merdeamour wrote: Morishita wrote:
You're so sweet! I've always wanted to do something cute and adorable but things always seem to turn out differently ^^;
I think that's a very good idea, to only review things that you like to review. I think it makes a lot of since because if you didn't like the game then why go out of your way to review it and tare down someones hard work with your words? I think my plan with my games is just to keep them light and fluffy as possible and to continue to have fun with everything I do. I really enjoyed your review
Hopefully when I get my other games finished they'll interest you enough to be reviewed by you as well ^^
Yeah, because I don't think I'm good enough to be a critic or anything like that
And besides, my blog's aim is to spread the word about free VNs made by hardworking people (ilke *cough* you *cough*) I'm so happy to know that you enjoyed my review! <: I'm sure I'll enjoy your other games as well, just judging from this (:
I'm a little nervous about my other games. Seeing the feedback from this one I worry that other people might compare the other games to this one even though the other two are kind of different. With School Memories that one is going to be bittersweet and with Curse of the Caribbean that one has more drama and horror in it; so I am a little concerned but I think that as long as I like it then other people that have the same mindset as me will end up liking also ^^
I don't know where to begin....
Okay so I played this and got Damien's ending...
This VN actually made me cry :'(
I cried like 3 times while playing this.
And I swear I got butterflies every time.
Like literally, my emotions kept changing xD
Really really really great work on this.
I am like your new stalker now.
I will play every SINGLE game you make from now on xD
I just love this game and I am trying to get all the endings. Great job!
But oh, one more thing, sometimes you got your "their, they're, your, you're, there" mixed up
But other than that, GREAT story!
Thank you so much for playing his route <3 It's really nice to see Damine getting some nice comments as well! I was so nervous typing up the story then I worried that me being nervous would make the romance part of the story boring but I'm happy that it didn't at all <D
I hope to not disappoint with the other games but I'm happy to have a new game player/reader!
HoneyDust wrote:I've just finished playing through it. I thought the story was pretty sweet and yet funny. I ended up with fairy's (Edavine's?) ending first and then Damien's. There seemed like there was a couple spelling errors in the game, but nothing that took away from the story. The story itself was my favorite part of this game. I loved the art, though, especially the main menu and all of the sprites' expressions.
Thank you for playing through the whole story HoneyDust =D I'm really glad that you were able to enjoy the plot of the story as well as the art! I hope that you'll be able to enjoy the extra content once I get the rest of the files back from my proofreader and once the voting closes sometime in June then I'll update the old files with the new content <3
silverpikachu99 wrote:Alright~ First of all I want to say great job! I loved the art so much!! Plus the story line was very neat and creative- which made me like the story more.
Truthfully... The Damien ending made me cry ^^ It was just so cute and UGH!!!! I just loved everything about Damien!! I have't played the other routes yet, but am starting them very soon!
I look forward to another game you have created! So please continue making AWESOME renp'y games~
Overall I liked it a lot. The only thing that caught me off guard sometimes was the spelling errors... but it didn't take away from the story at all! So Bravo~
(p.s, I LOVED the design of the MC! She was so pretty in a different way- and I love different! She was a kick-ass mc and im glad to have the change instead of a quiet and nice character so thank you!!!!!!~)
Yay! Another Damien fan! I was starting to get a little worried that I didn't do a very good job with his route but I'm really glad to see that it's not really the case and it seems to depended on the person playing through it so Yay!
Feel free to let me know what your thoughts are on Edavine's path whenever you're able to finish his route <3 I'm also really gald that you liked Acacia design! She's my violent troll that's a closet princess hahaha!
I received and email for my second proofreader and I was informed that I she has four more files left and she will be contacting me again this Tuesday in regards to her progress with everything and with June coming up I'm getting more and more excited to soon release the extra content section. I hope you all will be able to enjoy it. I have a few things in mind for the extra content also just as a side note I also wanted to take some of the comments from this thread and from my site and have the characters give their response to what might have been said about them ^^ I think it will be very funny and light hearted and silly so again I hope everyone will be able to enjoy that and once that's finished the next project up will be School Memories.