Dys- [Psychological Mystery][Slice of Life] (first effort)

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Dys- [Psychological Mystery][Slice of Life] (first effort)

#1 Post by problemgamerkt »

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Seeing is "dys-believing".
Synopsis
A would-be writer, beset by emotional issues, lives life minute-to-minute, until a string of strange events conspire to reveal that life isn't at all what it seemed.

A word count from label start to return came up with 20,501 words. I'd estimate ~30 minutes of reading time, although I'd hope for a bit more.

"Warning: Possible despair" is a line I've seen applied to another game (Memories of the Oblivious), and it's one I'd like to borrow, if I may. It applies here.
Please be kind, as there is more than one personal note to this story.

Credits are included at the end of the script.

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http://rpgmaker.net/games/5595/downloads/
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Re: Dys- [Psychological Mystery][Slice of Life] (first effor

#2 Post by Alte »

Feedbacks regarding to the OP's description.

- The game you're trying to reference the tag [warning: possible despair] is titled: "Memory of the Oblivious"
- The link that you're referring to download the game is, http://rpgmaker.net/games/5595/downloads/
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Re: Dys- [Psychological Mystery][Slice of Life] (first effor

#3 Post by Crystalleaf »

The storyline is quite interesting. The pace was quite reasonable, if the pace was any slower, the plot twist would not have been as surprising.
What would have made the game a little more exciting in my opinion is for the game to branch out a little with each differing choice made, as it seems like the answers made by the player has little influence on the direction of the game.
Overall, it is quite commendable for a first effort.

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