Thank you for spreading the word about my little story to your friends!! It means a lot to have others help me spread the word about it ^^Akuni wrote:Wow, can I say this art is just GORGEOUS D: I am beyond impressed by the backgrounds especially D: I am mindblown, I could stare at them forever....I'm gonna play through all the endings and give a proper review.
Also, I got my friend to play too >:3 muahahahaha
So I played through the game. WOW~ It is incredibly detailed and well written. The story really is captivating, and instead of just leaving it at 'He lightly brushed my cheek' You described so perfectly her inner feelings about every situation, its like you experienced it yourself. It was really relateable though. I was kinda surprised she has so much insecurities.
About that bad ending though ._."" I kinda thought it would be you ended up with Aeron and had a crappy life, but I mean...ugly smelly troll works too.On the topic of trolls though, I love how you bring us back to reality by establishing that they're trolls. Like when that troll lady went haad on the momma D: and she dragged her out by the hair and I'm all D: WHAAAAT? and then its like, oh right she's a troll :3 its all good.
On a sidenote: I'm curious are you of Caribbean descent, idk I notice a lot of Caribbean artists draw like you/that style.
I cannot praise your backgrounds enough my god, I'm blown D: BLOWN~!
EDIT ON EDIT: Oh my god, how many times tonight am I gonna gush about this game xDD I have to say that when you were writing the fairy part I was thinking some weird, tiny fairy like cute like Aeron. I was not expecting chocolate hunkzilla to come out like that *g*
The story was very well developed, especially on Evine's part, more to why Acaia's the way she is and why she atcs the way she does. I think Demian's path really made her dreams come true, which is why I like his path. Yea he's a douche xD but, he's not really deep down, and I like that about him. Each guy has their own charms so I don't even think I could just choose one, they're both great and well developed...and I'm going to bed AHHH xD
It was a good play. ^^; ahem~
I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! I was really worried how everyone would take to the writing and storytelling so I did a lot of research and studying on different ways to described situations so it's really reassuring to see that I was able to pull it off <3
I really had to laugh to myself at your comment about Edavine being a chocolate hunkzilla! I'm sure he'd get a kick out of that one if he heard someone saying that about him also :3
As for me on my dad's side from what I know it's just normal brown/dark skinned descendant on my mothers side that's were it's more of a mixture. I don't know much about my grandmother's side clearly but my grandfather is half white half Indian but I'm not quite sure if my blood line would have much affect on my art style ^^; I guess because of what I'm use to seeing around me and what I grew up around that's what I draw the most so I draw a mixture of different things but thank you for asking ^^ My sisters know a lot more because I'm sure I'm missing a lot about my family history and what we're all mixed with but this is what I've heard from my grandfather with my own two ear so far ^^.
Thank you again so much for spreading word about my game! That really help encourage me to keep pressing on to make new one and finish up the other to that I have on the back burner right now so don't feel shy about leaving me any comments because I read them all and they really help brighten my day ^^ *I was a little under the weather that past few days but I'm doing much better now*