I'm late to the party, but I just downloaded the polished version and played through all the paths in one sitting.
First off, the art is beautiful - backgrounds, characters, everything. I'm also really shocked that you've gotten comments saying that Acacia isn't attractive when she's so gorgeous! I especially loved her wild, orange hair.
I played Edavine's path first, and was pleasantly surprised by the dialogue and story. At first, I thought that
Aeron was going to be an option, but then he escalated fairly quickly into almost a complete villain. I admit that I cackled gleefully for quite a while when Acacia punched him in the stomach at Damien's party. I thought it was interesting that he seemed to care about family standing at the end in Edavine's path...so Acacia's family is evidently still high enough in status for such an ambitious man to pursue a marriage into it?
Anyways, Edavine was my favorite by far. I thought that Damien was too much of a jerk at first for me to really like him. (Although it was really sweet of him to
sneak back and fix Acacia's mother's flower garden.
I thought that was a nice touch.) The dialogue was cute, but doesn't Acacia act a bit young for her age most of the time? Although she does seem a bit sheltered when it comes to this sort of thing, so perhaps that's justified.
There's still quite a few grammatical/typographic errors in the polished version, especially when it comes to comma placement in sentences. I could still play through the game, but I found it jarring at times, especially in the beginning. Just thought I'd let you know.
Overall, a short and sweet game! Impressive that it was done in a month.