I have been silently enjoying Vns and otome games for a long time now. But THIS STORY WAS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, IT PRACTICALLY FORCED ME TO MAKE AN ACCOUNT. I have read so many vns (both good and not so good ones) but a story has never touched my heart like this one.
THE ART!!! OMG it was fantastic. Music also helped to set the perfect mood for each scene.
I loved both the pathways. Both guys were very likable. Acacia is such a sweet heart. All angry and tough on the outside but girly and innocent on the inside. And her reactions were to die for.
The part I enjoyed the most was where Edavine & Aeron kept fighting over Acacia (and she is totally clueless
) It was really funny.
Well I can go on and on about every detail but trust me this was my fav vn till date. (Going through the polished version right now and I am loving the cgs.)
Excited for your other projects now. You got yourself a stalker
Good luck and keep making awsome Vns like this one in future.
Thank you so much Samantha! I'm so glad you enjoyed the game and I'm honored that it's one of your favorite vn so far <3 I'll keep working hard at the new games, thank you very much for the encouraging words!
Morishita wrote:Thank you so much for playing it! I'm happy to know that my story was able to help you feel better~ I really wanted to make something fluffy and simple so I'm so happy whenever I read that others feel better after playing the game. I'll keep trying my best to improve on my punctuations as well but I'm so grateful that my story had such a positive effect <3
I tend to stay up really long hours because I ended up re-playing the game too ^^; I try to look for errors but then I get caught up in the story then it gets late and I end up kind of hating myself too for getting pulled in and losing so much sleep <D You're very welcome and I'll make sure to keep working on improving myself for the next projects as well!
I also finished Edavine's route today. God, it was just so adorable! I wish I would come up with something coherent and constructive to say, but I'm far too mushy on the inside. I can't wipe the grin off my face, which in and of itself should be feedback enough. <3
Hahaha! XD Don't worry I have that brain hiccup as well when I can't find the right word that I want to say when I'm trying to talk about something really exciting and that's okay <D Thank you so much for whatever feedback that your able to give, it helps bring the happies
LliiraAnna wrote:The new CGs are so cute *.* The results of the voting poll were not surprising, though (I was "original" and voted for Acacia lol). There are still a couple of mistakes out there, like "any were" in Edavine's dialogue, but it doesn't really matter because of the well-written characters and interesting story.
Thank you for voting! I was actually surprised that Acacia got so many votes since usually the guys get more votes over the mc, or so that was what I thought ^^; I'll have to go back through the script and codes to make sure those silly mistakes are taken out, thank you so much for bringing that to my attention <3
KashyaCharsi wrote:Do you read TvTropes? I was thinking of characters like the tropes "Devoted to you", "The Woobie", "Fragile Flower", "Shrinking Violet", "Irrational hatred", "Smug Snake", "The narcissist" and "Spoiled brat". Those are my favorites.
I've peeked over at it but I'm not to familiar with TvTropes. Whenever I see certain lingo's in the otome community about different character types I usually have to google what they are because I get so confused or might not have a clue what it might be referring too ^^;
This is really amazing <3
I finished Damine's path/ending earlier and I LOVE IT SO MUCH. Damine is so dang hawt too. Everytime he makes 'moves' on Acacia, I just want to squeal, lols. And I can relate to Acacia a lot. I feel like I am her in the hopeless romantic side...just not in the attitude side xD
I still noticed a few misspellings though, like I noticed 'window seal' twice in Damine's path, and there are a few others. But I love this so much, it's funny and romantic and asdfghjkl. <3
Hahaha! I'm so happy that you enjoyed his path <3 Because of all the romance in his path it was both embarrassing but kind of fun to write, I was so embarrassed while typing it up but hopefully my embarrassment won't get in the way with my next stories since I plan on making more fluffy games too <D
Acacia is definitely a violent troll. I'm happy to get so many response about her personality, it helps me test the waters to see what sits well with people and want doesn't sit to well. Also thank you so much for the head's up about the window seal error, I remember sitting there trying to remember which seal it was then I got totally confused and I think my spell check kind of got fed up with me or just logged out on me ^^; but I can go back through the script to fix out those little errors <3 Thank you so much for playing it! I'm very thankful for all the feedbacks and comments~