Summer Paradise (GxB)

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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#46 Post by xKairi » Tue May 07, 2013 8:07 am

Cool! I'm a Filipina so I'll try this!

Just one question though (not so important!): since this is set in the Phils, how come they don't have black hair? xD HAHA I understand it's hard to find free sprites :))

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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#47 Post by Kokoro Hane » Tue May 07, 2013 2:32 pm

xKairi wrote:Cool! I'm a Filipina so I'll try this!

Just one question though (not so important!): since this is set in the Phils, how come they don't have black hair? xD HAHA I understand it's hard to find free sprites :))
LOL the same would apply to anime =P
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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#48 Post by greenheartnellie » Tue May 07, 2013 2:40 pm

Ran08 wrote:Hahaha, which part was that? :) Most of her conversations with Mark are serious. :) Haha! I think I overlooked that again, but I'm glad there's a part like that!
Well actually, Mark was serious while asking Casey but the way she answered him just made me laugh xD
I forgot what day this is, but this is when she went to the park to ask Mark to the dance, but I guess this is not on Mark's path (True ending, maybe?). First off, her narration already made me laugh: Heart thumping wildly, hair flying... uhh... weirdly, and... err... feet thrashing impatiently.

Then the little convo that I meant:

Mark: What are you doing?
Casey: Huh? I'm... doing nothing.
M: You went here for that? Because you're not doing anything?
C: No! I went here because I'm doing nothing.
M: ...
C: It's not that I'm doing anything, I'm doing something.
M: Which is?
C: Nothing.
M: ... I don't understand you. At all.

Haha so that's it, I just wanna show you xD and for a while I also thought this little convo didn't happen because I kept skipping and couldn't find it haha but turned out I was right, it was her convo with Mark :D
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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#49 Post by Ran08 » Wed May 08, 2013 1:34 am

@EMary852
Thanks for the walkthrough! Was Mark's good ending hard to get? :)
By the way, if you chose the other option instead of "Why didn't you hit all of them?", you would have gotten another point with Mark. But seeing that you already answered all the correct answers for him, you'd already gotten so many good points that it wouldn't have mattered in the slightest. ^^
Thank you very much for playing!

@xKairi
Awesome! Haha, I hope you'll like it. I sprinkled a few Filipino culture in this VN. Hahaha. ^^ And, aww, yeah. I did my best to connect the story with the backgrounds though.
The rainy scene with Arvin only came into existence because one of my backgrounds has a rainy variation! =)) It would be a waste if I didn't use it. ^^ Also, the scene with the stuff toys? That was because that background had stuff toys in it!
However, with the free sprites, I couldn't do much. :( Sorry. Hahaha, I still hope you'll like it though. :)

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Hmm? Do you mean when the characters have differently colored hair that don't match? :)

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Hahaha! That would have been crazy if you only imagined it! But yeah, now that I think about it, Mark is sort of funny there. Teehee! ^^
Hmm, I think... just before I wrote that scene, I was reading "Alamat Ng Gubat" (Legend of the Forest) by Bob Ong (one of my favorite Filipino authors) and I was inspired by one scene there. Hahaha. =)
I'm really glad you found it funny. I tend to be overly dramatic in my stories for no reason at all, so I was really worried about that one. Haha. I'm such an optimistic person in real life, but I like writing sad stories. Wahahaha. ^^

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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#50 Post by D`Angel18 » Thu May 09, 2013 5:41 am

I had fun playing this game, it was really cute and fluffy. It really has the Filipino touch/culture (by the way I am also a Filipino :D ). All the games you mentioned made me reminisce my childhood days :lol: .
by the way kilig in English is hoity-toity (I used google translate) :lol:

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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#51 Post by Ran08 » Sat May 11, 2013 8:23 am

@D`Angel18
Awww, thank youuu~
I'm glad that you noticed the Filipino touch that I tried to incorporate into the story. :) Haha, and yeah, they made me nostalgic as well! ^^ Haha, really? Ooooh, I never knew that. I like the word kilig better though. Wahaha.

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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#52 Post by MegumiSatou07 » Sat May 11, 2013 9:41 pm

Awesome~! I'm Filipino so I played it. :3
I got Arvin.. :lol:
I'll be looking forward to your upcoming visual novels. ^^
Arvin is so handsome, I really like his ending. Good job. :)
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#53 Post by D`Angel18 » Tue May 14, 2013 11:30 am

Ran08 wrote:@D`Angel18
Awww, thank youuu~
I'm glad that you noticed the Filipino touch that I tried to incorporate into the story. :) Haha, and yeah, they made me nostalgic as well! ^^ Haha, really? Ooooh, I never knew that. I like the word kilig better though. Wahaha.

Thank youuu! (Warning: Advertisement. Haha!) I hope you'll like my other project, Seasons of Love too. Hahaha! ^^ Again, thanks a bunch!

:D No problem. I know, kilig is much more appealing to me than it's English equivalent (please don't hate me English if I ever said that :lol: )

Now I'm off to read your other project *reading the Seasons of Love* :3
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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#54 Post by Ran08 » Wed May 15, 2013 1:58 am

@MegumiSatou07
Awww, thank you! I'm glad you liked him and his ending. ^^

@D`Angel18
I know right?! Haha. The English equivalent doesn't sound too good to say. Hahaha. (English, please don't hate me either. Lol)
Thank youuu! It's far from complete, but I hope you'll like it nonetheless. :)

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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#55 Post by cookiestruck » Wed May 15, 2013 10:25 am

I downloaded the game and it was awesome! :3
And I absolutely love Vaughn. I have a thing for older guys to pursue.. >.>
Not to mention I love his ending too ^^

I went through almost all their endings (I think). Oh God. Someone give me a medal now.

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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#56 Post by Ran08 » Thu May 16, 2013 2:11 am

Thank you cookiestruck!
Haha, he's only about a year or two older than you though. :) But I'm really glad you liked his ending!
I hope you got his neutral one, which is also the true end for this story, if I made it a kinetic novel.
Wahaha. ^^
Oooooh, congratulations! Here, have a cookie-- no, a jar of cookies along with your medal. :)

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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#57 Post by Nutella_Sandwhich » Fri Jun 21, 2013 10:03 am

Is Vaughn and Mark, like...inspired from Harvest Moon?
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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#58 Post by NoahSindri » Mon Jul 08, 2013 3:47 pm

This game is great!
I really like it^^
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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#59 Post by Kokoro Hane » Mon Jul 08, 2013 7:16 pm

I ended up getting James without even trying. He was sweet! I also liked when they were telling stories about the aswang and similiar creatures (a story with those things in it would make an excellent VN in itself~)

The game felt kinda short, but a lot of fun. I will try out some of the other routes~
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Re: Summer Paradise (GxB)

#60 Post by Mghrabiya » Sun Jul 14, 2013 7:59 pm

Got all the routes <3 <3 loved this game It was superrrrr adorable and oh my Arvin & Vaughn <3 Arvins lil bad boy part <3 <3 *heart melts like butter* LOLOLOL *back to reality* I really liked this and cant wait to see new projects from you. <3

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