Thank you so much for the compliment! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I also found a few typo's in the script when I went back through the story yesterday, so you can bet you bottom dollar that once I get fully "recharged" (sinkcer's and winks) then I'll go ahead and re-upload the corrected files and the two cg's that I wasn't able to upload with it the first time.Aseret wrote:This game was simply amazing <3 Honestly, words can’t even describe how much fun I had playing it. The dialogue was awesome and I experienced so many emotions. I found myself shedding a few tears at times, laughing like crazy since it was so hilarious at other times, then blushing like a “hopeless romantic” and just felt so giddy the entire time I was playing it. It took me more than 3 hours, I think around 4 hours, since I was so busy laughing and squealing xD
The story had an interesting premise and I felt myself drawn to their magical world. Moreover, the art was beautiful – the character sprites, backgrounds, layout, etc were all breathtaking. You are an incredible artist. I also loved the different expressions all the characters had; it was really well done.
All the characters had great depth. I adored the mother and sister. Acacia’s family had a really good dynamic. I LOVED the main character; so much better than most otome MCs! She had tons of spunk and I really admired her strong, tough character. Yet, at the same time, she was someone who dreamt of finding true love that was like a fairy tale, just like any other girl.
The two main guys were simply incredible, not to mention gorgeous I love how they like and accept Acacia for who she is (unlike Aeron *cough cough*). I liked Aeron at the beginning in Damien’s path and thought he was pretty cute.However, I hated him in Edavine’s path. He changed from some shy cute guy in one path to a controlling self-righteous freak in the other path. I didn’t like how he kept on passively, yet aggressively tried changing Acacia. Like how Edavine put it, Aeron’s like “this irritating, cynical little gerbil with a weird twitch” LOL.Anyways, I honestly can’t decide whether I liked Damien or Edavine more, since I loved both of them to pieces. They both had their great respective qualities that made me fall in love with both of them. For example, Damien was fiery passionate, while Edavine was heart-warmingly sweet. AHH my heart can’t take it anymore <3 For the poll, I’m extremely stuck picking between the two (why are you doing this to me lol, I wish you would do a special end scene for BOTH of them). I’ll pick Damien since there was more romance throughout his route. On the other hand, Edavine had most of his romance only at the end, since his path covered more background story. Plus, Edavine’s leading in the votes anyway. Still, for me, it really is an extremely close tie between the both of them
The music selection was perfect for the game and played at the right moments. The types of music you chose really fit with the different atmospheres of the game. P.S. You listed the name of the people who did the songs, but do you mind pm-ing me the names of all the songs you used, it’s taking me a while to find them and I enjoyed them Thanks!
If I had to make some criticism too… well, there were a quite a few typos and the like. However, truthfully, it didn’t matter to me at all – since the game was literally perfect anyway
Another teensy-weensy thing, I liked the 2 CGs in the game, but for Edavine’s CG, Acacia looks a bit too young and different from her sprite. Still, that’s a nitpicky thing and isn’t a big deal or anything. Also, I know you’re tired, and you need a well-deserved break. When you’re all “recharged” (*wink wink*), I hope you’ll update the game with the CGs you weren’t able to complete, and then add a CG gallery. I know I’m being greedy, but it’s your fault for making this exquisite game I still can’t get over the fact that you created such a lovely gem in just a month.
Overall, this was such a FANTASTIC visual novel and I have officially become a huge fan of yours. Even more than before, I really can’t wait for your future works! Thank you for making this wonderful game!
Your comment about the cg gallery made me smile and snicker to myself because it made me happy to know that my story is well liked enough that people want to see more artwork. Hopefully I'll be able to do a better job at making to sprites and cg's constant. Coming up with the designs within the month without having a chance to practice drawing them over and over like in a comic book kind of makes it hard to keep the consistent looking but I'll keep trying my best ^^; I think I know what it might be that is making her look so young in the cg because that was kind of frustrating me as well when I was working on it to but I couldn't quite put my finger on it Q^Q I think I was probably too tired to really tell at that time and about that until now so don't feel like your being nitpicky =^^= Thank you for reminding me because I was having the same thought while working on it but my tired self was starting to get in craze mode because of all the work and lack of rest ^^; I'll have to freshen myself up on how to code a cg gallery but if I can't figure it out I might need someones help but I'll try looking around the forum first like I've been doing before I break down and ask for help first ^^;
Also I plan on doing like a special bonus scene in the extra part for the characters to announce the winners and even respond to some of the comments said about them ^^ I thought that might be really fun thing =D So all the compliments that everyone's given Edavine, he's going to give a few people a response in return and so is Aeron and Damien and so on and so forth. I think that would be kind of fun don't you think? I'll wait to do that after the poll is over though ^^ I also thought that the poll might be a little bit hard but it's so interesting to see who will win =D
Thank you again Aseret! <3