Apology project: Medieval mystery

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Re: Apology project: Medieval mystery

#31 Post by Taleweaver »

farvardin wrote:I've just finished this great game!

- I liked the graphics, music and mood very much (I'm quite found of medieval Germany)
As a native German, so am I :)
farvardin wrote:- The reference to the "dollars" is much out of place and out of time! (Or was it happenning at the Disney's castle :lol: ?)
As faithful Jake already said: "dollars" is English for "Taler", the currency in those days.
farvardin wrote:- I wished I got a native linux / mac os x version instead of using a windows emulator to play it. The linux launcher was not working for such an "old" game http://www.renpy.org/wiki/renpy/Linux_Launcher
Yeah, shoulda thought of that before. I promise to be good next time though :)
farvardin wrote:- Probably I don't read fast, but it took me more than 1 hour to play and finish it. (so it's more than the 30 mins playtime announced on http://www.renai.us/game/loyalkinsman.shtml )
Thank you. I'm a fast reader, so I have a difficult time judging on the speed others read.
farvardin wrote:- I'm happy I didn't read the introduction text on the previous link, because it spoils much of the surprise I think.
You mean, like the aforementioned death? Actually, the surprise begins after that - everything before is just the introduction.
farvardin wrote:- I think the difficulty is very well managed, I had to replay some parts a few time to find the solution, but it was not annoying at all.
That was the general idea. In retrospect, I think I should have made the situation that leads to Gunther's untimely death at the hands of the true murderer less transparent, maybe by having some "unnamed shadow" listen during the conversation that leads to his demise. Aside from that, I wanted to give the player a fair chance at guessing the right person. Seems to have worked.
farvardin wrote:- This story is not very happy, but the mystery is thrilling and well managed. The text is very well written. The first part was quite long, but a good introduction.
And necessary for people not familiar with the setting to understand the situation Gunther is in. Much of the mystery only works in the context of the medieval setting, like a twelve-year-old protagonist who is treated by an adult in many respects, or the situation with commoners in high places at a noble court. The story is not very happy, but the Middle Ages rarely were.
farvardin wrote:- I liked how Gunther invented absurds stories when he hadn't sufficent proofs at the end.
And that is, in my opinion, the part that is MOST medieval of the entire game. The Middle Ages were very good at producing the strangest explanations for unexplainable things, from the devil causing sickness and disease to dragons and basilisks eating unsuspecting peasants. Gunther is a child of his time and not different in that respect.

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Re: Apology project: Medieval mystery

#32 Post by usul »

Did you find a place to upload a Linux version? Can you upload it to the forum?
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Re: Apology project: Medieval mystery

#33 Post by Lipi »

Hi,
I was playing The Loyal Kinsman in GOS linux, and I always get this failure:

ďťżI'm sorry, but an exception occured while executing your Ren'Py

script.



NameError: name 'dissolv' is not defined



While executing game script on line 1765 of C:\Dokumente und Einstellungen\Götz T. Heinrich\Desktop\renpy-6.1.1\kinsman/game/script.rpy.



-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------



File "Z:\home\lipi\games\kinsman\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 195, in bootstrap

File "Z:\home\lipi\games\kinsman\renpy\main.py", line 297, in main

File "Z:\home\lipi\games\kinsman\renpy\main.py", line 99, in run

File "Z:\home\lipi\games\kinsman\renpy\execution.py", line 97, in run

File "Z:\home\lipi\games\kinsman\renpy\ast.py", line 641, in execute

File "Z:\home\lipi\games\kinsman\renpy\python.py", line 887, in py_eval

File "<none>", line 1, in <expression>

NameError: name 'dissolv' is not defined



While executing game script on line 1765 of C:\Dokumente und Einstellungen\Götz T. Heinrich\Desktop\renpy-6.1.1\kinsman/game/script.rpy.



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Re: Apology project: Medieval mystery

#34 Post by Aleema »

Wow. I must say, I enjoyed this game. I was sucked right into the story, which is hard for me in some interactive fiction. I immediately felt Gunther's highs and lows ... it was a wonderful mystery and the atmosphere was perfect! I admit, I was the most intrigued by the Margarete & Gunther backstory. It added so much depth to the relationship. Thanks for a great read! :)

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#35 Post by Lucifiel »

Hmmm... a work by the person who did Metropolitan Blues? Cool... strange how life always leads you to unknown paths. :)

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#36 Post by Taleweaver »

The very same person also wrote "Daemonophilia" and "The Dreaming", so if you want to check them out...?
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#37 Post by Lucifiel »

I see. Just one thing, though... Daemon is on Megaupload which blocks my country. -__-;; Any idea where else I could get it? :)

Oh nvm... it's on Cnet.com -__-;; <--- Bakayaro

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Re: Apology project: Medieval mystery

#38 Post by Taleweaver »

Scriptwriter and producer of Metropolitan Blues
Creator of The Loyal Kinsman
Scriptwriter and director of Daemonophilia
Scriptwriter and director of The Dreaming
Scriptwriter of Zenith Chronicles
Scriptwriter and director of The Thirteenth Year
Scriptwriter and director of Romance is Dead
Scriptwriter and producer of Adrift
More about me in my blog
"Adrift - Like Ever17, but without the Deus Ex Machina" - HigurashiKira

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