: AB-

The 44th Game's sole survivor. She's still weary of others, but her attitude seems to have toned down. At times she will act on instinct, but her experiences from the Game have taught her to be more critical about her choices. Despite this 'new' world, she appears to retain her bad records from before.

Obtainable Characters
Prof. Archer (Abraham Archer)
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DOB: 3/20
Blood: A+

The science teacher. He seems to be much nicer compared to how he acted in the Game. He cares deeply for his students, and when he sees them struggling with something, he'll take the time to help them. He's also considered as an unofficial counselor for the students because of this.

Mr. Kaysen (George Kaysen)
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DOB: 4/02
Blood: O+

The physical education teacher. The nurse doesn't really like him because of his habit of pushing the students to their limits. However, he's not doing it out of malice; he legitimately thinks he's helping them by pushing them so hard. Compared to his Game self, this George is much fitter, and a bit more tolerable to be around.

Dwight Hatcher
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DOB: 5/24
Blood: B+

Head of the Role-Playing Club. Despite his childish way of acting, Dwight can be serious when he needs to, and is much more assertive than he was in the Game. His boyish looks have caused people to mistaken him as a middle-school student, and thus avoids most student events because of this.


Side Characters
Prof. Timelock
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The creepy history teacher. She seems to have a fondness of owls and torturing her students in a variety of ways. She has been nicknamed "The Bringer of Despair" by the alumni who have been unfortunate to pass through her doors.

Seth Owen
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A loner student who likes popping up at the oddest of times. Any attempt at starting a conversation with him will end in failure.

Ms. Serris (Tanya Serris)
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The school nurse. She's very friendly with the students, and sometimes lets them nap in her office if they need it. (To the ire of the other teachers) She likes dressing up in nurse outfits despite the fact that she doesn't need such a uniform for her job.


Dean Ester (Morgan Ester)
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The Dean of Students. She isn't seen much, but when she does, everyone tends to run in the opposite direction of her. Her punishments are legendary, and it is rumored that she can make the toughest student break down into tears with a simple glance. She also appears to have a fondness for a certain teacher...

Mami Kurosawa
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An exchange student from an eastern country. Despite her cheerful and innocent appearance, she's actually quite the pervert.


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Team
Writer, UI, Programming: Hijiri
Art: Katon

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Note: While this game may be considered a 'demo' it still is more-or-less its own game. This thread will be updated once the White Package version is released, which will contain the CG's and the other paths.
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#2 Post by Katon » Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:01 pm

Downloading now~!
Still so bloody weird seeing my art like this.

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#3 Post by teacup » Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:04 pm

Congrats on the release - continuing my day of playing NaNoReNo games, this one is next up on my list.
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#4 Post by MaiMai » Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:11 pm

So many games, so little time!
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#5 Post by Akitsuki » Tue Apr 02, 2013 12:40 am

Congrats! I'm downloading it now!

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#6 Post by teacup » Tue Apr 02, 2013 2:01 am

I don't know if I should be happy or not that I got ending 0 first.
Either way, repeatedly clicking on the 'locked' characters until they 'disappeared' made me laugh. Thanks for putting that in, it's really amusing.
And now to actually play the game...
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#7 Post by DestinyFailsUs » Tue Apr 02, 2013 2:36 am

I'm really excited about this, it looks great. Downloading now :D

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#8 Post by Hijiri » Wed Apr 03, 2013 12:25 am

teacup wrote:I don't know if I should be happy or not that I got ending 0 first.
Either way, repeatedly clicking on the 'locked' characters until they 'disappeared' made me laugh. Thanks for putting that in, it's really amusing.
And now to actually play the game...
I actualy expected people to get that ending last. But I guess the chance to say no is too good of a chance to pass up.
I figured I could make the 'locked' text personal for the two of them since just saying 'locked' is boring.
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#9 Post by FatUnicornGames » Mon Apr 15, 2013 8:00 pm

I enjoyed this. The only thing I could add story wise would be that the love story could have used a little more of a stretch, it seemed to happen abruptly and without too strong of a reason.

Looking forward to the next version.
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#10 Post by Flowers from Nowhere » Fri Apr 19, 2013 10:13 pm

I have been looking forward to this since it was announced. It was fun to see the characters in such a different situation.

For a critique I thought the text was hard to read, a light color on a light color. Otherwise I really liked the art. And yeah, the locked characters' dialog was a great addition. :lol:

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#11 Post by ✿ Usagi Totoro ✿ » Sat May 18, 2013 4:50 am

I loved the game <'3 I'll be waiting for the full version C: Oh and i noticed Prof. Archer (Abraham) 's cat have the same name as me o.e .

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#12 Post by philip » Fri May 31, 2013 10:43 pm

Short, but nice! Looking forward to the full release.
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#13 Post by D`Angel18 » Sun Jun 02, 2013 3:26 am

I enjoyed playing this game, can't wait for the full version release. XD
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#14 Post by philip » Sat Feb 28, 2015 11:42 pm

Hmmm . . . almost two years have passed with no posts to this thread. Is the story going to be completed?

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#15 Post by Hijiri » Sat Mar 07, 2015 6:20 pm

philip wrote:Hmmm . . . almost two years have passed with no posts to this thread. Is the story going to be completed?

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I'm surprised someone remmebered this on here.

Well, it's not totally dead...
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