A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]

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#91 Post by Ruubste » Mon May 20, 2013 1:10 pm

Gonna download it! Looks good :3
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#92 Post by Morishita » Tue May 21, 2013 9:33 pm

Ruubste wrote:Gonna download it! Looks good :3
Thank you for downloading it ^^ If you're able to find the time I hope you'll let me know what you think :3

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#93 Post by LliiraAnna » Wed May 22, 2013 12:07 am

Just played it some time ago and came back to say that I absolutely loved it) My favourite characters are probably Acacia and her mother, but the others were interesting as well.
As I was just randomly clicking on choises at first, I ended up doing Edavine before the other guy (yes, I know...). I liked how emotional the story becomes at certain moments, it's really awesome.
Thank you for making this game)

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#94 Post by Morishita » Wed May 22, 2013 6:51 am

LliiraAnna wrote:Just played it some time ago and came back to say that I absolutely loved it) My favourite characters are probably Acacia and her mother, but the others were interesting as well.
As I was just randomly clicking on choises at first, I ended up doing Edavine before the other guy (yes, I know...). I liked how emotional the story becomes at certain moments, it's really awesome.
Thank you for making this game)
You're very welcome and thank you for downloading it and coming back to give me feedback <3 I'm happy to know that you liked it!

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#95 Post by silverpikachu99 » Mon Jun 03, 2013 2:48 pm

Hey Morishita! So I finally played edavines route, and i'd to say- Bravo! But, I'm going to be honest here. I liked Edavine more then Damien ☆〜(ゝ。∂) Something about edavine made me like him a lot (probably because of his design. I LOVE your art!!)
I really liked how at the end he spread his fairy wings and flew up high with Acaica! It was just sooo cute!!
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#96 Post by Morishita » Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:18 pm

silverpikachu99 wrote:Hey Morishita! So I finally played edavines route, and i'd to say- Bravo! But, I'm going to be honest here. I liked Edavine more then Damien ☆〜(ゝ。∂) Something about edavine made me like him a lot (probably because of his design. I LOVE your art!!)
I really liked how at the end he spread his fairy wings and flew up high with Acaica! It was just sooo cute!!
Thank you so much for playing it <3 With the polls ending next week it looks like Edavine is going to win with a landslide haha ^^ so I've decided to go ahead and add on extra cg's to his path, here is a sneak peek of one of the new cg's for his path, can any of you guess which part of the story this cg might be for?
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I have 6 more cg's *Forgot about two of Damine's cg's ^^;* left to finish up and they usual take me about a 8 hours to finish which is about a normal work day.
Also for any of you who might have any other fanart or for those of you who have possible written up a silly little fanfic about the character feel free to show me because I plan on having the characters int.eract with some of the comments that a lot of you had typed about them and I also plan on showing their response to the fanart, so for anyone interested in having your favorite character thank you personally for your kind words, fanfic or fanart then shoot me a pm with whatever you might have created and I'll include you in the bonus section :3
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#97 Post by silverpikachu99 » Tue Jun 04, 2013 7:49 am

AHHHHH!!!! Oh my gosh it's so good! I will definently stalk this post again XD Good luck!
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#98 Post by Didules » Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:03 am

I love this game, the art is wonderful but the best point may be the characters: Acacia is great as a main character: she's strong, nice and so cool!
The boys are great too, but Acacia is still the best (Sorry Damine, Edavine) ^^
I'm glad to see there will be extra CGs, thanks a lot ^o^
Good luck!

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#99 Post by Maegalkarven » Tue Jun 04, 2013 10:09 pm

I just want to tell you, that your game is awesome. Really cool. Art is beautiful! Acacia and her family, and also boys are the best)

Sorry or my bad english^^"

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#100 Post by Ramunai » Sun Jun 09, 2013 2:46 am

I...love...this game! omfgwhkp, I was in TEARS by the time I reached the climax for both paths! Despite some typos, you've really done a great job! Seriously. I can't say that I'm biased to any one of the guys, I adore them both! Damien had me smiling like a madwomen while Edavine made me cry the hardest xD
I'm glad I took your suggestion at the main post to go through Damine's path first (though I almost ended up with Edavine on first try lol) because it truly did give me a feel of the whole story.
Thank you so much for creating this wonderful game! I had my doubts about playing it at first (thanks to that crap-eating troll in Merlin [the show] and Amanda Hocking's trilogy which I forgot what it's called) but I'm super glad I pushed them away and gave this game a go! <3
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#101 Post by Alera » Sun Jun 09, 2013 8:16 am

Aaah, I completed it some time ago, sorry for replying so late though. >w<b

It was a great game! Definitely one of my favs now! I really enjoyed playing it~

The story was amazing, I just had a lot of fun on both paths. And I loved the characters <3 Acacia is just pure awesomeness. XD It was great to experience the story from her point of view. If I had to choose an OTP, it would be a bit hard though! Both Damine and Edavine were so cool~
I think I felt a bit more connected to Damine though. I just have the feeling I got to spend more time with him while with Edavine's path, Aeron was there most of the time, and omg, Acacia even almost got married to him! XD (I didn't like him that much, sorry ;w; ) Though Edavine was really sweet and it was also kind of natural for them to get together~

Aaaah, told you I can't choose. XD

So yes, the whole story was just great. <3 I'd love to see more with these characters, I know that this was just a nice love story, but I have the feeling it could also become something more~

Like usual, I loved your art. *Q* There's always something really unique and original about it. <3 All the designs were cool and they fitted the characters really well!

I can't wait now for these new CGs and stuff!

Keep it up Morishita! >w<
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#102 Post by noeinan » Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:18 am

I have to agree that Acacia is my favorite character! >w< I haven't played all the routes, though, so I'll have to see how they influence my decision. Still, I thought she was awesome! It's pretty rare when I'm not rolling my eyes at the main character, but I think she commanded a lot of respect and was basically awesome.

Oh, by the way, the route I went down was Damien/Damine's and I took very detailed notes on spelling/grammar/phrasing. I know you mentioned on your site you were looking into getting it edited, but as I said I was very detailed. So if these notes will be helpful to you, please let me know and I'll send them.

[EDIT] Now have notes from all three routes.
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#103 Post by Mei Fuyukage » Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:36 am

Umm hi, could you please post a walkthrough. I'm having some trouble with the endings im getting. Thanks :)

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#104 Post by Morishita » Sat Jun 22, 2013 3:56 am

silverpikachu99 wrote:AHHHHH!!!! Oh my gosh it's so good! I will definently stalk this post again XD Good luck!
Hahaha! Thank you for keeping an eye on my thread <3 I'll try to keep it updated as best as I can ^^;
Didules wrote:I love this game, the art is wonderful but the best point may be the characters: Acacia is great as a main character: she's strong, nice and so cool!
The boys are great too, but Acacia is still the best (Sorry Damine, Edavine) ^^
I'm glad to see there will be extra CGs, thanks a lot ^o^
Good luck!
You're welcome and Thank you for playing through the story and leaving me a comment <D
Maegalkarven wrote:I just want to tell you, that your game is awesome. Really cool. Art is beautiful! Acacia and her family, and also boys are the best)

Sorry or my bad english^^"
Thank you for playing the game, I'm happy to know that you enjoyed it and don't worry I struggle pretty badly with English as well. I've had to take speech classes as a child but I still struggle with a lot of things even as and adult. I think English is just plain difficult ^^; Even though it's my native tongue but I still find it very confusing ^^;
Ramunai wrote:I...love...this game! omfgwhkp, I was in TEARS by the time I reached the climax for both paths! Despite some typos, you've really done a great job! Seriously. I can't say that I'm biased to any one of the guys, I adore them both! Damien had me smiling like a madwomen while Edavine made me cry the hardest xD
I'm glad I took your suggestion at the main post to go through Damine's path first (though I almost ended up with Edavine on first try lol) because it truly did give me a feel of the whole story.
Thank you so much for creating this wonderful game! I had my doubts about playing it at first (thanks to that crap-eating troll in Merlin [the show] and Amanda Hocking's trilogy which I forgot what it's called) but I'm super glad I pushed them away and gave this game a go! <3
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, even with all it's flaws ^^; When I was writing up Damine's path I was smiling a lot and got really embarrassed and was really shy to release the game because of all the mush but I'm happy to see that you enjoyed it ^^ I still am a little curious as to why I received so many comments about people crying because of the story ^^; Are they tears of sadness or from laughter? Either way I'm still really happy that the story had such a strong impact like that. I was a little worried that know one would like it but I'm so happy to see that so many people still enjoy it!
I haven't heard of Amanda Hocking's trilogy but I'm glad that you pushed past that to play the game and I'm even happier that you stopped by to leave me a comment too <D
Alera wrote:Aaah, I completed it some time ago, sorry for replying so late though. >w<b

It was a great game! Definitely one of my favs now! I really enjoyed playing it~

The story was amazing, I just had a lot of fun on both paths. And I loved the characters <3 Acacia is just pure awesomeness. XD It was great to experience the story from her point of view. If I had to choose an OTP, it would be a bit hard though! Both Damine and Edavine were so cool~
I think I felt a bit more connected to Damine though. I just have the feeling I got to spend more time with him while with Edavine's path, Aeron was there most of the time, and omg, Acacia even almost got married to him! XD (I didn't like him that much, sorry ;w; ) Though Edavine was really sweet and it was also kind of natural for them to get together~

Aaaah, told you I can't choose. XD

So yes, the whole story was just great. <3 I'd love to see more with these characters, I know that this was just a nice love story, but I have the feeling it could also become something more~

Like usual, I loved your art. *Q* There's always something really unique and original about it. <3 All the designs were cool and they fitted the characters really well!

I can't wait now for these new CGs and stuff!

Keep it up Morishita! >w<
Don't feel too bad about not being able to pick which one is your favorite because right now I've claimed both of them as my favorites. It was a lot of fun working on Damine's route because of all the romance but it was also a lot of fun working on Edavine's because of the drama ^^
I'm happy to see that you liked my art! I get a lot of comments about how my art style looks different, though I'm not to sure how it looks different but either way I'm still happy that it's well liked so I have no complaints over here =D Thank you so much for playing and for leaving me feedback! I'll keep trying to do my best, I have so much more that I still need to learn but it helps so much to get such encouraging comments like these <3
daikiraikimi wrote:I have to agree that Acacia is my favorite character! >w< I haven't played all the routes, though, so I'll have to see how they influence my decision. Still, I thought she was awesome! It's pretty rare when I'm not rolling my eyes at the main character, but I think she commanded a lot of respect and was basically awesome.

Oh, by the way, the route I went down was Damien/Damine's and I took very detailed notes on spelling/grammar/phrasing. I know you mentioned on your site you were looking into getting it edited, but as I said I was very detailed. So if these notes will be helpful to you, please let me know and I'll send them.

[EDIT] Now have notes from all three routes.
Please forgive me for not getting back to you sooner, I've been so swamped with work that I'm not just responding to my messages but feel free to shoot me a pm or email me with your notes and I'll be happy to compare them to the files to make sure that I catch all the mistakes before I upload the polished version. I really appreciate the help <3 Thank you so much!
Mei Fuyukage wrote:Umm hi, could you please post a walkthrough. I'm having some trouble with the endings im getting. Thanks :)
Ack! I should have responded to this message sooner, I'm not sure if you still need the walkthrough but if you do here it is below:
For Damine's Path:
Make sure with the first choice you pick not to tie your hair up and just go outside as you are.
The second time make sure you go to the pond in the forest to relax.
The third time make sure you stay put when the others come into the clearing.
For Edavine's Path:
Make sure pick the choice that tells you to grab something to tie up your hair.
The second time make sure you go to the fairy forest to relax.
The third time make sure you get up and leave when the others come into the clearing.
I believe those are all the choices to help you get each guy's ending but if you do find one that I missed just make sure that you go to the place where the guys are at the most.
You can meet Damine in the forest by the pond and Edavine in the fairy forest. I hope that helps ^^;

Update time!:
I posted up a blog post on my site about this but I wanted to finish up another cg and post up and update on here as well. I have about 4 more cg's left until I can upload them into the game and re-upload the polished version shortly after that. Here is a sneak peek of the second cg that I finished of Edavine:
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I finished working on this during my livestream on the 21st but I plan on starting another livestream of the next 2 cg's hopefully soon. For those of you who want to watch the livestream of the rest of the cg illustrations then feel free to stop by my site to see the video ^^ or you can stop by the channel itself:
http://www.livestream.com/smorishitastudio
I'll stop back again to post up the next sneak peek of the new cg once I finish it up. Thank you everyone once again for your kind words and for your patience! It really means so much to me that words can't really express so I'll just show my appreciation by trying to better myself with my art and writing so that I can continue to improve with my game/story creations

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Re: A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]

#105 Post by noeinan » Sun Jun 23, 2013 3:21 am

Morishita wrote:
daikiraikimi wrote:I have to agree that Acacia is my favorite character! >w< I haven't played all the routes, though, so I'll have to see how they influence my decision. Still, I thought she was awesome! It's pretty rare when I'm not rolling my eyes at the main character, but I think she commanded a lot of respect and was basically awesome.

Oh, by the way, the route I went down was Damien/Damine's and I took very detailed notes on spelling/grammar/phrasing. I know you mentioned on your site you were looking into getting it edited, but as I said I was very detailed. So if these notes will be helpful to you, please let me know and I'll send them.

[EDIT] Now have notes from all three routes.
Please forgive me for not getting back to you sooner, I've been so swamped with work that I'm not just responding to my messages but feel free to shoot me a pm or email me with your notes and I'll be happy to compare them to the files to make sure that I catch all the mistakes before I upload the polished version. I really appreciate the help <3 Thank you so much!

Cool, sending you a PM now. :3
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